Plot maybe? Too much..

[PixieCircle8]

Well just avoid the thread name,

Okay, i come to discuss about the matter i got some idea about an fanfic. It's some slight cross-over of SAO x Accel World x Baka and Test. Well, it's not exactly a fanfiction, i just make an idea based on the them and then start to make a different plot and others.

Now, the fact that the rules is needing such a great grammar and tenses, it's make me wanna go die to the side of heaven. I'm wondering if someone could, umm.. help me with some thingy that i'm not really great at? Or.. I've been wondering if someone going to take over this plot?

Well, okay..
This is the plot,

Spoiler:

Himezuka Hinata, not stupid but yet a gamers that really hate studies. A school that just start to running at the world got Hinata's attention. Yes, it's a virtual school.
With just pay the monthly cost, and with an AmuSphere, you can dive in to the virtual school area and become the fantasy student!
The school, Sakuraiota Academy is make the different level of strength and the lesson that you have to take, Heart-Spade-Club-Diamond. The easiest is definitely is Heart, Hinata then join the Heart class and go to the school-- it's rather shocking truth that they're studying at a land of virtual fantasy RPG and after the school, they could go fight with sword and others to decrease or even increase enemy or self point of a lesson!
This is a good chance for a VRMMORPG maniac to show the skill up-- well, but the point of strength based on the school point so Hinata is going to work out to be the smartest ever!

Any question? Maybe someone want to give an advice? G-mod-san? ^w^)/

 

[Crux]

Ichi!:
That doesn't exactly seem like a Fan Fiction, more of an Inspired-By/Loosely-Based-On type story.

Ni!:
If you're going to make an alternate schooling system, then you need to make sure that it'll work.
In the example of Baka to Test Shoukanjuu, the type of school featured would actually work. (Well, maybe not the avatars...) Each aspect of it, ranging from the S.T.Wars, to the classroom equipment is heavily reliant on actual study, and increasing your intellect. No school would allow for the students to simply kill monsters to buff their G.P.A.

San!:
I'm really sorry, but I'm not entirerly sure what you're asking here. Ahehheh. . .
Do you want a Betareader? Advice? Somebody to take over the plot?