Naruto: Bloodlines at war [PG-13]

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Amoss92

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    ((Well, this is my first RP here.))

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    Story

    The years where Naruto lived are long gone, about a hundred years passed since Naruto, the seventh Hokage, passed away. Konoha has suffered a large number of changes, some good and some bad. For example, the Uchiha clan no longer exists, the hyuuga clan is now the main clan of Konoha. Also, the new Kage is none other than Naruto Uzumaki's grandson.

    As for what happened to the akatsuki, it isn't of much importance. They were defeated with the help of the Konoha shinobi's. Itachi and Sasuke ended up killing each other. Finally, Kakashi was named the 6th hokage after Tsunade's death.

    For now, there are no wars, but rumour has it that the hidden village in the mist might be planning something with the village in the stones. But nothing is certain, these being rumours started by travelling merchants.

    Now in a time of crisis four special chuunins have been chosen in hopes that they will be able to help combat a new arising evil, chuunins that are from unique clans and have abilities that could either frighten someone to death, or amaze them.

    Little is known about this new evil. We do know is that they originate from the hidden village of the rain. Finally, we also know their name, the name of the evil a group of four must stop, The Dusk Clan.

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    Rules

    1. Four people only, so counting me I need three people.

    2. Custom characters, custom bloodlines, I want originality. Anyone who so much as mentions the word Sharingan...

    3. Read the RPing Rules.

    4. Don't control others characters...

    5. This is going to be a rather dark RP, so feel free to swear in moderation and describe violence in detail... But don't go into too gory details and try not to swear non-stop.

    6. Break the rules and I'll feed you to Jiraya...

    7. If you read the rules copy and paste this dancing Kirby into your post thingy... <('.'< (^'.'^) (>'.')>

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    Template

    Name:
    Clan: (Last name usually, but you can be creative if you want…)
    Age: (12-15)
    Gender:
    Personality:
    Bio:
    Character Appearance:
    Blood Line Effects/Jutsus/Traits: (Ok, this is what makes your clan so good, I'm allowing you to get pretty creative here, make it devastating, just not God-like)
    Starting Weapons: (You may get and specialize in others later)
    1.
    2.
    Custom Weapon/Armor/Accessory: (This is a weapon used by the ancestors of your clan, so make it fit your character...and we don't get these till later...)
    1.

    Starting Jutsu: (You may have up to three for now and no worries, other can be learned later. Try to base these off your Bloodline Effects and such, I am allowing customs obviously. Basic Jutsus [clone,replacement, ect.] are assumed known. Three seemed like a good number, but it's up for discussion.)

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    My Template

    Name: Artrik Ichiru
    Clan: The Ichiru Clan
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male

    Personality: Dark. Extremely violent and vengeful, but normally only to those who threaten or harm him. He does however like having people around who he can consider friends, yet he hardly ever shows compassion or even speaks to them for that matter.

    Bio: Artrik is the last remaining member of the Ichiru clan, having lost any relatives he may have ever had in various elimination raids because of the nature of his clan. He had been trained from an early age how to use his Bloodline Technique, and how to fight and defend himself in general. By the age of 10 he was fairly skilled with his Jutsu and weapons of choice, having learned said skills he began to train on his own and let his parents focus on defending their families from raids. At the age of twelve he returned home from one of his training sessions in the mountains to find his family slaughtered, his house trashed, and all of their possessions stolen. Having to go through all this at such a young age sent him into a state of extreme mental instability, he became extremely reclusive and dark towards the world. Needing some way to make money for food, weapons, ect. he began taking minor missions, unleashing his own pain on anyone who would dare get in his way.

    Character Appearance: He has strait, pitch black hair which goes to his ears, except in the front wear he parts it to the right. His eyes are the signature blood red color of the Ichiru clan. He stands about 5' 7" and is rather slim. He wears a black shirt with a picture of a scar dripping blood on it and a pair black cargo pants. He has two needle holsters, one on each of his wrists, for quick access, they each hold up to nine of his poisoned needles. Strapped to his belt loops are two pouches, one on each side resting on his hip, one contains his stash of Kunai while the other contains back-up poison needles.

