FireRed hack: Pokémon Lost Gold ( The next Chapter )

[Lord Varion]

Name: Pokémon lost gold ( The Next Chapter )
Hack of: Pokémon Fire Red (UK)
Creator: Nintendork15

THIS IS NOT A GSC REMAKE

Story:
One day our hero [GOLD/KRIS] get to help Prof.ELM with a simple job in return they get to keep a pokémon
when arriving at the Post office the child has a letter from there friend (BRENDAN) saying how he has moved to HOENN
to impress your friend you decide to win the itcket to HOENN by deafteing the legendary league in EVERGRAND CITY
...
But along your path to victory evil lurks and seeks to rule the region oh JOHTO
Can you stop the evil mastermind from doing this evil deed!

Features:
New story(see above)(HOW COULD YOU MISS IT)
New HOENN region
Two battle towers
Two regions
New plot
New ISLANDS (JANTO ISLANDS)
NEW EVIL!
NEW heroes(Losten & Lostelle)
New rival ( Deken )
Old rivals(Blue,Silver)
Old heroes(Brendan,may,wally,steven and wallace)
Screenies:

Team:
Nintendork15(mapper,scripter,tileinserter)
Swift sign (mapper)
Peregrinefig(Scripter)
Muffintm (back up scripter)
Banjora marxvile (Tile teacher ^^)

Credit:
Tiles from google if they were yours tell me and i give credit to you
new OW found on google as well tell me if yours and you get the credit
Critism of everyone ^^

 

[Muffin™]

I'll be a scripter if you want! ;D (I'm not adavnce, but intermenate!)

 

[PeregrineFig]

Well, my current project is hit with a massive bug that I'm trying to figure out right now, so if you'd like, I can script for you. I'm not an excellent scripter yet, but I work hard to put nice levels of polish into my scripts. I've written from scratch some scripts for a starter and other stuff involving Oak in my hack, so I know all the basics and some slightly more advanced stuff. (Also, I hope you wouldn't be against me going through and correcting the English of your existing scripts; improper grammar/spelling really bothers me)

 

[PeregrineFig]

Bleh, fix the tile connections with the paths between Route 27 (or whatever # it is) and New Bark Town, and, what's up with Elm's script? Looks good so far other than that, though. Also, PM me whenever you need more scripts, I'm interested in helping you out with this.

 

[Lord Varion]

Bleh, fix the tile connections with the paths between Route 27 (or whatever # it is) and New Bark Town, and, what's up with Elm's script? Looks good so far other than that, though. Also, PM me whenever you need more scripts, I'm interested in helping you out with this.

Yh im working on tiles thing


The part where he is sayin AA that was the player name
i dont put much effort init to be honest

 

[TheRichar]

I like the Idea, but, first take your time and do it as good as you can, so the first beta will catch the people's eye... but be sure to never give up :D

 

[Lord Varion]

PokéMon Lost gold THEN NEXT CHAPTER beta info

I like the Idea, but, first take your time and do it as good as you can, so the first beta will catch the people's eye... but be sure to never give up :D

The first gym probs wont be out till i have at least out a new tileset in

i need a inserter first :/

and at the first gym and the first evil team encounter

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

The first gym probs wont be out till i have at least out a new tileset in

i need a inserter first :/

and at the first gym and the first evil team encounter

I thought you could insert? Now now, you should learn yourself if you can't. Otherwise, you will not get anywhere, and my tutorial will have 1 less reader.

Anyway, work on your grammar in your first post. Also, the path thing between the route ad New Bark Town looks weird. And a few too many bushes in Route... Whatever.

 

[Lord Varion]

those are replacements for headvutt bushes
they will be edited

 

[NotoriouzElmo]

i like the idea of the idea of the hack but im hopin 2 see sum new tiles to make ur hack a bit more unique , even tho u cud work with the fire red tiles if u really want 2

 

[Lord Varion]

i like the idea of the idea of the hack but im hopin 2 see sum new tiles to make ur hack a bit more unique , even tho u cud work with the fire red tiles if u really want 2

Im not sure but i have changed the palette is that cool enough

i'll put pics on soooon

 

[Lord Varion]

I thought you could insert? Now now, you should learn yourself if you can't. Otherwise, you will not get anywhere, and my tutorial will have 1 less reader.

