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    :: Heh heh! This might be good! Well, it sounded like that in my head! ::

    Not based off of anything, this is an original RPG! Not too many of those anymore...


    The year is 2061. The majority of the human race is enslaved. Except for a group of Rebels called The Resistance. Instead of the kind of enslavement you are thinking about, they are kept in a dome. In a dome with no chance for escape. With no weak spots. Yet, somehow, the resistance gets inside to perform raids.

    The Planet Earth now has a barrne landscape, where no creature could live, and is devoid of any lifeforms. So the Human Race was moved to a new planet, named Ebion, just a few million miles out of the solar system.

    Even though the dome takes up a lot of space, it is just too small for all of the beings who exist, and are being born. So there is a chain of domes covering the surface of Ebion, relaying information through state of the art security.

    Now that I'm to this part, the ones who are being born are not human. They are artificial life forms - clones. Only a handful of survivors left from Earth are actually not a product of Crow and his forces.

    Crow and his forces - Revive - are the ones behind all of this. And they're all Super Genuises. They were the ones who caused Earth to become what it is now.

    The clones are brought in as teenagers. Everyone inside the domes are teenagers. Before they practically destroyed Earth, Revive took samples of most everyone's DNA on the planet. That is how they manage to clone so many people.

    The Resistance are all survivors from Earth too. They broke away as Revive workers were bringing them onto ships going to Ebion, stole a very high-tech ship, and managed to set up their own force before Revive employees could find them.

    Now onto why instead of actual babies, there are clones. Besides the fact that everyone taken to survive were too young to reproduce, Revive liked the power they had in their grasp, and decided to play God.

    And, so the survivors, and even clones - who somehow acquired human emotions and longing - have no moments of pure desire and instinct, armed forces patrol the area of domes continually.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~\o/~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Okay, let's get to the rules and tie all the loose ends of all that stuff you had to read and (I) had to type.

    Their are four regions - Delta, Endo, Phan, and Earth.

    If you are in Delta, you're three years old.
    Endo four years old.
    In Phan, you're two.
    And Earth, everyone is 15. Region Earth are the survivors.

    You don't actually know tha are enslaved, even the survivors. Tehy brainwash clones while still in the eggsack, and brainwashed the humans anyway.
    You are told that the only way for you to survive on this planet is inside the dome. Big fat lie.
    But the Surivivors have strange dreams, and a feeling that everything isn't as it should be.
    And The Resistance are made out to be bad guys.
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    OKAY! So the idea of this RPG is to do what you want! Listen to Revive, and do absolutely nothing at all, join the Rebels, and fight for justice(blah blah blah), be a guard and stop the revolters, or just go it alone and try to break out! Or something like that!

    ~~~~~~~~~\o/~~~~~~~~~
    RULES:

    1. No Godmodding - in other words, no making your character invincible, can't die, the attacks hit all the time, etc.
    2. Please don't powerplay.
    3. Try to have good grammar, please!
    4. ...Okay there's actually nothing to put here but, I wanted a rule number four so... JUST PAY ATTENTION!

    ~~~~~~~~~\o/~~~~~~~~~

    Form:
    Now, this is the same for every category, Gaurd, clone, survivor, Rebel.
    You may have a max of 2 characters. You don't have to have 2, but that's all you can have.

    Name: (duh)
    Age: (pretty self explanitory, pay attention to the region section)
    Region: (another self explanitory)
    Team: (rebel, clone, survivor, guard)
    Appearance:all members of the dome are required to wear white suits with they're number and region on the back. Guards wear black, and if you're a rebel, I don't care what the hell you look like)
    Personality: (self explanitory)
    Number: (make something up)

    ~~~~~~~\o/~~~~~~~~

    Ooooh, my eyes just hurt looking at how much I typed in one sitting.
     
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    You're in, but umm, on the name, you said it was Samantha, and then on Personality, you said it was Crystal...
    FWEE! Any more people wanna join?!
    Of course, there probably isn't going to be many, considering that Original RPGs aren't considered that good.
     
    OOC: noo I like the idea.

    Name: Shylocke Viron
    Age: 15
    Region: Earth
    Team: Rebel
    Appearance:https://images-partners.google.com/...ic-images.com/declic/images/zoom/x/subaru.jpg
    Personality: Shylocke is a kind guy who looks after the rebels. He is good at different types of fighting so has a good way of protecting himself when in danger. He likes the fact that he has not been captured yet by Revive but hates the fact that anytime now Revive could just walk by and see him and take him away.
    Number: 6420
     
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    You're both in, but could you try to make your personalities more descriptive? Not a paragraph or anything like that, but a bit more of what they like, dislike, blah?
     
