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PokéOps! (PG-13)

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Vorteld

Lord of the Underworld
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    REGULAR SIGN-UPS ARE NOW CLOSED. IF YOU WISH TO TAKE PART IN THE RP, PM ME

    Hi, everybody. After hanging out on PC for... well, a few days, I've decided to make an RP! ^^ I do not know if this is common or anything, but I wan't to do it because I like to make fun for people and because a want to get lot's of RP experience under my belt. As for this RP I was inspired by an Role-Play called SLA Industries. But for you who know it, relax, there will be no slums and no horror, monsters, booze or any other of those dystopian elements. This is an RP for people with all kinds of RP experience, you can be a newbie or a veteran. But enough of my ranting. Let's get to the setting already. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    POKÉOPS!​






    PG-Rated 13
    Setting​


    This RP is not in Kanto, Hoenn, Jotho; Orre or Sinnoh. It is completely made up (Well, almost at least) At the west coast of the region of Chunao lies the vast, pulsating city of Polytropolis. The city is in fact so large that few people have managed to actually find out how many square miles it covers. the city is surrounded by forests and plains, not to mention the great sea. It enjoys a warm summer climate most of the year, with plenty of sun in the summer and plenty of rain in the winter. The buildings here comes in all shapes and sizes, and the roads are nice and broad to give plenty of space to all who lives here. Of, course, with so many people living together, one must naturally expect what kind of business Pokémon must be in Polytropolis. Pokémon Centres, training facilities, Pokéshops, clubs and organizations dot every street. All kinds of trainers live here, rookies and veterans, loving trainers and brutal trainers, all with their own unique battle styles. And they're all there to prove their worth. Competitive battling, contests, all kinds of competitions are big business, and trainers often go together to form factions. The stronger or more skilled the trainers, the stronger the faction. In Polytropolis, Pokémon are power.

    People generally live well in Polytropolis. Most people live in flats or small houses, with all the services they need in close vicinity. Few people are married or have children here. This is a city for those unbounded, those who pursue their dreams and set themselves goals about Pokémon. Restaurants and cafes are abundant, as are hotels and motels, so if you have the money, you can get anything. If people have jobs, they work in the social services, the bureaucracy , or in one of the larger organizations. the city has good healthcare, and it takes a special pide in holding it's streets remarkably clean. Of course, all the workers are trainers as well, and their Pokémon happily assists them in the everyday work.

    Polytropolis are under the kind rule of Mayor Clarence Chamberlain, re-elected for the fifth time this very year. Of course, he cannot take the cares of the vast city entirely on his own shoulders; a host of bureaucrats helps him take care of the everyday administration. The city is divided into districts, one for each elemental type. The local head of each district is handpicked by the mayor and has a *cough strange cough* tendency to come from the most powerful trainers organization of that district. The districts are as follows:

    -The Normal District contains many houses, shops and Pokémon centers. It is also home to the administration and the largest battle facility, Combat Co. (Yeah, reaaally inventive) The District is headed by the Mayor himself.

    -The Fighting District hosts the most battle arenas and training facilities, as well as holding a air number of trainers schools. It is headed by Sensei Laurence.

    -The Rock District has the most factories and trade organizations. It is headed by Professor Quartz.

    -The Ground District is the area with the most houses. It is headed by Director Ingrid.

    -The Flying District is the HQ of all transport in the town. It is headed by Minister Margaret.

    -The Poison District has a large number of organizations in it, as well as an impressive number of dojos. It has the lead in cosmetique and clothing as well. It is headed by Founder André.

    -The Steel District is very similar to the Rock District, and the Rivaling between the two are sharp. It is headed by Head Technician Valeria.

    -The Bug District is leading in restaurants and museums. It is headed by Scholar Ramsy.

    -The Ghost District is home to occult groups and organizations. It offers a number of strange services and is headed by Seer Stefan.

    -The Psychic District is for psychics. They live and train here more than any other place in the town, and their leader is Sensei Robert.

    -The Dark District is home of the law enforcement buildings and the large jail. It is headed by Police Chief Amy.

    -The Ice district has most of the tourist offices and hotels. The head is called Receptionist Charles.

    -The Fire District Deals with the heating and has classy spas and restaurants. The head is Master Eric.

    -The Grass District deals with all the greenhouses and produces all the fruit. It acknowledges Botanist Derek as its head.

    -The Water District has the harbors and fish shops; well, petty mush anything that has with fish to do. The city's water supply is here. Captain Vivian is the head here.

