*New* Teh Adventures Of Randomness. Emu.

[[-~Crystal-Aurora~-]]

Hey everyone, I'm here with my First Comic...

Teh Adventures Of Randomness!

Update Every new Episode as soon as i've made. it's Supposed to be a Comic O_o dunno if it will be funny or not but at some parts it's Serious and Humerous.

Chapter 1 :

Episode One
Episode Two (Link Now Works.)

Bios



Sorry About the Overworlds looking nothing like the Characters, i'm not good at overworlds.

 

[[-~Crystal-Aurora~-]]

2cnd Episode : Stupid Prof Oak!

 

[Roy-Kun]

Two things:

First, i can't see the 2nd comic

Second: Do not double post!

I won't rate it yet because it doesn't haves a plot, and doesn't haves enough comics for a rating.

 

[Flaming Quilava]

A few things that your missing:Bios,Plot.Also cant see the and comic2

 

[[-~Crystal-Aurora~-]]

I've updated with BIOS and working link, Plot Coming.

 

[Signomi]

Also, care to give credit to Coronis for the Trainer sprites? :)

 

[Spectrum]

Lacks humour. :\ And the first one's too repetitive.

 

[[-~Crystal-Aurora~-]]

O sorry, i forgot to give Credit. and Episode three is coming up.

 

[.Socks]

I thought it was pretty good. I'm working on mine too...
You people are so persnikitty! lol

 

[Recknin]

the comic is funny keep it up

 

[Allstories]

The comic does not make any bloody sense.

 

[Draginis]

Lacks humour. :\ And the first one's too repetitive.

Agreed completely o_O
Also that the text doesn't fit in the speech bubbles. ??*It's too early to rate though.

 

[jambo]

Still early days...
calls for improvement:
>Plot
>lack of charecters
overall
>Graphics- 9/10
>Humor-8/10
>charecter Bios 6/10
Total 23/30 = 7/10 = 70%
Keep it going! (dont be like me)