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[- Cool Trainer Nick -]

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you should put more effort into outlining, all black outlines arent good at all. Also you need better shading, work on defining a light source as I see one of your darkest shades is facing where one of the lightest should be. Light always comes from the Northwest. Also I dont know if this is just me but the spike thingys all look the same, but flipped and rotated, it looks unatural, its like having the same fingernails on every finger if you get what I'm saying. Make them different. You want to add more detail to the body rather than making it all green to make it more intresting as well. Also try making your shapes smoother, which also comes with good outlining though.

As of now I'm not going to rate your fakemon until you fix it up.

~ Hope I helped

 

[Icy42]

I agree with you Shadow909...

 

[~JapaneseWolf]

there fusion these are edits for my fakemon edits from gold/silver spritesrate for xenlithe will haunt your dreams

 

[Flaming Quilava]

Can some one rate my gansta pikachu?

and my trainer:

 

[Icy42]

Both of you very good! I rate all of your sprites: 9.5/10

 

[- Cool Trainer Nick -]

you really need to put more effort into shading outlining and detail.

5/10

Edit

~ Rate please

 

[Smarties-chan]

you really need to put more effort into shading outlining and detail.

5/10

Edit

~ Rate please

Your sprites are decent, but it looks like that girl has boneless wings instead of hands o.O Your shading seems okay though and you have fused Vaporeon and Togetic quite well, I think... However, your outlining seriously needs some work. Try using different shades and adding some black outlines.

 

[maxxa]

this is my new pokemon its a scratch
ok maybe soon ittl let me post i need 15 posts
:o

 

[Signomi]

@maxxa: How about you private message me your sprite so I can show it for you? You needn't to spam to gain the ability to post images :)

 

[maxxa]

oh yeah thank you lol im new

 

[Sammi]

While I'm here...

I should've gotten these rated awhile back XD

I did that recently.
I know the outlines kinda look freaky sometimes, because some are darker than others. It's just the way I like to sprite. ^^;
How is it?

 

[maxxa]

pretty good are you an experienced spriter?

 

[Sammi]

pretty good are you a good spriter?

What's good about them? I wanna know... :3

Meh, I'm not the greatest. I can always improve =)

I had to do the eyes myself, does that look okay? o_O

 

[Signomi]

maxxa's Sprite (Pokedex entry themed):

 

[maxxa]

thank you what does anyone think
its my first sprite it took me all day

 

[Signomi]

Another sprite by maxxa:

 

[maxxa]

thank you :) im trying to make better ones

 

[- Cool Trainer Nick -]

about the boneless hands, it was some pic of a girl with really loooooooooong sleeves and didnt show here hand, like how it looks now, it was a pic someone gave me and wanted me to make into a trainer sprite.

 

[pokejungle]

Ok, like, I think this is the best place to display this XD

^ I want a LOT of help on that ._." I want to design webcomics, and this is really just me doing random junk. It sucks and I'm not afraid to admit it XD

And then, here's the sprites for it:

Which I'd like help on too XD

 

[- Cool Trainer Nick -]

well the flame was just to make it look more lika a fire type

~ Rate Please