[Pokémon] PMD: Hero (PG-13)

[インフェルノの津波]

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hero. Hope you enjoy it. Reviewers please Copy n' Paste the chapter and put it in spoilers, highlighting the mistakes in red thanks.

PROLOGUE

Every one knows the story: Humans and Pokemon live together, best friends, blah blah blah.

But what would happen if there were no Humans? What would Pokemon be like then? Would they still be those cute, cuddly harmless creatures?

The answer is no. They would be much more savage, merciless animals without Humans to tame them.

You ask, why are you telling me this? Humans are still here, right?

Well, in this story about to be told, there isn't. You're going to be shocked by what happens when all Humans suddenly vanish in a split second and what happens to Kanto/Johto/Hoenn/Sinnoh and others when Pokemon take over the world once more.

Where have the Humans gone? No one knows, not even the Alpha Pokemon, Arceus. But one thing is for certain: nothing will stay the same, everything we think we know about Pokemon will change, and how the world of Pokemon once was shall change as well.

What is this unbelievable story you ask?

This is the story of a Pokemon who shall shake this world to its core.

The Pokemon's name is Hiro, and this is his story.

 

[Yusshin]

Typical prologue for a movie.

But what would happen if there were no Humans? What would Pokemon be like then? Would they still be those cute, cuddly harmless creatures?

The answer is no. They would be much more savage, untamed, merciless animals without Humans to tame them.

"without Humans to tame them" indicates that they're untamed / undomesticated, which pretty much repeats the adjective "untamed" appearing beforehand. I think you should rephrase that.

Also, it's odd to see "Humans" capitalized, unless the narrator's a Pokemon >> Personal style, I guess.