    Blood Line Effects/Jutsus/Traits:
    The Ichiru clan posses a special gene that make their bodies produce excessive amounts of blood, and through massive training they developed a jutsu to take full advantage of this abnormality, the Blood Manipulation Jutsu, which allows any member to manipulate their blood through an open wound. The blood may be manipulated to do many things, and even harden to a diamond-like, razor-sharp. Along with this single jutsu came many other various blood related jutsu to follow. Members of the Ichiru clan also have regeneration abilities, but they're extremely limited. Each member is born with blood red eyes, making them quite easy to distinguish. The major drawback of the Ichiru clan's Blood related jutsu is the fact that if too much blood is used in one it can cause extreme exhaustion or even death.

    Starting Weapons:
    1. Kunai
    2. Poison Needles
    Custom Weapon/Armor/Accessory:
    1. Blood Seal (This is a set of an amulet and two bracelets worn by the elite ninja of the Ichiru clan. Each bracelet is pitch black, but while one has a blood Sapphire in the middle of it the other has a blood ruby. The amulet's string is pitch black, and at the end of it it holds a blood diamond. When all three pieces are worn together they form the Blood Seal, increasing the speed of blood production in an Ichiru and allowing them to control it slightly better. Basically all this does is enable my character to do more with his Blood Manipulation Jutsu and it's ( Yeah it may be three things, but they only work when all three are worn...)

    Starting Jutsu:
    1. Blood Clone Jutsu (This Jutsu allows the user to make Doppelgangers then coat them with a protective layer of his own blood. With the blood coating them these clones are much stronger than a normal clone would be, and will not be destroyed after the first hit, however it requires a very large amount of blood to make one of these clones, so he can make no more than one or two at a time and be safe. One of his more powerful but risky jutsu.)

    2. Blood Rain Jutsu (The user gathers a large amount of blood and forms it into a sphere, then he hurls it upwards, and just as it starts it decent it breaks apart into a furry of needles, which rain down upon the enemy or enemies with considerable force. He may also throw the sphere towards the target(s) which is more concentrated and covers less area.)

    3. Blood Bubble (This surrounds the user with a protective veil of blood. This Jutsu uses up a lot of chakra fast and requires a lot of blood, so it's normally only used in situations were no other option is available, as extended use will result in extreme exhaustion rarely and death often. It also has offensive purposes.)

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    I won't be asking for an RP sample. Your bio, appearance, personality and clan originality should say enough.
     
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    Name: Kyoto Syuku
    Clan: Syuku(Formerly living in The Village Hidden In The Wind)
    Age: 13
    Gender: Male
    Personality: Kyoto is a very social person and will befriend anyone needing it but he has a hatred for thieves and murderers who do it for fun. He stops any fights he can but has a short temper for attempted murder. He can make many friends but he likes the strangest people.
    He doesn't spend much money for many reasons and he hates sweets that are high in sugar(also because he doesn't need any money).
    He can be tempted to do some weird things but not very often.
    He will help someone who asks for it but if they steal to do it he will tell the police. His hobby is to read long fiction books and collect throwing stars from killed off enemies.

    Bio: Kyoto is one of the youngest members of his clan but he is not the worst at the Jutsu. He started learning his clans Jutsus at the age of 2 and by the age of 10 he was already better than five of his older brothers.
    At 11 he began to train at the outskirts of the town on the Wolves that normally invaded the farms. Eventually there were no Wolves left.
    He then joined school and passed the Chunin exam with flying colors having passed the test and collected the scrolls the fastest.
    He then returned home where his pain-stricken mother was crying and she told him that his father was killed by a trained Assassin. Having lost his role-model in life he then took his fathers bloodline necklace(A Bloody Kunai Knive)and wore it.
    He then vowed to kill the Assassin and started training 24/7.

    Character Appearance: Kyoto has jet black hair with blue and orange highlights running through it and wears dark blue jeans and a black jacket. He is quite a slim pre-teen and about 5"3 and weighs roughly 95lbs.
    He has dark brown eyes with black pupils. He has a Dark Red T-Shirt reading "Do Not Approach". His shoes are mainly white sneakers and black sneakers with red stripes. He also wears a necklace with a Bloody Kunai Knife on it and he never takes it off as it is his Clans Symbol.

    Blood Line Effects/Jutsus/Traits: His blood lines effect is unlike any other and lets him throw anything at 130km/per hour but it can go faster the more developed you are at it. He can also manipulate the trajectory and flight path of the star using another blood line jutsu which controls the wind which was made to only control the wind around the star but now can control any area of wind.
    The Blood Line also lets him run at 100km/per hour(using wind) but to run that fast drains his Chakra considerably, in fact once he had no Chakra left after running for 15 minutes.

