Pixel Project: Revamp GSC

[mangaroll]

I said "sharper". . Or did I? O.o *checks* Yes, I said sharper. Mostly the lines on Entei where its fur is should be sharper (right around the face and the back). As for your Typhlosion and Quilava: the fire on both Quilava sprites looks a little off (though the .jpg version looks a bit better). As for Typhlosion, I'll take the .gif one. It looks nice. ^^​

Sorry, I have my moments.=p

And I'll finish up Entei and edit my post.=p
I won't redo quilava though, I'm getting tired and I need to eat my breakfast/lunch. (I've been on the computer since 5 AM)

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Is this what you mean?

 

[ShinjisLover]

No, I mean the lines look. . It's hard to explain it, but look at your sprite and then look at this. Do you see how the lines look slimmer and sharper on my example?

Also, I've done Raikou, but I'm not sure if it's worthy enough to be posted, so I'm going to let my contributors decided. Should this be on the list? If not, what needs to be changed first?

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[☆Patched☆]

Also, I've done Raikou, but I'm not sure if it's worthy enough to be posted, so I'm going to let my contributors decided. Should this be on the list? If not, what needs to be changed first?​

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Hmmm... right where the two little knob things on Raikous head join, instead of having a straight line, on pixel on there should be erased(sorta hard to explain) Shading on the cheek looks a bit choppy too, need to be smoother. Some parts of the outline seem rough, such as the back leg.

I think that's all that needs a bit of work. ^^

 

[ShinjisLover]

Which part of the back leg? The front of the back or the very back of the back? It kinda looks like the back of the back, but I could be wrong. Other than that, I get what you're saying and I've fixed up the knobs. However, the shading on the cheek isn't agreeing with me, so I think I'll get rid of it and start that over.

EDIT:
Well, contributors, I tried my best to fix-up the back leg and the shading on the cheek (the two knobs were easily fixed), and I think it turned out lovely.

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[Chary]

OK this time i have 3 new varities-

Here is all of them so you can see the changes
hope i got it this time

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sighhh... I just CANT fix the dragonite, but im gonna keep fixin it

Tododile!!

 

[ShinjisLover]

Your Totodile is great! I like the 2nd Croconaw the best, but it still needs a bit of work. And yeah, you should probably start over on your Dragonite.​

 

[ShaySkymin]

It seems as if my Esp/Umbreon sprires got booted. I'm fine with it, but maybe place in the rules clearly for people to actually read the list and the thread before posting? My 133-136 sprites are in danger. :/

Haven't finished Zapdos yet, sorry... I've been chatting on MSN/Drawing pics of Marx (from KSSU)... Busy me. I'll get to work on it laterr

OH EM GEE AN EDIT:
I finished it.. I think. i added a tiny, almost impossible to see piece of shading near the spikes. I dunno, it looks a little more realistic to me that way.
I also kept the G/S/C style eyes. I like them, personally, however, I will edit them if you want D/P/Pt style eyes.

 

[ShinjisLover]

I really, really like that Zapdos and I will definitely be using it.​

 

[ShaySkymin]

Cool, because I made a Pichu.. I don't like the eyes though, or the head in general...
Notes you should take:
a)The pink is the same on the shading as the base colour. The Platinum sprite is this way, too.
b)Some official Pokemon sprites have coloured parts on the outline, as in the outline is the same colour as the part of the body you are outlining, the ears are this way.
c) I kinda copied the tail on the official sprite... sorry.
d) I made the mouth 1 pixel longer.
e)I dont like the shading.. Your choice, however.

 

[ShinjisLover]

It seems like the anatomy, especially around the head, is way off. As I've said, Pokémon spriting isn't out changing outlines, shades, and colors.

So if you could change around the anatomy and make the body and head smaller, that'd be great. Also, it doesn't seem like there's enough *darker* shading around the backside.​

 

[ShaySkymin]

Well, I fixed it the way you wanted, however, I no longer like it in any way. If I were you, i'd use the other :/

EDIT: Whoops, forgot the second cheek:

 

[ShinjisLover]

. . . O.o Err. . I don't think I'll use either of them. Sorry. . =(​

 

[ShaySkymin]

It's A OK. I'm completely fine with that, but im sorry to hear- oops, read that.

 

[Fox♠]

That Zapdos has no eyes, I think you should add them.

The Raikou has shading and anatomy issues on the legs, it's also missing its fourth leg. The face is too dark and contrasts with the eye, either lighten the eye up or lighten the skintone up.

 

[ShinjisLover]

As for the skin tone, that's the original colors from the Platinum sprite, be it on the body as a whole or right where it's eye is. Though, I agree with the legs. I really need to fix up the shading, mostly.​

 

[Fox♠]

weather or not it;s the official palette is irrelevant, it's up to you to use it effectively and efficiently. That's what revamping requires.

 

[☆Patched☆]

I finished Moltres
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The uh fire looks a bit odd, I know.

 

[ShinjisLover]

The fire shouldn't have a different colored outline, at least not one that thin. The lines should blend together, like with the flame on Charmander's tail.​

 

[☆Patched☆]

If you compare...
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I'm editing right now anyways. xD

EDIT:
*image removed*Is this better? ^^;

 

[Fox♠]

The fire shouldn't have a different colored outline, at least not one that thin. The lines should blend together, like with the flame on Charmander's tail.​

No electramite is right, the fire on Moltres doesn't follow standard outline rules in D/P/P.