Name:riley
Age: 17
Personality (one paragraph):A young pokemon trainer who lost his best friend Lucario. Not knowing if he died he hopes to get him back. Riley is a nice guy. He wants to protect them and that not all humans treated them as slaves and cause they remind him of good times he had with his Lucario but he has to think on what would happen. He is known to be really skilled at fighting with aura and can use aura for self- defense but if he uses to much he can possibly black out.Riley can also sense aura around him. He hopes he can make peace for this war and end it even if it means if he has to use all of his aura and destroy himself. He prefers to do things as a lone wolf to.
History (one paragraph): He was born at Cameron Palace when he was Sir Aaron he sacrificed his life to stop a war that could have destroyed the castle. After he died and waited for Lucario to do the same they both were born at the same time at the place called "Iron town". Around the time of this war 17 years after Riley was born Lucario had left him for some reason. Riley set on a quest to find him.If he finds Lucario he would be able to have a better chance on stopping this war and make peace hopefully.
Appearance (one paragraph):He has a uncommon blue hat, black shaggy like hair,a blue long coat,
some black pants, and black shoes. when he uses aura to protect himself his body flashes blue.
Role (Commander/General/Member/Spy): Member
Password:fight
Others: (anything not mentioned above?)
Weapon: 50 cal revolver, bowie knife. 30-30 lever action rifle, molitove cocktails, smoke and gas grenades, tomahawk , and a aura sphere rifle
Is this ok or do I have to edit.