My First Competitive Team(OU)

[ray236]

can u guys rate my team im new to competitive battling so i dont know if this is a solid team

tyranitar(Adamant)
item:choice band
25/31/18/20/17/31
EV'S:252 HP / 252 Attack / 4 Special Defense
-stone edge
-crunch
-fire punch
-e-quake

lucario(Naive)
item:life orb
20/31/15/29/10/31
EV'S:252 attack,252 speed,4 hp
-blaze kick
-extreme speed
-close combat
-swords dance

salamence(Adamant)
item:?
EV'S:252 attack,180 sp. defense,76 defense
31/30/15/18/20/31
-d-dance
-outrage
-roost
-aerial ace

gengar(Modest)
item:?
31/15/10/31/17/31
EV'S:252 atk,252 speed,4 hp
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Explosion

Gyrados(adamant)
item:?
(dont know exact iv's but i know their good)
EV'S:4 hp,252 attack,252 speed
-aqua tail
-e-quake
-avalanche
-outrage

dont know about last one
thinking about
subpunching/subseeding breloom
Breloom(adamant)
item:toxic orb(ability : poison heal)
EV'S:44 HP / 252 Attack / 212 Speed
~ Substitute
~ Leech Seed
~ Focus Punch
~ dont know(maybe:spore/seed bomb/giga drain/drain punch)



-this is my first team and im new to competitive battling
so can u tell me if this is the right move set/ev's/item

please tell me if this is any good

 

[Dark Azelf]

can u guys rate my team im new to competitive battling so i dont know if this is a solid team

tyranitar(Adamant)
item:choice band
25/31/18/20/17/31
EV'S:176 HP / 252 Attack / 80 Speed
-stone edge
-crunch
-Pursuit
-e-quake / Aqua Tail

Pursuit is one of its biggest selling points, since they cant switch out. Fire Punch is petty useless tbh. Aqua Tail >> Earthquake imo, so you can beat Hippowdon and freinds. 80 speed evs beats most Skarmory so they cant Roost on your stone edges.

lucario(Jolly)
item:life orb
20/31/15/29/10/31
EV'S:252 attack,252 speed,4 hp
-Stone Edge / Ice Punch
-extreme speed
-close combat
-swords dance

Close Combat already OHKO's steels so no need for Blaze Kick. Jolly>> Naive since you arent using any special attacks.

salamence(Adamant)
item:Leftovers
EV'S: 80 hp / 252 att / 176 speed.
31/30/15/18/20/31
-d-dance
-outrage
-Fire Fang
-Earthquake

Bulky mence is poop in the current metagame. Use sweeper DD Mence.

gengar (Modest)
item:Choice Scarf
31/15/10/31/17/31
EV'S:
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast
-Will-o-Wisp

Put a choice scarf on this, because you lose to foe DD Gyara etc pretty badly, so use this to revenge kill it. Will-o-Wisp is a great move and i highly reccomend it, it eases up on prediction with common switch ins such as Scizor, Tyranitar, Metagross, Jirachi etc.

Gyrados(adamant)
item:?
(dont know exact iv's but i know their good)
EV'S:4 hp,252 attack,252 speed
-aqua tail
-e-quake
-avalanche
-outrage


Breloom(adamant)
item:toxic orb(ability:Poison heal)
EV'S:44 HP / 252 Attack / 212 Speed
~ Substitute
~ Leech Seed
~ Focus Punch
~ Spore

Comments in bold.

Right, well firstly you lack a special sweeper (gengar doesnt count). So put one over that Gyarados since its doing nothing. This will also give your team a bit of strategy e.g you Pursuit Blissey or something with CB Tar and your special sweeper will have a heck of an easier time sweeping.

Next, you lack Stealth Rock. A must for ANY team, it helps ensure Lucario gets those OHKO's and that your team can actually sweep. Since Breloom isnt doing much, i reccomend putting a SR user >> it.

→ An explanation of each Pokémon's moveset, strategy, and function(s) on the team

Why? If the team raters do not know what each Pokémon is trying to accomplish, then they will probably question the Pokémon's spot on the team (especially with sets that aren't very common).

Also do this for me and it would be great, thanks.

 

[ray236]

Comments in bold.

Right, well firstly you lack a special sweeper (gengar doesnt count). So put one over that Gyarados since its doing nothing. This will also give your team a bit of strategy e.g you Pursuit Blissey or something with CB Tar and your special sweeper will have a heck of an easier time sweeping.

Next, you lack Stealth Rock. A must for ANY team, it helps ensure Lucario gets those OHKO's and that your team can actually sweep. Since Breloom isnt doing much, i reccomend putting a SR user >> it.



Also do this for me and it would be great, thanks.

i am fairly new to this and i dont know many good stratagies
but i was thinking about adding skarbliss
or just add gliscor cus gliscor works well with t-tar(i think)

(oh and for the rules im sorry im still new to this)