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Its my latest fusion. Comments?
 
Signomi said:
@sarah241847: The black outline of that Staryu needs to be reshaded so it blends in properly with the Beldom's anatomy, it tends to stand out a wee bit from the outline almost being completely black, I also see left over orange coloured pixels from how it originally was before you recoloured it. I say you should work on it a bit more and tweak it so it blends in more with the body, try not to make the Staryu completely black outlined, add some lighter shades of blue to the outline where the lightsource is facing it.

@~Dragon~Master~: Nice, but quite symmetrical. The shading style you used made it seem flat. You might also want to redo the anatomy of the feet and the tail, since the feet both seem rather flat and flipper like, and the tail looks as if it's internally bent. I'd recommend, if you're a little rusty at making curves with the Line Tool, try making curves with the Curve tool, it should help you make certain areas of your Fakemon look less symmetrical and more realistic. I'm also not too sure about the face anatomy, it seems to similarise to the state of the feet, flat and flipper like, so that's something else you might want to tweak, again, use the Curve tool if you're a little uneasy with the line tool. But that's a nice attempt at a Fakemon, keep at it :)
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Are you talking about paint becouse thats what i use. O and ill fix it.
 
@DragonsCanBite: Nice fusion, but as I've said to sarah241847, some of the black outline needs to be reshaded so it blends in properly, like on the back, it's black outlined, add a few red pixels to it, as on the tail. Also, I see some brown pixels, why are they there? Were they left over from how the anatomy was originally? If so, you should recolour them, since it's not in Latias' colour scheme. But otherwise, nice work, keep at it :)

EDIT~ @~Dragon~Master~: Yes, I am, I presume you use MS Paint.
 
@~Dragon~Master~: Much better, though now I see that the tail is a little oddly shaped and shaded...well, it's barely got any shading on it. The outline of the tail seems a bit dodgy on its structure, a bit of it is thick whilst when you cascade down it, it gets thinner, then it thickens again, make sure that the outlines of the tail are parallel and level with each other until they meet at a point, because right now, the tail looks as if it's been trampled on. You might want to think about shading the tail aswell, infact, the whole of the anatomy, I know you have used 'Cut up' shading in some areas, but not quite enough for me to say that it doesn't look flat. You haven't changed anything on the mouth, it still looks a bit symmetrical, and the feet looks as if the fakemon is swimming rather than standing on the ground, but if that was your intention, then it's fine. I'd recommend taking a look at this thread for spriting terms, if you're a little unsure about some vocabulary I've said so far, and shading types. But never the less, this one is quite a nice improvement from your other one, but there are still a few things needed to be done to it :)
 
@Karasu: Very nice custom sprites you have there! Though, the legs of the first one bothers me a bit, the hind legs seem rather curvy, and I feel something more can be done on its back, though I can't really put my finger on what, perhaps adding some lighter shades of orange onto a bit of the back's outline? IMO, the feet seem a bit too small. The second one looks very nice, but when I first looked at it, it looked rather 2-D with where the dark shading is, a little shakey on the outline of its neck on the right. But otherwise, quite nice, I like the poses, very nice customs, keep at it :)
 
I was a little bored and only made one sprite:
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Its chouji from naruto BTW. Its in FR/LG version. Is it good?
 
@Rock Lee: That's not in the FR/LG style, that's actually in the R/S/E style. Nice Overworld sprite, though you could've used a different colour besides Red for the cheek swirls, though they aren't really swirls on the sprite, besides that, nice work. You should take time into making an Overworld sprite set for him :)
 
Signomi said:
@Rock Lee: That's not in the FR/LG style, that's actually in the R/S/E style. Nice Overworld sprite, though you could've used a different colour besides Red for the cheek swirls, though they aren't really swirls on the sprite, besides that, nice work. You should take time into making an Overworld sprite set for him :)
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Oh yeah I meant that way. Well if i make bigger swirls then his whole face would be redish...but thanks for the comment. I'll work on a overworld sprite
 
@Shadowburn: Hm, C&Pied heads huh? Normally I'm not too fond of the idea, but you managed to make them look nice, I especially like the Beauty/Phoebe and the JR. Trainer/Lorelei Trainer sprites, though, my least favourites would have to be the Old Man/Brandon sprite (the head looks a wee bit big for the body) and the Archie/Steven sprite (don't really like the colour scheme, personally I'd rather the outfit be Blue and the hair be red, but that's my opinion. The head's in a rather awkward position on the neck and he looks dwarf like) otherwise, cute work. :)
 
Nice! Either I'm sleepy or i'm itching to make a thread. I don't know what about. I just need posts like i'm feeding on them in my threads. Okay... Now my weird moment is over o.o", 9.5/10
 
karasu there very nice fusions although the slugma/ grimer fusion has still got some black around the middle of the sprite. 7/10
 
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