    -The Electric district houses the sewer HQ and the power plant. Plant Head Marius commands the respect here.

    -When people get wealthy and/or mighty, they often move to the Dragon District, the posh, upper-class district. Count Nash is The head of this particular district.

    Phew. Now that we're done with all the districts, allow me to introduce The Director, head of Combat Co. and the most powerful man in the city. Not only does he own the largest combat complex ever created, but through the services his well-paid Operatives offer to the city, he can influence a lot more things that most people will thing.


    AND NOW THE PLOT​


    You are a promising young trainer who've entered Polytropolis about half a year ago. The teenage years did not reward you very well regarding Pokémon, but you're determined getting a new career here in the capital of all Pokémon stuff. You moved in, got yourself a decent job and started training to earn more money and get a hold in this new place. You joined an organization who took good care of you and helped you gain a position here. You really begin to like this place and are determined staying here for a while. Just as you've made a moderate success in your first tournament, you are contacted by a man or a woman who introduces Him/herself as an operative in Combat Co. Th Director has taken a special interest in you, they say, and he want's you to become a rookie Operative in Combat Co. You have personal reasons to take this offer and quickly quits your other job As the RP starts , it's your first day in a new job, and you are getting together with others to form a team. You have mixed feelings. What will this hold for you?


    RULES​

    -READ THE SETTING! Please. It may answer some of your questions.
    -ALL PC rules apply.
    -Whatever I say goes. I decide when your Pokémon level up and what kinds of moves it has.
    -You will use proper grammar. Okey?
    -I will not tolerate that you control others characters. I will play the NPC's.
    -Make all posts at least three lines long, you can only post three times per 24 hours (A good rule taken from Ramzam, thanks)
    -No Godmoding. If there are to be any time jumps, make sure that everyone agrees.
    -All questions go to me via PMs.
    -All OOC posts except the signups go in the OOC thread.
    -NO legendarys, new pokémon can only be aquired through very special circumstances
    -If you break the rules twice, you're OUT. End of discussion.
    -Stay active and have fun!


    STARTERS​

    One of this, plus one or two wildcards. I must approve of these. All starts in level 25 and have no TM, tutor or egg moves. You can pick five moves it starts with.

    -Machop (male): Taken by Seriousness!
    -Raticate (Female): Taken by Ho-Oh's Chosen!
    -Haunter (Male): Taken by Wolfwhispers!
    -Geodude (Male): Taken by The Gaurdian!
    -Kadabra(male): Taken by Aztekian!
    -Seel (female): Taken by Z34guy!
    -Ponyta (female): Taken by SuneShukun!
    -Magnemite: Taken by dragonqueen0210!
    -Grimer (female): Taken by drunk (sorry, I cannot make those symbols)!
    -A wildcard has been given to GhostPrincess!
    -Platinris is accepted in!


    SIGN UPS​


    Name:
    Age: At least 19
    Appearance: Minimum two paragraphs.
    Clothing:
    Personality: Minimum two paragraphs
    Battle Style:
    Pokémon team:
    RP sample: Just a sample of your writing, minimum three paragraphs.
    Relations to other characters: If you agree with another player that you start with a relation to each other, write it here

    That's it!
     
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    Wolfwhispers

    Wolfwhispers

    Trainers for Life
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    Name: Jade Hoffmin
    Age: 19

    Appearance: Jade has small cut hair that only reaches the top of her neck. She spikes her hair and looks a lot like a boy. She has a single bar piercing on her left ear that she got without her parents permission and has loved it ever since, though it did get infected a few times because she did it herself. Jen always wears normal blue jeans, a black and gray striped long sleeved shirt and black converse shoes. Around her neck is a simple silver chain necklace that she constantly wears, along with the dog tags of her deceased older brother. He was always her favorite and taught her how to be a fighter.

    Clothes: Aside from that she keeps a black jacket in her black backpack that she always carries around because she is constantly picking things up from the ground: coins, shells, sparkly things... Because of this she can be seen often dropping those shiny things from overstuffed pockets. She does wear blue jeans that have small holes from overuse, but they aren't to the point where she needs to buy new pants. She absolutely hates shopping and doesn't feel the need to get new clothes just because its a bit worn in.


