I played this and i noticed:
Upstairs is fine, downstairs has a wall in the middle of no where, table movement permissions messed up, you can almost walk on it from the front, and from the back, you cant get close enough to it.
The signpost in the middle still says pallet town.
Theres a girl in the trees.
Your rival doesnt have a sister and your rival is spying on what should be professor birch.
The starters are mixed up.
The scriptings not done and you should get a pokemon from oak (should be birch) like that.
Im guessing you havent edited text.
No pokegear =(
No togepi egg =(
The man who wants some coffee is sleeping on the floor =P
And it goes on, have you got aim or msn because there are a few things i could help you with.