    Hi, hi, hi, Gohan!! I'm joining, so deal with it. XD

    Name: Airlia
    Age: 4
    Region: Endo
    Team: Clone
    Appearance: Airlia (My scanner's evil, so the colours didn't come out.... ;-; )
    Personality: Airlia is the kind of girl who is considered to be strange. Pale skinned, small, lanky, and quiet, she is the girl who sits alone and watches everyone with her piercing lavender eyes. She may be four in appearence, but in reality she has the mentality of a full-grown adult, due to a malfuntion in her programming. She hates being gaped at as she usually is by others.
    Number: 13913
     
    Oh great, now I have to deal with the mental child who thought up the - totally awesome, btw - Phantysta. I'll try to deal with it...

    I'll post mine now, since I'll forget if I don't....

    Name: Jiru
    Age: 15
    Region: Earth
    Team: Survivor
    Appearance: Jiru's eyes are purple, and his hair is brown with a tinge of red. His hair is curly, and about down to his ears, and his bangs cover most of his eyes. He's a pickpocket and has been to see one of the guidance counselers many times. About 4' 8", Jiru is quite a bit shorter than the others. And actually, he has a scar on his right hand, although he is left-handed.
    Personality: He knows that they aren't getting the whole truth somehow, and yet, he doesn't want to join the rebels. He's caught in a crossfire and is planning to go it alone when the time comes. He's pretty cocky, actually, and can be pretty rude... okay, very rude. And he doesn't care about others most of the time, or rather, that's what he would like people to believe. On the inside, he likes to water flowers. Even though he's never actually seen a flower inside the dome, he just knows it. Another dream inside of one big nightmare. And on the outside, he's a punk who likes to get in fights...
    Number: 1237

    Name: Jing
    Age: 14
    Region: Rebel
    Team: Rebel
    Appearance: Jing has black hair that's about down to the end of his neck. His green eyes are very annoying, and most people find him to be very unnerving in company. At 5'11", he stands a bit taller than the average high school student. He's got a Brown shirt, a black pair of pants cut at knee-length, and gloves. Fingerless, blue gloves. And a pair of gloves hanging from around his neck. For fast raids.
    Personality: He is loud and obnoxious, always letting others know what's on his mind, which can get pretty annoying. At other times, he is surly and unruly, constantly sulking. And his IQ is higher than most, although no one believes it of him. His mood changes with the scenery, as he believes in destiny, and the likes of that. He appears to be a stupid kid who isn't very strong at all. And that's pretty much all there is to him.
    Number: Doesn't need one, he's on the rebel side.
     
    Mmm-hm. So, when are we starting, Gohan? And, don't worry, I'm working on Phantysta again. Should be up sometime this month.

    Back on topic. First post anyone?
     
    :: We can start now. And Phantysta; YESSS! I've been looking in this thread everyday, since I can get a bit... obsessed. ::

    Jing Walked down the hall, one hand shoved in his pocket, the other rubbing the back of his head.

    " What did I do wrong? " He asked, as he had just been yelled at by one of the older members. She had said that he had better stop doing scouting without permission. " All I was doing was preparing for the raid tonight... that's all.... And how was I supposed to know we're not supossed to show an ounce of preperation by observing the scene of the hit and run? " He said to himself, glaring at any passer-by in the hall. Then an idea hit him.

    " Oh yeah, that's what Risu said when I was nearly caught last time.... " He paused for a moment, then continued, " I guess I should listen to her more.... "

    :: And that ends my first post, since my family is so ticked at me for yelling, 'AUGHH! I'M SO STUPID!', every few seconds because I'm not too good at starting. Or coming up with posts. Or getting rid of the shadow of constant disconnnection. Well gotta go! :) ::
     
    OMG, I've been wanting to join an original RP!!
    Can I join??

    Name: AnnaSophia Naherny (Nick names: Anna, Sophia)
    Age: 15.
    Region: Earth.
    Team: Rebel.
    Appearance: Anna has blonde hair with black streaks (her hair is to her shoulders). She often wears a red shirt with a black jacket, gray fingerless cloves, dark bluejeans with a few holes in them, and black gold-buckle boots.
    Personality: Mean, jokingly, serious. She knows what its like to be free, and being kept captive isen't her idea of "freedom". She doesen't like being with teams, but if thats the only way she's going to get out, then she's going to live with it. Anna some times gets reminded of her past, being ripped from the only one she ever turely loved shes shut every one that ever really cared for her out.
    Number: Shes a rebal, they don't have "numbers".

    Name: Issabella Naherny (Nick name: Izzy)
    Age: 2.
    Region: Phan.
    Team: Clone.
    Appearance: Izzy is just a baby, she wears a white suit like every one else.
    Personality: Shes only two years old, so she doesen't have much of a personality.
    Number: 5716

    AnnaSophia may not know it but she has a clone of her self (like a baby sister).
     