Anyway, work on your grammar in your first post. Also, the path thing between the route ad New Bark Town looks weird. And a few too many bushes in Route... Whatever.

Since when was i able to
i cant do it for life

where does it say i can insert who ru O.o

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

You know who I am. Wait, why does that matter?

Anyway, best thing is to learn instead of asking for help. Better in the long run.

 

[giradialkia]

That New Bark map is almost a direct port from Shiny Gold. There's even space behind the Player's house, where Zel hid that Pikachu.
It's as if you just imported the map and kept the default tiles. (I'm not accusing you of theft, but that map is too similar to that of Shiny Gold (further proof is that Elm's lab uses Oak's Lab tiles, but with a Pokecenter door- as was in Shiny Gold).
I'm not going to say anything else, but I'm beginning to wonder. It's likely you wouldn't have the connection problem if you edited an existing map yourself (or at least, you'd still see the map, just not connected correctly).
Also, Banjora's right, learn stuff. Learn everything. It's good for you.

 

[NiKaNoRoU]

Name: Pokémon lost gold ( The Next Chapter )
Woot?

a WHOLE new experience - I don't see anything new so far.


The bedroom (not much new) - That looks like an empty office, without the paperwork (yes, offices have beds, for obvious reasons. ;))

Downstairs ( yh no Pokégear so far ...)

Outside ( Rain = New world) - Not really. Just a rainy New Bark? :/

Silver script(sprite needed) - Oh well.

yeah no connections yet - Fail. And i'm talking to the overworld, overlapping the bush =D

Thanks to:
Banjor Marxvile for honest critism - [...]
And peregrinfug for a new script - [...]

Some comments are in bold.

In other words, you need to point out what have you done to your hack in order to stand out. We currently have 3 good GSC Remakes, HGSS, and well, GSC. (Yes, I am currently viewing this as a GSC remake, nothing more, you don't prove that 'anything more' anyway). What makes yours special?

Imo you should try out something innovative. I can't know exactly, but many new things will do.

Good luck anyway.

 

[Lord Varion]

Yh i based my map on that one
but now i have done it by myself
by lookin at the old maps from g/s/c games
but yeah thanks for sppottin that out ^_^


THIS IS NOT A GSC REMAKE

It is a Hack that happens to take place in the Johto and kanto region

 

[Lord Varion]

UPDATES (drum roll) ^^

This hack takes place in Johto and Hoenn ( to make it unique)

As proof the entrance to hoenn is in cianwood city and leads to johto path

Maps(i have finished)
New bark town

Route 29

Cianwood city

Joenn Path

 

[PeregrineFig]

I like the new tiles, but you should change the palettes around, the old colors of the rocks and water are blah. Also, tile error in New Bark Town, you should use the block editor and make a sign with a sand-path background.

 

[Lord Varion]

I like the new tiles, but you should change the palettes around, the old colors of the rocks and water are blah. Also, tile error in New Bark Town, you should use the block editor and make a sign with a sand-path background.

Critism Luv LUUUUUV IT !!!!
thanks im doing that right now
;)

 

[Banjora Marxvile]

3 criticisms: 1: You still haven't learnt tile inserting, despite my offer to teach you? Don't rely on that ROM Base, as the pallettes look kinda iffy on it. Especially the wild grass. It doesn't fit the overall theme of the rest of the tiles, no matter what you will replace them with.

2.

The mountain edges here defy physics, especially the ones with the stairs. Look carefully at where they join at the North and South, it looks wrong, and is physically wrong.

3.

Wrong tree base on some of them (check all the green ones, you put the yellow base on them!)

Oh, and TRY to add new things. You may say it isn't a GSC remake, but from the screenies at the tope, it is hard to see it NOT being a remake, so maybe update them with NEW things. This screenshot and description makes it seem like a GSC remake:

Silver script(sprite needed)