FireRed hack: Pokémon Itzsu Region Sage

[Lord Varion]

Hack info
Fire Red (UK)
Name Pokémon Itzsu Region Saga

Story

Spoiler:

"One must acknowledge one's defeat before he can move on ...
... I will go solo for now ... So that on day i will form a stronger
organization!
Putting together the potential of many is how you produce a huge power ...
Thats what a organization is
That's the strength of an organization...
But! I failed... to make the best use of my subordinates' potential...!
But you shall witness one day the revival of me and my Team ROcket!
........ One Day you will understand ......."
-6 years later-
... Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported ...
No team rocket ... No muggings...Robbing...Nothing
Life is perfect as they would say ... We found the perfect power source
to fuel our region -Itszu- and More pokemon have been discovered
But today i am 15 and i get my first pokemon ... I can't wait
I am destined to become the Newest Pokemon Master
I will beat the bigshots like Red Gold and Brendan

Features:

*NEw region
*New fakemon (Around 50 - 70)
*New heroes
*SIlver as rival
*Return of Team rocket (COntrolling region resources)
*Battle old heroes (Red Gold Brendon and Dawn)
* Meet many people around the world

Screens:

Videos:
Kanto PAst (No events)
https://romhacktube.com/video/5YXYBONK1BN7/Pokemon-IRS-Past-KANTO-Route-1-added

Starters :

Spoiler:

black and white starters

To be done
Make and insert Fakemon
Ow to be made and inserted
World map TO be made and inserted
Music to be inserted

Credit SSKD's Rom base

Team Apllying sheet: :P
Places availible anything?

Name:
Position wanted
Back up postition
Proof 1
Proof 2

The end

 

[Mana1]

Errr...

Itzsu sounds a lot like Isshu, at first I thought that's what you meant but obviously not XD.

The story is boring and doesn't actually say anything about what the games about, I got more from your features list.

Also how come team rocket were defeated 6 years ago but "Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported". Is there NO normal crime in this place? o_o

Finally your mapping looks a bit stale, the mountains around the cave are boring and the houses in your town are far too close.

(Also how come your Signature shows something completely different...)

 

[Lord Varion]

Errr...

Itzsu sounds a lot like Isshu, at first I thought that's what you meant but obviously not XD.

The story is boring and doesn't actually say anything about what the games about, I got more from your features list.

Also how come team rocket were defeated 6 years ago but "Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported". Is there NO normal crime in this place? o_o

Finally your mapping looks a bit stale, the mountains around the cave are boring and the houses in your town are far too close.

(Also how come your Signature shows something completely different...)

1. Itszu is a region slighlty east of Isshu therefore i made them sound the same
(as Pokemon B&W progress i made add some maps ;) )
2.The first part of story is the sayin of Giovanni in HGSS
How he promised silver he will one day return with team rocket
Producing A big spread of evil
Hence why silver will be rival
3. Those words are from 3 years before team rocket did the radio tower shizzle
there fore its three eyars after HGSS
MEaning 3 years with no team rocket

4.I agree my mapping skills meak

 

[vietazn654]

Another hack... So you're done with that Mario one? And Itzsu sounds like Isshu.

 

[Darkerm]

I don't understand the 1st part of your story. Your map is kinda weird.

The mountain don't really look like mountain.

the sand\muddy path is too much used.

why did you place houses too close each other.

Please improve the map. give more info of your hack. Good Luck

 

[Lord Varion]

Another hack... So you're done with that Mario one? And Itzsu sounds like Isshu.

As i said to swift sign

Itszu is a region eat of Isshu
Therefore they sound the same

@darkerm

i'm fixing the map stuf :/

 

[vietazn654]

As i said to swift sign

Itszu is a region eat of Isshu
Therefore they sound the same

@darkerm

i'm fixing the map stuf :/

East of Isshu? How about Kanto and Johto? They don't sound the same. =p But good luck I guess...

how long is this hack going to last before you make another?

Ikr. I hope that you at least release and alpha.

 

[Lord Varion]

NEW UPDATES

Due to queries about my maps
here are some NEW screenies

Mt crudge entrance redone

Tishun town path Redone

More spcae in Triboot

Your home

Home town now has beach :)

East of Isshu? How about Kanto and Johto? They don't sound the same. =p But good luck I guess...

