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PKMN Territories... REDUX!

Nibbles hears someone bellowing "Who could that be?"
He turns and sees a large Salamance.
"Oy!," Nibbles shouted back as he sped towards him.
"Hello friend!, Lovely day isn't it?"
 
"Hah! It all works out well in the end!" Chip said as he accepted the money from TW/Granite.
He then turned and sniggered to himself: "Heh, what suckers..."
 
"Why hello Kecleon friend!, I am a Slowpoke and my name is Nibbles. What would your name be?" Nibbles said to the Newcomer Kecleon.
"By the way Mister Kecleon, would you happen to be the owner of this store I keep hearing about at the Shellpoke pond?"
 
"Nice to meet you Chip!," Nibbles exclaimed, "I was wandering over to your store, when I was met by this fellow here."
 
Deciding to move on and return to speak with this Salamance later, Nibbles heads through the Dragon's Den and reaches Chip's store. As he looks around, he sees much destruction. "What the heck happened here?" Nibbles exclaimed while scratching his head.

(gotta go get ready for school tomorrow. see everyone later. If anyone asks, I, being the Slowpoke that I am, just decided to take a nap.)
 
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(sorry for being off Link I had to practice my sax)
Draggy sat alone in Dragons Den. He was in deep thought. Why were these new pokemon so wierd....especialy that store owner... Draggy didn't know what but he felt a strange pressence coming over the land. He had never felt this way before. He could sense all the pokemon who lived here, there was fear in some of them.
"Why did Ho-Oh and Lugia fight..." Draggy said, "They never fight. Someting must be inraging them."
"Well I can't think to deeply about this now...." Draggy got up slowly. He peered around. In the wall he saw an ingraving. "What in the wolrd is that?" Draggy said while staring at the ingraving

"Mabey if I touch it something will happen, yea that'll work!" Draggy touched the ingraving and the whole cave lighted up and a cavern opened up. "Wha...What is this?!" Inside was a Dragon stone. The key for Dragon pokemon to enter the True Dragon state. Draggy has sherched all his life for this! "I must.... I must get that stone!" Draggy stepped inside. "This place is too unprotected for a thing like this to be lying around...I must be catious" Draggy said. Draggy walked up to the stone. It glowed purple inside. It was so beautiful. "Now to take the stone!" Draggy reached his legs out and touched the stone. Just then an earthguack rumbled the cave and a giant mettogross came from the ceiling. "What! no!" Draggy exlamied.
The metogross said "Heh, you'r not touching this stone! Metor Mash!" his claw came out at a rockting speen and glowed silver and purple! "Gah...." Draggy said while he was blasted out of the cave and landed nxt to Chips store. The metogross came leaping out of the cave and landed about 20feet away from Draggy, he saw chip and yelled "Run!!!"
 
(It's fine Lightning.)
Awoken by the sudden quake. Nibbles saw the giant Metagross.
"That doesn't look too friendly..." Nibbles' voice trailed off.
"Don't worry Salamance friend! I shall assist you!"
Nibbles used his yawn attack... Nothing
Water pulse... Nothing
Headdbutt... A mysterious forcefield was blocking Nibbles out!
"Salamance friend!," Nibbles shouted, "I'm afraid I can't help you on this one!"
(gotta go for realz this time. If this is too much like godmodding, then I will change it. I apologize if it is, I don't know what exactly godmodding is...)
 
Draggy had gotten up while the slowpoke was trying to help.
"Thank you my friend for trying! You can call me draggy!" Draggy said.
"Now for you metagross! Fire Blast!" Just then a huge symbol of fire bursted from draggys' mouth.
"You cant beat me that easily! Bullet Punch!" Metagrosses hand went at a amazing speed, so fast draggy couldn't comprehend it. It was so strong it also broke the fire apart
"Well than lets take this head on! Zen headbutt!" Draggy leaped into the air and swooped down with a Zen headbutt of mass proportians
"I'l double your power! Zen headbutt!" His attack was of equal power!
Draggy and Metagross in unison " Grrrrrr I can't let you win!"
A huge blast energy blast blew them apart. All that was left was a smoke cloud
"This is my chanch! Draco meteor! HAAAAAAA!" A huge burst of power came out of draggy as he launched a huge purple meteor.
"Meteor Smash!" Mettagross exlaimed as he burst thorugh the smoke cloud.
The two attacks collided in a burst of energy! Both sides were equally matched...The energy coming off from the atacks was so great it was blowing down all the sourronding trees.
"I think its time to end this. Phsycic!" Metagross glowed with phsycic power. He sought his sights on Draggy's attack.
"No!" Draggy screamed as his atack and Metagrosses atack both hit him
 
