My Work

[$H-GAGE$]

hey i have done some...kind of story.
i only want what u guys say about my work...the sprites used of pokemon and balls are NOT made by me.i think its really bad as comparred to u ppl.well, i also dont know which software to use.i used paint.
link:https://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c362/Beyblader_Humza/Story3.jpg,https://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c362/Beyblader_Humza/Story4.jpg<<<text is small so save it in your computer and zoom and check.sorry about this.ill attach these files later so the text wont be smudged...
PARTS
first thumbnail:part1
second thumbnail:part2
first link:part3
second link:part4
more will be attached when completed
some work is attached and some is a link plz check
looking forward for compliments
thanks, Beyblader_Humza

 

[Karasu]

Doesn't this go in Sprite Comics?

 

[Signomi]

Indeed, this goes in the Sprite Comics forum, on account of it being some sort of comic with sprites...

-moves-

 

[Shadowburn]

You need to seriously need to edit, and try to give us a better idea of who they are, where their from, u know.. the basic storyline. 6/10:paranoid:

 

[$H-GAGE$]

heh, i ws bored so thought to try this stuff.i ws not actually trying to make a story but it jst came up to being.i dont care so much how much bad remarks or points u give me, yeah on the other hand if u give me good remarks or points i would feel happy for myself because this is not wat i ws trying to make in the first place the story jst came up.

 

[Kaneda Morspeed]

Lawl. I voted for the LAAAAAST option. Anyways, one thing, is it is entertaining to my funny senses. That's a good thing, right?

 

[$H-GAGE$]

wats so funny????????????????

 

[Signomi]

Beyblader_Humza: Please do not spam like that, if you want to direct a question towards a certain member, try Private Messaging them :)

 

[Recknin]

dude you need allot of work 2/10

 

[Roy-Kun]

dang... this reminds me to that program of Adult swim... meh

I don't like it, it really needs a lot of work x.x

3/10