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I'm back and finally I've fixed my game's story. I just wrote a crapload of stuff for this earlier, took me about an hour, but the stupid token expired and I accidentally reloaded the page and erased everything. UGH. Here's the shortened summary.
The tropical island of Fendro is a place that nobody has ever fully explored. All that has been mapped of it is a small strip of land on the coast. A team of scientist and explorers have taken an exploration among the Source River to map out more of the region, but they haven't returned yet. Even so, the small strip of perfect beach that has been covered is bustling with tourists and the like. Still, many people set out to the island in search of the missing researchers... and never come back.
You are a college student with your (insert starter pick of choice), and you are relaxing on the beach. Your class is here for an exploration but you have a day to chill on the beach before the hike. You are relaxing with your friend, who has the usual starter counter. Suddenly, rockets pelt the whole entire area. In confusion, you follow your friend into a building. You two huddle into a corner as rockets strike everywhere around you. As the place collapses, you feel dizzy and start hearing strange noises.
Hours later, you awaken to the sound of struggling. Your friend, very hurt, struggles to keep uniformed men off of you. He is carried away and so are you. The little tourist resorts and beaches are in ruins. You two are shoved into a truck. Then, everything goes black.
Later, you awaken in a cell. Your friend tells you everything that he heard when they were carrying you guys away. He says that they want to get information about something from you. Unless you tell them what they want, they will keep you locked up with no food or water. He has no idea what they want, or who they are. he also says that you shouldn't tell them what they want.
A man comes into the cell. He threatens to kill you both unless you can answer his question. He asks your friend where the Space Station is located. Your friend doesn't tell him, and is slammed into the wall. He gives you one last chance to save your life and your friend's. You have to answer the question. Answer "I dont know where that is." to the question. He will try to kill your friend, but then suddenly the dizziness comes back and you start hearing the sound again. The screen goes black for a split second with a thud sound, and then comes clear. The man is knocked out. Your friend tells you that you really hit him hard, and that he looks unconscious. The screen goes black again, and this time, a smashing sound is heard. When the screen clears up, you aren't dizzy, and there's a hole in the wall. You two escape, wondering what happened. Now, the alarms are off, and you have 3 minutes to find your Pokémon and escape the camp.
You two end up in a town by the Source River. An old man, Professor Palm will talk to you. After exchanging information, you realize that this is the land where no person has gone before and survived!
2: Slower EXP gain for tougher battles (your starter probably wont evolve until past the second gym)
3: All 494 Pokémon catchable in the wild
4: No Elite 4, just Battle Island
5: Training Simulators that can help gain EXP and prepare you for big battles
6: "Infected" Pokémon, have some special moves
7: Giant region
8: Tougher opponents
9: 12 starter Pokémon options
10: Powers and effects of moves changed a bit
11: Upgraded Pokétch
12: Big caves and mountains
13: All types of maps
Storyline
The tropical island of Fendro is a place that nobody has ever fully explored. All that has been mapped of it is a small strip of land on the coast. A team of scientist and explorers have taken an exploration among the Source River to map out more of the region, but they haven't returned yet. Even so, the small strip of perfect beach that has been covered is bustling with tourists and the like. Still, many people set out to the island in search of the missing researchers... and never come back.
Beginning
You are a college student with your (insert starter pick of choice), and you are relaxing on the beach. Your class is here for an exploration but you have a day to chill on the beach before the hike. You are relaxing with your friend, who has the usual starter counter. Suddenly, rockets pelt the whole entire area. In confusion, you follow your friend into a building. You two huddle into a corner as rockets strike everywhere around you. As the place collapses, you feel dizzy and start hearing strange noises.
Hours later, you awaken to the sound of struggling. Your friend, very hurt, struggles to keep uniformed men off of you. He is carried away and so are you. The little tourist resorts and beaches are in ruins. You two are shoved into a truck. Then, everything goes black.
Later, you awaken in a cell. Your friend tells you everything that he heard when they were carrying you guys away. He says that they want to get information about something from you. Unless you tell them what they want, they will keep you locked up with no food or water. He has no idea what they want, or who they are. he also says that you shouldn't tell them what they want.
A man comes into the cell. He threatens to kill you both unless you can answer his question. He asks your friend where the Space Station is located. Your friend doesn't tell him, and is slammed into the wall. He gives you one last chance to save your life and your friend's. You have to answer the question. Answer "I dont know where that is." to the question. He will try to kill your friend, but then suddenly the dizziness comes back and you start hearing the sound again. The screen goes black for a split second with a thud sound, and then comes clear. The man is knocked out. Your friend tells you that you really hit him hard, and that he looks unconscious. The screen goes black again, and this time, a smashing sound is heard. When the screen clears up, you aren't dizzy, and there's a hole in the wall. You two escape, wondering what happened. Now, the alarms are off, and you have 3 minutes to find your Pokémon and escape the camp.
You two end up in a town by the Source River. An old man, Professor Palm will talk to you. After exchanging information, you realize that this is the land where no person has gone before and survived!
Updates
1: Simplified Stat System2: Slower EXP gain for tougher battles (your starter probably wont evolve until past the second gym)
3: All 494 Pokémon catchable in the wild
4: No Elite 4, just Battle Island
5: Training Simulators that can help gain EXP and prepare you for big battles
6: "Infected" Pokémon, have some special moves
7: Giant region
8: Tougher opponents
9: 12 starter Pokémon options
10: Powers and effects of moves changed a bit
11: Upgraded Pokétch
12: Big caves and mountains
13: All types of maps