    Starting Weapons:
    1. Kunai Knifes
    2. Poison tipped Kunai Knifes
    Custom Weapon/Armor/Accessory:
    1. Special Kunai Knife
    This Kunai Knife is like no other and only used by the absolute elite in his clan. The design is so aerodynamic it can go up to 50km if thrown by a bad thrower. There are 3 points to ensure accuracy(and use to tip with poison)it has a tail that can set alight if you put it on and only works when some sunlight is on it. This is also extremely easily controlled by their manipulation of the wind.

    Starting Jutsu:

    1. Dragon Star Jutsu(This Jutsu creates a dragon after throwing three shurikens, the dragon head is made out of chakra and explodes when it hits the designated targets.)

    2. Wind Manipulation Jutsu(This Jutsu lets him manipulate the wind around him and he is so advanced at it that he can throw his enemies left and right using it but the larger the target the harder it is to manipulate and so far he can just barely lift up 120kgs)

    3. Tornado Jutsu(This throws a whole lot of wind into a tornado and keeps on spinning and spinning going the direction he wants but it reduces lots of Chakra and he can only get it 90cm high)
     
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    Nice clan and character, accepted with flying colors!
     
    i dont like the idea
    AT ALL!!!!!!!!!
    Your killing off all the main chariters if that happens the show would end.
     
    I'm doing this for a reason. I don't want any peolpe like Sasuke, Naruto or any other main in here. This is so people can't say they are Sasuke's son or Naruto's daughter.

    If you don't like it, don't join.
     
    oh.sorry to bother you....But it would end the show...
    i think i might join.i didnt know why you did it.
     
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    Sure, it would end the show, just think of this as... a new season XD
     
    you mean a new show
    well here is my person
    name:serol denion-(only thing i can think of lol)
    clan:denion
    age:12
    personality:is VERY strange.is mostley talking to self.and is hiley inteligent.passes every test exsam but isnt very proud like most people are.doesnt talk to people very often and seems to act like there is some spy around.
    Bio:lives in the midle of nowhere and is somewhere alone and is silent he canot be found doing anything.also doesnt act his age he acts like an adult and was thought of as a spy himself.
    charicter apearince:black hair about 5 foot 7 and weighs about 105 makes him look older
    wears a black shirt his eyes are black like his shirt that is another way he is strange.
    blood line efectes:he seems to have an abillatey to sudenley be at 2 places at once not by shadow clones or jutsu.
    Starting wepons:
    Controling stone:can controll anyone for 5 minutes and then it will wear off.
    Knife:An ordnary knife exsept very dangeros.
    Jutsu:
    1.mind jutsu:can erase memoreys,inteligence and worst of all can torture into insanitey.
    2.Shadow death jutsu:can kill at the cost of your soul-(never used only mensioned)
    Thats all.

    sorry about the spelling.
     
    I'm sorry, but I'll have to refuse your template for a couple of reasons.

    1. You didn't put a custom equipment/weapon/accessory.

    2. The controlling stone is too powerful.

    3. I said three jutsus and both of yours are over powerful.

    4. You need to develop more on your clan ability, what do you mean by that?

    5. Honestly, if your RPing skills are as good as your template making skills or your spelling and grammar skills... You won't be accepted in the RP.
     
    pokenaruto:

    If you don't like the plot, don't join.
    If you don't agree with the plot, don't join.
    If you don't understand that this roleplay would have absolutely no effect on the actual show, then don't join.
    If you post ridiculous spammy posts again, you will be warned.

    So don't do this again.
     
    Oh, I hope I get accepted, this sounds like it promises a great RP. P.S: If her Kekkai Genkai is too powerful I'll change it.

    Name: Katsumi Hoshikaze

    Clan: Hoshikaze Clan

    Age: 12

    Gender: Female

    Personality: Katsumi has very little interest in the luxuries of life, and spends most of her time alone in the woods, training. She prefers solitude, as she claims she finds those around her to be an annoying interference in her state of mind; but in reality, Katsumi seeks to confide in the one special person(s) who could see past her anti-social shell and take interest in her. She can be quite bratty and mean spirited, but to those who look twice, she has a caring side. She isn't very intune with her emotions, and becomes stiff and akward when a person around her becomes emotionally unstable, because she doesn't really understand and has no idea on how to correctly comfort them.

