My First Spritings =]

pokemon xd said:
I wish i could splice good XD those are some good devamps ya got there and the fake's look pretty good also.
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Thanks so much! ^^ (I'm surprised you looked at my devamps as well. XD)
 
ShinjisLover said:
Well, I was practicing splicings, and I this is the first ever splice I made. =3 It's Garchomp and Ninetales! Hope you like it. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!

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I dont want to be mean... but.

You need to be able to change and/or remove the lines. The red and blue body look really bad because theres a DARK red where it meets the blue, and the blue isnt dark there either. Unless he/she's bleeding there; it shouldnt happen. Your wing thingy looks really weird but thats probably personal preference.
I dont like it how the back of the neck is on the second shade of red, but the back of the legs are the fourth shade. dont be afraid to experiment changing shades..

Before you start splicing, try stuff like changing light position on already-made sprites. (i.e. if the light is from the top right, then change it to bottom left, top left, or something like that) That way youll get used to making your own shades and shading regions
 
^ I agree with what was said above. If you are too scared of mixing up lots of different colors, and making it too bad, then don't... but your sprites would look better if you did.
 
eccentric d i f f e r e n t. odd. said:
The red and blue body look really bad because theres a DARK red where it meets the blue, and the blue isnt dark there either.
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That's actually how it was on the Garchomp sprite.

Other than that, though, thanks for your review! =] I'll keep it in mind next time.

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So, I was screwing around with some of the sprites (up to Nidoking) and I just kept taking limbs and whatnot off of the Pokémon. So, some of them are stupid (okay, all of them at least look stupid. =P), but I hope you enjoy. XD

This one is my favorite. It's a Batafurii with no wings.
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This one is stupid, duh. XP But I think it looks funny. It's a Biidoru with no limbs in general.
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Aabokku with no patterns.
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Fushigidane with no bulb. I lol'd at this one. XD
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Kameiru with no tail or ears. The shell was hard to redraw.
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Koratta with no whiskers or tail. . It looks like a gerbil. XDD
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Nidokingu with no horns.
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Nidokuin with no. . A lot of things. =P
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Onisuzume with no tail, feet, or beak. XD I couldn't think of anything to do with this one.
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Pijon with no legs, tail feathers, and. . Those things that were on its head. . >.>
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Pikachuu with no ears, tail, or cheek pouches.
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Rizaadon with no wings. . It looks like an overgrown lizard.
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Sandopan with no hide or claws.
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Told ya they were stupid. XP
 
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So got new spritings to show, but I don't know if I'm allowed to double post to do so (since I'm author), or if that's just the fanfic forum. . =( So. . Sorry if I can't, but there'd be no other way to get them up. =P So, here we go!

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Who's that Pokémon? =OO

Here's a Koratta revamp. =]
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Here's a devamp of Itomaru (night time)
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Here's another devamp of Itomaru (day time)
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I'll be back with more recolorations, devamps, et cetera! ^^
 
Here's your blue Pikachu! =P It's a real life Pikablu! XD
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Well, this is the first time I did a battle screen. It took me. . Three hours. . >.> *cough*
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Thunder Disks
Type: Electric
Pwr.: 66
Acc.: 95%
PP: 15 (max. 25)
Category: Special
Contest Category: Cool
Description: Hits opponent with electric disks 1-5 times in a row.
In-Depth Description: In a double battle, both opponents are hit. This attack may raise the Sp. Atk 1 level.
Contest: A highly appealing move.
Appeal: ♥♥♥♥
Jam: 0
Super Contest: Badly startles all Pokémon if the user went first.
Appeal: ♥♥♥

(Man, I do not even know what happened, but I deleted one of my posts on accident. So here it is. XD)
 
Yeah, pikablu.. xD I ment in the game x) But unfortnaly they dousn't exist :( It's good that we can sprite them.. :p
But seriously, it's unfair that pikachu's shiuny-color is very like the normal..

Great battle screen!
 
Thanks for the reviews everyone. I've done another splice (though I'm still practicing) and this time it's Biidaru and Suriipu. ^^ It kinda looks like an elephant. . With a beaver tail. XP

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Made another splice. I'm trying to experiment with colors like I've been told around Iibui's collar, but it didn't go over so well. . =(

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Hmm. A couple of the recolours look like you used the ugly default Paint colours down the bottom. There's a general spriting rule that says don't do that.
Most of the other one, I can't C+C! They're really nice!

Oh, maybe use the regular, English names when describing them? People, like me, won't know which Pokemon you're talking about.. ^^;
 
Thanks for the advice/compliments. ^^

I made another battle screen. This time, it took a little less time.

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Firkit - Fire-type Cheetah-like Pokémon my friend made-up. Back and front sprites taken from Parushian.

Lerrow - Grass-type Hawk-like Pokémon my friend made-up. Front sprite taken from Pijon.
 
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I like this the best. However, I just don't like seeing Articuno in orange. It definitely doesn't fit with it's name of appearance.

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This looks like a Shiny version of Stantler. Lol.
 
I've done a few PokéChao! ^^

This is my favorite, it's Otachi:
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Suriipu
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This one was my first ever PokéChao. It's Naetoru
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Here's Pyi
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And this is the last one. It's Pippi
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You should edit those splices+pokechao into your first post.=p

They're really good and when people only look at the first post, they won't see any of your OTHER work.
 
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