Gelius3
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I added some more information. Hope is enough now. And changed the moveset.
mmm, it's definitely improved! i'd just like you to go for it a little harder, since there's still some strange grammar and unexplained details going on. sorry for being hard on you, but i think it would be more fun for you to play with a well-fleshed out character. c:I added some more information. Hope is enough now. And changed the moveset.
hi! thanks for your interest and your SU! you will be accepted based on this - i really like how you incorporated Lotad's biology - but i would like all player characters to have an actual name at least. i realise this may be a bit hypocritical with regard to the nameless village cast, but i'll probably end up giving them names soon too, haha! ( ´ ▽ ` )ゞName: Lotad
welcome! c:Name: Damien
thanks! i like your character already too, so you are also accepted! it's great how you incorporated the hunger aspect when moving through walls too (。 >艸<).So without any further ado, here it is! The SU for Fogg, the oddball Gastly(get it? 'case he's a ball of gas, you know)
yes, the history section wasn't meant to be particularly long, but i would like players to at least have thought of their characters' roots, which you've done perfectly i'd say. if you'd like, i could even incorporate some of the locations you mentioned into one of our missions - though that would take a while then, because as you said, the Ember Jungle lies on the other side of the continent from Haven, hehe.Since our characters are starting at level ten, I'm assuming they're pretty young, so my history section is turning out rather short. I hope that's okay? (I could flesh it out with meaningless details, buuut . . . well they're not that important, hence "meaningless," haha)
EDIT: well here it is. short and to the point. at least, that was my intention. hopefully that's how it turned out?
About unexplained details i will get that improved... But about the grammar, i am not from England or America. Yeah...
Edit: I think i fixed the grammar errors and explained some details.
I was curious about how evolution will work. Will it be at the designated levels, nor will there be certain places?
Name: Cafer
One question, are you going to add more mystery dungeons?
yes, the history section wasn't meant to be particularly long, but i would like players to at least have thought of their characters' roots, which you've done perfectly i'd say. if you'd like, i could even incorporate some of the locations you mentioned into one of our missions - though that would take a while then, because as you said, the Ember Jungle lies on the other side of the continent from Haven, hehe.
Species: Buneary
hi! thanks for your interest and your SU! you will be accepted based on this - i really like how you incorporated Lotad's biology - but i would like all player characters to have an actual name at least. i realise this may be a bit hypocritical with regard to the nameless village cast, but i'll probably end up giving them names soon too, haha! ( ´ ▽ ` )ゞ