    Bio: Katsumi, being her clan's long-awaited prodigy, is quite skilled at her clan's jutsu and learns fairly quickly. Since she spent most of her childhood training in Hoshigakure, she grew up with very little sense of the world outside of her training regime (as she left Hoshigakure, this changed).

    History: Katsumi was born and raised in the Hoshikaze clan, and soon became the clan's prodigy, having learned all of their family jutsu. Since the clan was lower-ranking in Hoshigakure, she was the child that the clan members believed would lead their clan's rise to power. They began putting Katsumi on a very strict training regime, morphing her into the perfect Star ninja. Unfortunately for the Hoshikazes, Katsumi seeked life outside of Hoshigakure. She had overheard, on several occasions, conversation amongst her elders about Konohagakure, often times about it's great history and skillfull ninja. Their words of grandure became implanted in her mind until she could stand it no longer. One frigid winter midnight, she departed from her clan, never to return, and fled for Konohagakure; her current residence.

    Character Appearance: Katsumi's hair is tied back into an odd hairstyle that sends the golden ends of her thick, wavy chesnut locks errupting from a bun-like hairdo and peeping out the side of her head, with a few strands from her bangs hanging loosely in the front. Her eyes are a vibrant, deep chocolate brown color, with very percise black detailing; 3 almost invisible black lines above the pupil, three below it. Her skin is pale, as Hoshigakure is not the sunniest of places, and she spent most of her life there. She is 5'5, rather nimble and of average weight. She wears a jet black tight quater length sleeve shirt with a mesh front and mesh sleeves (rather similar to Anko's), a black miniskirt, and a simple black hoodie with white fake fur lining on the hood.

    Blood Line Effects/Jutsus/Traits: Her clan's signature jutsu is Kaze Hoshi Shuriken, a jutsu that sends a massive 'swarm' of white-hot (representing the heat of a star) Shuriken powered by wind after the enemy. The Kaze Hoshi Shuriken does not take up much Chakra, and is rather powerful.
    Her clan's Kekkai Genkai is Serene Starlight, a jutsu that sends the foe into a sleeping trance if hit by it. It works when the user activates it in their eyes, which turn into a pure faded gold color (no pupil) when the jutsu is in effect. If the foe looks into the user's eyes while the kekkai genkai is activated, the foe will be sent instantly into a sleeping trance.
    The Hoshikaze Clan's symbol is simply a golden star trapped in the middle of a tornado. Katsumi wears this symbol on the back of her hoodie.
    The clan's most notable acheivement was the creation of the Star Sphere. The Star Sphere is a small transparent glass sphere with cotton candy like, wispy light pink clouds swirling around gently inside, accompained by tiny, glittering stars. The Star Sphere is used in battle to drag the user and the enemy into territory that only the user is used to; a pitch black arena lit by an orb that produces feeble light for no more than 5 seconds before moving to another spot on the arena and repeating the process. The foe in incapable of navigating his surroundings, and can do absolutely nothing to defend himself, never knowing when the user is going to strike. The realm lasts for a mere five minutes, though the user, if skilled, can normally finish their opponent in time.


    Starting Weapons:

    1. White-Hot Kunai Knifes
    2. Demon Wind Shuriken

    Custom Weapon/Armor/Accessory:

    1. Star Sphere


    Starting Jutsu:

    1. Kaze Hoshi Shuriken no Jutsu (Wind Star Shuriken); I already explained this one, it's her clans signature jutsu.

    2. Blinding Starlight Jutsu; A massive amount of light bursts from the handseal, temporarily blinding the opponent while the jutsu lasts. It lasts for 30 seconds and can leave the opponent slightly dazed afterward, though it does take up quite a bit of chakra.

    3. Chikara Wolf Jutsu; This jutsu takes a large amount of chakra, and so Katsumi does not use it often. She forms a large pool of her chakra into a wolf made entirely of chakra, rather like a Bijuu, only much less stronger and much less larger. She sends it after her opponent, and if caught by the wolf, the opponent endures a terrible bite.
     
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    I'm sorry, but I'll have to refuse your template for a couple of reasons.

    1. You didn't put a custom equipment/weapon/accessory.

    2. The controlling stone is too powerful.

    3. I said three jutsus and both of yours are over powerful.

    4. You need to develop more on your clan ability, what do you mean by that?

    5. Honestly, if your RPing skills are as good as your template making skills or your spelling and grammar skills... You won't be accepted in the RP.

    i will fix it. :)
     
    You do that. Your spot isn't assured yet, if someone posts a better template than yours, they'll be accepted.