Ikr. I hope that you at least release and alpha.

Kanto and Johto kinda the same

The both have the TO in them

and share the same number of letters in title :)

And a alpha should be realeased before summer hols (Or even beta)

 

[giradialkia]

how long is this hack going to last before you make another?

Dude, I understand where you're coming from, but for goodness' sake but the guy a bit of slack. He's attempted a lot of hacks in his time here, but for every one of the more recent ones you (yes, you, personally) have said the same thing- "I wonder how long this one'll last."
...Looking at his profile, you've even confronted him about it there. Have you ever thought to take a step back for once, just to give one of them a go, to actually see how far he can get with it? I don't know if you're trying to motivate him in to proving you wrong, but I really doubt that'd work, for Nintendork. Hell, it probably wouldn't work for me.
We all know how annoying it is to see someone start hack after hack after hack, but even for cases like this (and let me say it clearly- You've overdone it big time, Nintendork), give him a sliver of a chance.
Personally, I'm sceptical of your dedication to hacking in general, Nintendork, but I'm willing to see how far you'll go with this one, at least.
However, I don't really get a feeling that you've thought this through fully. Like many other hacks in Progressing Hacks recently, you're recycling a load of elements from the existing games, such as re-battling older protagonists. That's ok, but bear in mind that there was a reason for that in GSCHGSS- It was to become the world's strongest trainer. Beating Red grants you that title. Too many people do this because it's 'cool', but often completely random, otherwise.
Also, I hate re-using previous Rivals, myself. Silver was the rival of Gold/Crystal/Lyra- he travelled at the same time as them, he grew stronger as they did, and becomes far too strong a Trainer to be re-used as a Rival. Realistically, they wouldn't just drop all of their high levelled Pokemon for the sake of a new adventure.
Also, the Fakemon... My advice? Don't. Trust me, you may actually get further without them.
Anyway, I like the choice of tiles. Even though you didn't insert them, at least you have a good taste in graphics. Good luck with this, Nintendork- I really will be keeping an eye on this, and as a fellow hacker I urge you to really make an effort with it.

 

[Darkerm]

Well, You Improve them a lot. Btw, I am not making fun of you asking this but will you work on this hack or get another one to work?

 

[Lord Varion]

Dude, I understand where you're coming from, but for goodness' sake but the guy a bit of slack. He's attempted a lot of hacks in his time here, but for every one of the more recent ones you (yes, you, personally) have said the same thing- "I wonder how long this one'll last."
...Looking at his profile, you've even confronted him about it there. Have you ever thought to take a step back for once, just to give one of them a go, to actually see how far he can get with it? I don't know if you're trying to motivate him in to proving you wrong, but I really doubt that'd work, for Nintendork. Hell, it probably wouldn't work for me.
We all know how annoying it is to see someone start hack after hack after hack, but even for cases like this (and let me say it clearly- You've overdone it big time, Nintendork), give him a sliver of a chance.
Personally, I'm sceptical of your dedication to hacking in general, Nintendork, but I'm willing to see how far you'll go with this one, at least.
However, I don't really get a feeling that you've thought this through fully. Like many other hacks in Progressing Hacks recently, you're recycling a load of elements from the existing games, such as re-battling older protagonists. That's ok, but bear in mind that there was a reason for that in GSCHGSS- It was to become the world's strongest trainer. Beating Red grants you that title. Too many people do this because it's 'cool', but often completely random, otherwise.
Also, I hate re-using previous Rivals, myself. Silver was the rival of Gold/Crystal/Lyra- he travelled at the same time as them, he grew stronger as they did, and becomes far too strong a Trainer to be re-used as a Rival. Realistically, they wouldn't just drop all of their high levelled Pokemon for the sake of a new adventure.
Also, the Fakemon... My advice? Don't. Trust me, you may actually get further without them.
Anyway, I like the choice of tiles. Even though you didn't insert them, at least you have a good taste in graphics. Good luck with this, Nintendork- I really will be keeping an eye on this, and as a fellow hacker I urge you to really make an effort with it.

I will admit i have been skipping from hack to hack
To be honest i have something wrong with me
I'm am a guy who is picky but full of ideas at the sametime therefore i have a hard time sticking with one thing
But this hack will trimuph :rambo:

Well, You Improve them a lot. Btw, I am not making fun of you asking this but will you work on this hack or get another one to work?

