Please rate my team(please)

[Kittyipawd]

well yes the only conditions are i must have three flying types at all times

Bronzong(i need a good nickname) @ Occa berry
Nature: Relaxed
EV's : 252 HP / 152 ATT / 8 DEF / 98

Moves :
Gryo ball
Explosion
Stealth Rock
Hypnonis

Dusknoir(Shinigami) @ Leftovers
Nature: Careful
EV's 252 HP/ 76 DEF / 180 SP . DEF

Moves:
Thunder punch
Fire punch
WoW
Pain split

Electrivire(needs a nickname) @ expert belt (i need electrivire so no life orb)
Nature :Rash
EV'S 38 ATT/ 220 SPD / 252 SP. ATT

Moves
thunderbolt
flamethrower
HP (ice)
Cross chop

Togekiss (Cutiepie) @ leftovers
Nature:calm
EV's 252 HP / 232 DEF / 24 SP DEF

Moves:
Nasty plot
Air slash
Roost
Baton pass

Skarmory(needs a nickname) @ shed shell(thinking about swicthing to lefties)
Nature : Impish
EV'S: 252 HP / 96 ATT / 156 DEF / 4 SPD

Moves:
Roost
spikes
whirlwind
brave bird

Swellow (phoenix) @ flame orb
Nature:Timid
EV'S 4 DEF/ 252 ATT/ 252 SPEED

Moves
U-turn
arial ace
facade
protect

 

[Kittyipawd]

*bump* please guyss give my thread some attention....

 

[Dark Azelf]

well yes the only conditions are i must have three flying types at all times

Bronzong(i need a good nickname) @ Leftovers
Nature: Relaxed
EV's : 252 HP / 152 ATT / 8 DEF / 98

Moves :
Gryo ball
Explosion
Stealth Rock
Hypnonis

Fine, wants leftovers though


Dusknoir(Shinigami) @ Leftovers
Nature: Careful
EV's 252 HP/ 76 DEF / 180 SP . DEF

Moves:
Thunder punch
Shadow Sneak
WoW
Pain split


Fine, Shadow Sneak >> Fire Punch or Gengar will lol at you.

Electrivire(needs a nickname) @ Life Orb
Nature :Rash
EV'S 76 Atk / 252 SpA / 180 Spe

Moves
thunderbolt
flamethrower
HP (ice)
Cross chop


Ev spread needs changing. Fine

Yes and Electivire NEEDS Life Orb or it fails.


Togekiss (Cutiepie) @ leftovers
Nature:calm
EV's 252 HP / 232 DEF / 24 SP DEF

Moves:
Nasty plot
Air slash
Roost
Baton pass


Err yeah

Skarmory(needs a nickname) @ shed shell
Nature : Impish
EV'S: 252 HP / 60 ATT / 196 DEF

Moves:
Roost
spikes
whirlwind
brave bird

Honestly ive tried that Ev spread and if fail epically, you dont last long, So i Changed it and it wants SHED SHELL or Magnezone says HI !!!!

Swellow (phoenix) @ flame orb
Nature:Jolly
EV'S 4 DEF/ 252 ATT/ 252 SPEED

Moves
U-turn
arial ace
facade
protect

I guess But wants JOLLY

Changes are in bold-ness


You need a special wall (No Bronzong isnt one your using it Relaxed and not Sassy,) or you get raped by SpecsMence, Heatran and the like. Dusknoir is 2HKO'D by those

Also once Bronzong is gone DD Taunt Tyranitar does a number on you.

Maybe a Bulky ground type Such as swampert etc. and a special wall.

 

[Kittyipawd]

sadly the other day a gengar did lool at me , also what would be a better pysical attacker, a gryados , or a aareodactyal

 

[Dark Azelf]

sadly the other day a gengar did lool at me , also what would be a better pysical attacker, a gryados , or a aareodactyal

Either, although you might want to run a Rapid Spinner if your running multiple flying types So stealth Rock doesnt kill you.

There are four good Rapid Spinners

Forretress

Starmie

Donphan

Claydol

 

[Kittyipawd]

ya but stealh sddoesnt ever reaolly bother me , i keep electrvire as my electric aboser ,(skarmory sp defense sucks so much T-T) and i keep dusnoir as anti-spin ans bronzong as a startte , can dophan serve bronzong's purpose?

 

[Dark Azelf]

ya but stealh sddoesnt ever reaolly bother me , i keep electrvire as my electric aboser ,(skarmory sp defense sucks so much T-T) and i keep dusnoir as anti-spin ans bronzong as a startte , can dophan serve bronzong's purpose?

Yeah it sets up SR and Spins for you, SR is an issue if you keep switching in on it bear this in mind, take it from me, i didnt run a Rapid Spinner until i battled a guy who set up 3 layers of spikes, 2 layers of toxic spikes and SR, think how i felt when i had to switch =[.


Still the issue here is you have no Sp.Wall. Dusknoir is a dual wall, but cant take Draco Meteors or Flash Fire Fire Blasts from Specs Mence and Scarf/Specs Heatran respectivly.

 

[Anti]

ya but stealh sddoesnt ever reaolly bother me , i keep electrvire as my electric aboser ,(skarmory sp defense sucks so much T-T) and i keep dusnoir as anti-spin ans bronzong as a startte , can dophan serve bronzong's purpose?

After deciphering that post...

You don't have anything to deal with Gengar. Saying SR doesn't bother you...what? SR does a number on half your pokemon!

Enemy Electivire will also plow through your team...easily.

Stuff like Specs Shadow Ballers can destroy Noit and then Bronzong, for the ultimate in sweeping doom. Heatran will also obliterate your entire team.

Needs SOMETHING that can take status...good luck with Thunder Waves and WoWs.

 

[Dark Azelf]

After deciphering that post...

You don't have anything to deal with Gengar. Saying SR doesn't bother you...what? SR does a number on half your pokemon!

Enemy Electivire will also plow through your team...easily.

Stuff like Specs Shadow Ballers can destroy Noit and then Bronzong, for the ultimate in sweeping doom. Heatran will also obliterate your entire team.

Needs SOMETHING that can take status...good luck with Thunder Waves and WoWs.

This sounds like a Job for Blissey to fill.

 

[Kittyipawd]

is there an anit spin special wall??? , or a bird that can do that? , i kept skarm as physical wall since it's defense is sky high but is there a special defense one?