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PKMN Territories... REDUX!

(I had to wrap up the fight, I have to go to bed soon, you posted that while I was typing, can't be in every battle, sorry.)
 
"MGHFMGHFMPHGHERAL!"
(Tailwind! I thought you were with your little girlfriend, Latias! Are you going to help me out now please?)
 
(lol I already helped you out, didn't you see that? Right before I asked if you were okay)
 
"We should, and I would love to help, but I must find a place to sleep, after that battle, I am exhausted." Nibbles said, almost falling over.
(Gonna have to go, might be able to reply later.)
 
((Seeing as I only have a little bit of time left, this post shall be relatively short...))

Boing watched in awe as Ghast became basked in a glorious light, then changed into a Haunter!

The ceiling was crumbling at a frenzied rate. Though Ghast could simply float through one of the many gaping holes in the wall, Boing had no way of getting up...
Just then, a huge tremor caused by the Rhyhorn's rampage jolted him into the air, causing him to start bouncing. Boing had an idea. Body Slamming into the ground to gain momentum, Boing attempted to bounce through one of the openings in order to get out. Each impact onto the ground caused him to suffer a shattering amount of pain, but each bounce caused him to spring higher and higher, until he eventually reached the cavern ceiling, and narrowly went through an opening...

-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-

Rolace heard something sneak up behind him, and he noticed the area's acoustics changed right before he was attacked!

A duo of worn out magnemite with a rusted appearance drew near, and oddly enough, they were accompanied by what seemed to be a hulking robot with a massive drill mounted where it's head would be, two lanky mechanical arms, and a pair of caterpillar threads with a similar rusted appearance.


 
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((Sorry FD, but it's a rule: No lengendaries. Feel free to change from totodile to someone else though...))

"Hurr... Now... I have to go find the townsfolk..." Chip said.
Chip eventually found the Dustburg residents in a cave and made his transactions with Spinda. He then made the long trek back.
On his way to the camp, he heard some odd machinery clanging and whirring around. He looked to the direction of the sound, and found an odd hole in the wall. He crawled in and saw a smaller pokemon being ganged up on by some that appeared to be steel types.
"Ah... More fighting... Well, this oran berry'll get me up on my feet!" Chip ate an oran berry, and then rolled under the magnemite in front of the ralts.
"You seem outnumbered... I'll help!" Chip said as he jumped up and used shadow claw on one of the magnemites.
 
((Just... No. The fight is taking place underground/lower airship levels and your currently in Dustburg (which is REALLY far away)... Thats just ridiculous that you can see it. As master link said, you can't be in every fight. And yes, I don't see why Latias couldn't be your friend.

By the way...

Sorry.... MrGhost already said that.

I said it, he reiterated it. it's perfectly fine, he was just enforcing the rules.))
 
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(NO! no legendaries.... you were allready bunnying a NPC a bit, but we'll let it slide. shell be a regular NPC.)
Sorry.... MrGhost already said that.


Tailiwind looks around, trying to find something to do. Something....
He heads to the Quarry, and flies upwards to look at the sky.
Something is going to happen soon,I have a feeling,Tailwind thought. It's bound. Not with the titans, oh no. They're sealed up. But the Element Legends: Groudon, Kyogre and Rayquaza.........beings so strong that Umbra couldn't take 'em..... He started to look around. He flies towards the forest, but sees an Airship, and heads in.
WOW! This airship......and I thought humans enslave Pokemon for their work! I---i have to--g-go up! And maybe down......but always up.

(In one of my later posts, I'll make a propasal to have more territories, and a human city.....>)

Right............
 
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while Granite was surfing around later that day, he found a blue orb in the water. "Not again.... better keep it, tho. we cant take another legendary battle."
((Youre catching on. I'll lead. Question. Since the wings are there, do you have the silver wing still) After exploring the upper levels of the airship, he finds a Green Orb. "Hmm, if i'm right... this is an orb FOR SUMMONING A EXTREMELY POWERFUL LEGENDARY PkMn!" He flies around, signalling a Where-is-Granite-OMG signal.
 
((Okaaaay, FD you gave me and Magus a lovely plot idea, so we'll be going along with that, k?))

Umbra stumbled into a room, red with molten magma.
"Ugh... I've been under the quarry for close to a day now... Where am I?"
Umbra got up and walked forward. There was a large pool of molten lava bubbling before him, with a small pedestal that had a strange item on it.
"What could that be..." Umbra said as he approached the item. It was a medium sized red orb, that seemed to radiate intense power.
"This..." Umbra said to himself, "This could be what I've been looking for...
Umbra slowly started to move his hand closer to the orb. When he finally touched it, it flashed, and floated up in the air. The orb glowed radiantly as the ground started shaking and the magma bubbled and spurted small geysers.
"G-groudon..." Umbra said, as a giant form rose from the Magma and let out a terrifying roar.
The red orb floated slowly in to Umbra's hands, and Groudon focused all it's attention on him. It put it's hand out, offering umbra to get on. Umbra jumped on, and Groudon placed Umbra at the top of it's head.
"Your mine now, Big Red!" Umbra said, as Groudon flew upward and blasted through the ground with an eruption. Groudon landed on the ground, causing the earth to shake once more.
"Now..." Umbra said, "It's time for payback..."
 
(I have a question FD, how the HECK did you know Granite had the blue orb? Isn't that supposed to be kinda part of finding the person who had it? It's like me first seeing Chip and saying "Hi Chip!" I don't know that yet... Just like you, you shouldn't know that Granite has the Blue Orb...)
 
((Heres some terrible filler so that we can get on with the story while Niprop is gone... Also, FD, by 'Realse' are you trying to say 'Raise' or 'Release'?))

Suddenly, the two magnemites used a zapcannon on Chip, and he flew up and out of the airship. (Sorry worst reason ever)
"Ugh..." Chip said, "That was tough... Oh, Granite? Whats this a 'bout sky tower?"
 
(I have a question FD, how the HECK did you know Granite had the blue orb? Isn't that supposed to be kinda part of finding the person who had it? It's like me first seeing Chip and saying "Hi Chip!" I don't know that yet... Just like you, you shouldn't know that Granite has the Blue Orb...)
Remember the orbs are RADIATING with power?? RADIATING is kind of a light. That light is a strong light.....
 
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