Thanks i like the new look now
I Will Keep It Up With This One :)

P.S new story/Updated

Spoiler:

"One must acknowledge one's defeat before he can move on ...
... I will go solo for now ... So that on day i will form a stronger
organization!
Putting together the potential of many is how you produce a huge power ...
Thats what a organization is
That's the strength of an organization...
But! I failed... to make the best use of my subordinates' potential...!
But you shall witness one day the revival of me and my Team ROcket!
........ One Day you will understand ......."
These were the words of a man whom had lost everything he had
His buisness
His Loyal workers
But most of all ... His son
He plans to spend his years in hiding ...
Planning the ultimate come-back
-6 years later-
... Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported ...
No team rocket ... No muggings...Robbing...Nothing
Life is perfect as they would say ... We found the perfect power source
to fuel our region -Itszu- and Kryogre Groudon and Rayquaza are coming soon
There come every year the bring more land every year it isnt much though
If anyone was to interfear with these L.Pokemons Work
God knows what would happen!

@Gira (Agian)

I plan to use silver because this hack is mainly about Giovanni's Come back as Team .R LEader
I may make a diffo rival but for now it will be him
WARNING BIG GIVE AWAY IN SPOILER

Spoiler:

You wont battle SILVER until you have at least done the 7th gym So that he will be strong but u should be strong enough

That is all
For now

 

[vietazn654]

Due to queries about my maps
here are some NEW screenies

Mt crudge entrance redone

Tishun town path Redone

More spcae in Triboot

Your home

Home town now has beach :)



Kanto and Johto kinda the same

The both have the TO in them

and share the same number of letters in title :)

And a alpha should be realeased before summer hols (Or even beta)

Now this is better. But the beach part I don't like. You should have it all edge surrounding thing, or all beach wave surrounding thing. Not both. It makes it look weird.

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

You need to map out more trees in the Hero's hometown.
Other than that, the maps are slightly improved.

But like what Vietazn said, the beach looks weird.
Try to make it like... I don't know, more like "normal" beaches?

 

[Lord Varion]

You need to map out more trees in the Hero's hometown.
Other than that, the maps are slightly improved.

But like what Vietazn said, the beach looks weird.
Try to make it like... I don't know, more like "normal" beaches?

Can anyone define these "normal" beaches?

 

[Kininja]

Oooh
Another Nintendork Productions
:P

Looks good
I <3 the story
Anyway dont give up
I know you can do it hunni ;) x

 

[Lord Varion]

Oooh
Another Nintendork Productions
:P

Looks good
I <3 the story
Anyway dont give up
I know you can do it hunni ;) x

Umm.. Ok
Thanks
Quite the "hunni ;) x" part for the love of god

and

:..:UPDATE:..:

Mt crudge valley
The other side of mt crudge
and next to Crudge CIty
Home of APollo
The normal type gym leader

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Can anyone define these "normal" beaches?

Well, a normal beach is supposed to have some people swimming, playing around and some benches. Do you get what I mean?

 

[Nero_Forever]

Can anyone define these "normal" beaches?

What I would do to make your beach "normal" is to make it smaller, it seems to 'tall', perhaps have the sand end at the top of the first tree and have a bit of grass in front of the house. Also, the beach is too square, water erodes the sand so you wouldn't see a beach that is 'straight' per sé, perhaps add some shape to the beach and a couple of boulders on the beach maybe?

Anyway I hope my advice helped, good luck with this =)

 

[Faline]

One advice, You must improve first before making an hack. Getting inspirations from the works of other is probably one way. As well as being willing to achieve what you want to achieve. Yes, I know through hacks you can improve everything by the criticisms given by others. But as what as I have seen, It's just all over the same getting a base from your previous hacks/projects.

Either way, Best of lucks.

 

[Lord Varion]

Update
Story :
Old story but this added
Giovanni realised RED was the cause of his Failure
SO he travelled back in time to kidnapp him before RED could stop team rocket ... Due to too much time travel the Regions Itzsu and Kanto
Fused toegther in space and time ... But Team rocket rule the Itzsu region
Due to Red's Kidnapping

Video of time travel:

https://romhacktube.com/video/2ADKBMHMR8Y7/Pokémon-Itzsu-Saga-GO-to-past-KANTO

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