(I CANT SLEEP! GAH!)
Nibbles watched in horror as his new friend, Draggy's, every attack failed.
"Aha!," Nibbles got as one of his few helpful thoughts entered his head.
He reached into his pouch and pulled out a pack of Oran berries and a Dragon Fang.
"Draggy! Catch!"
Nibbles threw the items toward Draggy
(gonna try to get some sleep now... Link used Rest... It failed.... :/)
 
Draggy tought this was the end...But just then a dragon claw landed ontop of him!
"Yes! Thank you nibbles!" Draggy inserted the claw into his hand
Draggy felt the energy threw him...He was getting stronger
But this was a waste of time...The attacks hit draggy!
"Gahhhhhhhh!!..." The aattacks both hit draggy, this was the end....Or so Draggy thought
"What? I thought I was dead!" Draggy was glowing a dark violet color, and so was the dragon claw
"It can't be! My special ability with this dragon claw have made me ultra powerfull!"
Draggy got into a battle stance
"Let's go Metagross!!!!!"

(Draggy's ability is Fierce Dragon wich powers his attack and himself when low on health, kinda like overgrow and blaze.)
 
"Aww man, why do you guys always show up when we're recovering!? Thats just cheap!" Granite shouted, as he suddenly burst out of the ground, surrounded by a cocoon of stones, under the Metagross. "Just leave us alone!" He yelled, pulsing out the explosive stones with dark energy. "DAMAGE TAKEN... 19 PERCENT..." The metagross calculated after the supereffective attack hit. "PREPARING... ATTACK..." And it smashed at Granite with a merged Metor mash and Psychic, along with something else... different... "DAMAGE: 100 PERCENT! FOE WILL DIE HERE!" The metal beast yelled as the attack hit Granite, who instead of fainting was engulfed in a bright light. he felt his shell cracking, and his form changing, and when the light cleared, where he had been standing, was a Tyranitar, with a blue shell and the thinner part of the shell (along with the trim) silver. the silver feather was merged with his shell. The tips of his spikes were, however a toxic looking shade of blueish purple. "So... I've evolved... TIME TO FIGHT!"
 
Chip backflipped out of the cave and looked in as the metagross meteor mashed the cave to bits, all the while spouting Data and attack power.
"Where did he come from... Ah well, I'm afraid my new attacks won't do much to him... Nor would my old ones... Ah well, might as well help..."
Chip jumped into the fray and used a sucker punch on the Metagross right before it smashed granite, who was in a new form. The metagross recoiled a bit, enough to stop the attack, but not nearly enough.
"Ah, I better be more careful..." Chip said as he threw up a substitute, and then bounded up the metagross' arm up on to it's head. He then grabbed on to the tops of the large X on the metagross' face.
"This'll be fun." Chip thought as he was swayed around by the metagross' jerking about.
 
^It doesn't affect foe metagross DX

Chip facepalmed and yelled to tailwind: "Tailwind, Metagross is a steel type pokemon! Poison moves won't do anything at all to it!"

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Umbra climbed up from his fetal position, and shook off some rock and dust.
"Ahh! Three hours of rest realli revitali--" He was interrupted by a large crash that came from the dragon's den.
"Wha-- Could that be Lugia? It must be, with that kind of power! Better head over there!"
Umbra slid down the rocky hill, eager to finally become lugia's master and conquer his enemies.
 
"No problem Draggy!" Nibbles shouted as the Pupitar crashed up into the Metagross from underground, breaking the barrier.
"Water pulse!" Nibbles shouted.
Nibbles watched as the Pupitar evolved into a Tyranitar.
"Grats friend!" Nibbles yelled, getting distracted.
Nibbles then yawned, creating a rain (Slowpokes can do that y'know) and causing the Metagross to become drowsy.
 
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