I'd be glad if you even finished the starting town...So, is the option of naming the male character available? Or is Richie an unchangeable default name?
I've made a comment on this indirectly before, but now I guess I'll give my opinion.
What you've got here seems excellently planned. The maps don't show much signs of inconsistency. But the issue I'll point out is the character spriting - it does not fit in. The sprites for the main characters are somewhat okay but are also show more pixel compared to sprites in the game. Also, the palette for your mail characters may need a bit of redoing - Richie's hat just isn't good looking in the sprites shown.