My Aggron Picture

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    Well, it's not the best but it's the best I made. I like the pose!


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    Nice work, Tedd! I like the pose, too. It looks like the sort of thing it should do in Colosseum, the same as Machamp does! :D

    I see a little colour leakage here and there (on the tail for example). A white brush or the eraser should correct this with no problem ^_^ You seem to be using layers which is great! The shading looks good, and is in the right places. The only real crit I can make is the colour leakage and that the lines look a bit shaky (if you're drawing freehand, it might be an idea to use the pen or line tool instead). :)

    Hope that helps - and keep up the great work! :D

    --FG
     
    i like the pose too, its a hard concept to draw, but try using smaller lines, but i like the shaky shading on the head, but on other spots it a little to shaky
     
    cewl if you mad a drawing-Based game this would be nice! :D
     
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    Slight anatomical problem: Aggron's upper jaw is not as long as its helmet. It should be about the same size as its lower jaw. Also the tail seems squashed when it goes behind the leg.
    Other than that, pretty cool.

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    A VERY cool pose, and the coloring is nice. The shading is awesomely cell-like, and it's a nice fanart of Aggron. :) However, there are only a few spots for improvement, like making sure you fill in all the coloring spots (there just a few white spots), and the lineart is kinda shaky. But a very cool fanart. I love it =3
     
    that is very good and nice pose. 9.5/10
     
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