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    :: Cool, you're in! And I can't believe I'm so stupid I forgot to mention this... when the clones are brought in, they're like already at least ten. But they've only been living for who cares, look at the first post. :) ::

    Jiru yawned as he walked through the cafeteria, grabbing a tray, getting in line. A quick scan showed what he needed was oatmeal, but what he wanted was waffles. And wouldn't you know it, the lunch lady gave him oatmeal.

    He looked down, not fully registering what had happened, and saw the oatmeal. " What the heck? I thought you guys were 'sposed to give us what we wanted! " Is what he said to the lady behind the counter. She just gave him 'the look', and waved him away.

    He sat down at a table by one of the others in his region, Shylocke.

    " Stupid oatmeal... what'd you get? " He asked, hoping he would want to trade.
     
    :: Ooooh, SO stupid! *brick'd* Oh god, I'm going first-person. ::

    ~~~*Jiru*~~~~~~~~\o/~~~~~~
    I looked up at the girl, and smiled. Motioning for the seat next to me, I said, " Sure, no problem. "

    I glanced over at her, and saw that she had pancakes. I looked back at my own horrible glob of oatmeal, and decided to see if she would give me one of her pancakes.

    " Could I have one of those pancakes, um.... " I broke off in concentration as I tried to remember her name.

    Grinning sheeepishly, I said, " I really should know your name, but what was it? "
     
    Name: Saria (p.k.a. Geo)
    Age: 15
    Region: Earth
    Team: Rebel
    Appearance:Saria has short black hair with white tips that she spikes up and black eyes. She's always wearing baggie pants and a hoodie along with elbow length gloves that cut off at the first knuckle. She's pale and slightly muscular, but you can't tell from underneither the clothes. She's got everyone convinced she's a boy because she's able to disguse her voice and her clothes cover up her body too well.
    Personality: She acts tough and very lone wolf-ish, but that's just because she wants people to respect her and not find out her secret. As for why she acts like a boy...well you guys can ask her yourselves! Now she doesn't really have any friends right now so don't say you already know!
     
    < Thank you for letting me join!! :) >

    = AnnaSophia =
    = I begin to open my eyes as I wake up, I think 'gosh, another day, I wish I could sleep as long as I want'. I sigh as I check the time. "10:30?? This is NOT freedom. I should be able to go to bed as late as I want and wake up as late as I want."

    I do my normal actions as of every morning, brush my teeth, brush my hair, shower, get dressed and head for the cafeteria.

    I get my food from the lunch lady, never getting the food I really want, and go to the only table with seats left. I (being the mean person I am) sit down at the table with out asking. I look over, I see the guy next to me has numbers on his suit. I think '1237? thats just dumb how they number us like animals.' =

    < Just in case ya'll are wondering, this < > means I'm talking out of the RP, and this = means I am my person. >
     
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    Shylocke walked along and saw Jing being shouted at.
    "Whats going on?" He asked walking up to them. He had just been training so he was sweating a lot. He saw the older person walking away and turned to Jing.
    "She's grumpy isn't she!?" he said laughing.
    "Do you wanna train for tonight? I'm bored out of my head" he moaned
     
    ~*LiZzIe BoRdEn*~ said:
    OOC: Um, I am lost between Gohan's, Lusts Veyron, Shylocke, and my posts?
    Alright, I'll tell you whats up.

    Gohan's person Jing was yelled at, and Shylocke has walked up to him and is talking to him.

    Now Gohan's other person Jiru is eating in the cafeteria, you (Samantha) had asked him if you could sit with him and he said yes, and my person (AnnaSophia) has just come up and sat at the same table with out asking.

    And thats where every thing is left off.
    Hope this helped!! :)
     
    Name: Hirto
    Age: 15 (believes he is 29)
    Region: Earth
    Team: Guard
    Appearance: Tall, Protruding Biceps, Brutal, Piercing black eyes,
    Personality: Cold, and Heartless, Selfish, Not too good a people person, But is good deep, deep inside. . He was taken captive and was brainwashed to believe he was older.
    Number: 666
     
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    :: FlameStormPyroHydro, you are in, but Shadowburn, please wrok on your personality, and appearance a bit. I know appearance can't be that long, but please work on Personality, at least. :) ::

    ~*Jiru*~

    " Now girls, please no cat-fight here... " I said nervously. Quite a bit of trouble with the guards on his record, he did not need to be involved in another fight.

    Putting on the smile again, He turned to Samantha and said, " Thanks for the pancake! Umm, names Jiru. "

    Eating the pancake, all he was left with was oatmeal. Deciding he would rather starve than eat it... " So, I never caught your name, mystery one who has not said a word to us yet! I'm Jiru. And if they serve chili for lunch, I think I might dieee.... "
     
    = I look over at the girl and say "He doesen't own this table, so I shoulden't have to ask". I take a bight of my food and then look at Jiru (so he said to the girl) and ask "You don't mind if I sit here, do you?" I look down at his plate. "You have oatmeal? I love oatmeal! Would you like to trade for my pancakes?" I asked. =
     
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