Please Rate my team

[elflord2005]

This is my first competitive team. Please feel free to give any and all criticism. Evs will not be included b/c i'm not sure what would be best for each one.

1. Charizard @ charcoal
Mild
-blastburn
-heat wave
-fly
-crunch
2. Lucario @ muscle band
adamant
-close combat
-earthquake
-crunch
-stone edge
3. Alakazam @ choice specs
modest
-trick
-psychic
-energy ball
-focus blast
4. Umbreon @ bright powder
Impish
-toxic
-flash
-swagger
-faint attack
5. Garchomp @ razor claw
adamant
-crunch
-stone edge
-dragon claw
-earthquake
6. shuckle @ leftovers
sassy
-toxic
-stealth rock
-protect
-endure

Basically, I have 4 sweepers and 2 tanks with a toxic combo. all criticism is welcomed.

 

[Dark Azelf]

Firstly moves like Blast Burn are noob. They let the foe set up with ease. Same with Fly. Use Air Slash and Focus Blast and Dragon Pulse > Crunch.

Zam wants Timid and Signal Beam over Energy Ball for better coverage.

Garchomp is uber and thus banned.

Shuckle just sucks and so does Umbreon, the sets and the pokemon in general. There are MUCH better tanks and walls. You also fail to cover threats sufficiently. I suggest you take a look at our stickies (at the top) and also this and this.


Post EV's or we cant do anything.

 

[RTHookers]

But he's right, if you want harsh, go to GameFAQs.
Anyway, what Azelf said, just replace them with something that can wall better. Snorlax can work out instead of Shuckle, and if you resist Umbreon can be a lead.