    Stardust: I was reading your template a second and noticed two things.

    1. How long does the star sphere last?

    2. Isn't your Kekkkai genkai a little powerful? If you want to keep it, I'll ask that you only obtain it later in the story.
     
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    Sorry I was rushing because it was late at night; I'll add more to it. I also changed one of her starting jutsus.

    And yeah, in the top of my first post I asked if it was too powerful, but I couldn't really think of anything else, so I'll make it so that she learns it later.
     
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    Great, you're accepted! Love your idea!

    Now, need one more person to join or pokenaruto to edit his template.
     
    Edited By Pokenaruto
    name:serol denion-(only thing i can think of lol)
    clan:denion
    age:12
    personality:is VERY strange.is mostley talking to self.and is hiley inteligent.passes every test exsam but isnt very proud like most people are.doesnt talk to people very often and seems to act like there is some spy around.
    Bio:lives in the midle of nowhere and is somewhere alone and is silent he canot be found doing anything.also doesnt act his age he acts like an adult and was thought of as a spy himself.he fights by weakining the enemy first.
    charicter apearince:black hair about 5 foot 7 and weighs about 105 makes him look older
    wears a black shirt his eyes are black like his shirt that is another way he is strange.

    Starting wepons:
    Anything basic from the show kuni shurken Etc...
    Starting Jutsu:
    1.Vision blocker-Basic:can make the targets vision blury.
    2.Strike of death:Does not cause death(name overdramatic lol)but can cause damage is very basic.
    3.horible memory justu:Can make the target remebber his worst memorys or anything him/her dreads most but is easy to free from.-if this is the only thing not acsepted acsept everything elce.

    Edited By Pokenaruto
    name:serol denion-(only thing i can think of lol)
    clan:denion
    age:12
    personality:is VERY strange.is mostley talking to self.and is hiley inteligent.passes every test exsam but isnt very proud like most people are.doesnt talk to people very often and seems to act like there is some spy around.
    Bio:lives in the midle of nowhere and is somewhere alone and is silent he canot be found doing anything.also doesnt act his age he acts like an adult and was thought of as a spy himself.he fights by weakining the enemy first.
    charicter apearince:black hair about 5 foot 7 and weighs about 105 makes him look older
    wears a black shirt his eyes are black like his shirt that is another way he is strange.

    Starting wepons:
    Anything basic from the show kuni shurken Etc...
    Starting Jutsu:
    1.Vision blocker-Basic:can make the targets vision blury.
    2.Strike of death:Does not cause death(name overdramatic lol)but can cause damage is very basic.
    3.horible memory justu:Can make the target remebber his worst memorys or anything him/her dreads most but is easy to free from.-if this is the only thing not acsepted acsept everything elce.
     
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    1. You didn't put a custom equipment/weapon/accessory.

    2. I need a better description of your justus.

    3. You didn't say anything about your bloodline...

    4. Again, your writing is really, really bad...

    5. Your first template was better.
     
    Edited AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!:tired:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    name:serol denion-(only thing i can think of lol)
    clan:denion
    age:12
    personality:is VERY strange.is mostley talking to self.and is hiley inteligent.passes every test exsam but isnt very proud like most people are.doesnt talk to people very often and seems to act like there is some spy around.
    Bio:lives in the midle of nowhere and is somewhere alone and is silent he canot be found doing anything.also doesnt act his age he acts like an adult and was thought of as a spy himself.he fights by weakining the enemy first.
    charicter apearince:black hair about 5 foot 7 and weighs about 105 makes him look older
    wears a black shirt his eyes are black like his shirt that is another way he is strange.
    Bloodline efects: seems to have a chackra controler in the family bloodline he can control large amounts of chackra at a time without losing his control.also seems to be able to move silent by chackra.
    Starting wepons:
    1.Chackra kuni: will increase power speed and all other properdys by the users chackra.
    That is all.

    Starting Jutsu:
    1.Vision blocker-Basic:can make the targets vision blury.
    That is all.
    2.Strike of death: Does not cause death(name overdramatic lol)but can cause a little damage damage is very basic.
    3.horible memory justu:Can make the target remebber his worst memorys or anything him/her dreads most but is easy to free from.-if this is the only thing not acsepted acsept everything elce.

    If this isnt good enough
    QUIT INSULTING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    Not accepted! You aren't even trying to modify your spelling! You just copy paste and then add some stuff!
     
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