    Personality: Jade is one tough cookie. Having had grown up with five brothers total and being the only girl puts you in that sort of position. She constantly likes to wrestle and have mock fights, even going so far as to wrestle a stray Mightyena that walked into her backyeard. The two had fallen in love with each other, but sadly Jade had to let it go. Jen can be pretty cheerful. In fact, she is almsot all the time and rarely shows any anger unless for a just cause like against abuse, unfair laws and anything against her belief's or when she gets into a fight with one of her brothers. Jen hides her tears, which really doesn't matter since she doesn't cry all that often. When she falls and hurts herself, she takes it, but unless a drama show is on that really effects, she will cry silently.​

    When angry, Jade will let lose her temper. She doesn't care, but she doesn't let her temper make her out to be a spoiled little girl that can't get her way without screaming for the world to hear. If someone's giving her crap, and that person makes a move, she'll punch back, and not a wimpy little slap.

    Battle Style: Jade focuses on brute strength rather than on tactics or sneaky moves. She prefers charging in as if she were to heabutt a Snorlax's belly and then deal with the consequences. If the opponent is down and out after a hard hit, who cares about brain power!

    Pokemon:
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (Male, Level 25) Moves: Hypnosis, Sucker Punch, Shadow Punch, Confuse Ray
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (Male, Level 23) Moves: Heabutt, Take Down, Assurance, Pursuit
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (Male, Level 25) Moves: Scratch, Ember, Dragon Rage, Smokescreen​

    RP Sample: ​


    Spoiler:

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    Vorteld

    Lord of the Underworld
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    Wolfwhispers: Good RP sample and nice signup! You're in, and the Haunter is yours. Will you have just Haunter? You can start out with three, but if you just want the Haunter, that's fine with me ;)

    EDIT: On the second look, I see you've forgotten the battle style paragraph. Sorry for not telling you before. Edit that part and you're in. I won't let anyone else take Haunter
     
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    SuneShukun

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    Name: Sune "Shinigami" Shukun

    Description: Sune is a male at the age of 19 standing at about 5 foot 11 inches with a toned body of a runner built for speed not power, not many people can tell you what he looks like because he wears a full body hooded cloak with the hood always up and a face mask to hide the lower part of his face along with a headband around his eyes.

    But if he were to take off his cloak, face mask, and blind fold one would see a unnatural blood red colored hair in a shaggy style covering up the upper half of his eye's when wet, his eyes if you ever saw them were a unnatural pale crimson color but he always had them closed because of a hunting injury leaving a scar along his eyes causing him slight blindness when he was younger, under his cloak he wore a pair of forest camo cargo pants, a pair of combat boots but wore no shirt. on his torso he had a cross like scar, on his right side he had a scar going from his 4 inches below his armpit to half way down his thigh. If he rolled up his left pants leg he also had 4 scars all running down his calf from knee to ankle on the front, back, left, and right sides

    Special Equipment: Sune carries around a bo-Staff to help him get around and also used in his martial arts style, he also carried a guitar for playing music on the road to earn extra cash.

    Background: Early in Sune's child hood when he was four years old he lived out in the farmlands, when he was four his parents died of a rare disease leaving him alone. After a year of roaming his towns streets having to scavenge or steel for food he decided to leave the town to find a better life. For years he traveled alone through rain, hail, or snow, and some times even sand storms till he was 14. On a trip in to a town to restock on his supplies bought with money from the herbs and spices he found along his travels that he sold along with some furs from animals he hunted for food and money he got for playing music for people. But on his way back out of town a man was running buy and dropped what looked like an orb like object when he spotted it he picked it up and ran after the man but lost him so he decided to take it with him thinking of one of the basic rules of an orphan like him, if you lose it and i find it it's mine now. He latter found out it was a Ponyta and he decided to train it to help him with getting around from place to place faster. After 3 more years of traveling he had bought a couple Pokeballs and captured a Vulpix and a Pikachu. After traveling around and training for 2 more years he decided to check out a place he heard off called Polytropolis.


    Personality: Sune, despite his appearance and his detachment to socialistic practices, he is actually a very Kind and polite person with the tendency when serious to be ether a sarcastic jerk or a blood thirsty killer depending on the situation for his seriousness. And as he travels the world he wants to be left alone and maybe find a small town or city to settle down in playing music for the rest of his life, but not all things can go your way and he knows this and does his part if there is a problem needing to be taken care of be it a town crisis or helping an old lady with groceries or retrieving a toy for a child who lost it.

    Battle Style:     Sune's fighting style is Speed based balanced fighting style, get in get out quick use your speed to confuse your enemy then strike when they don't see it coming. He also has a style of giving commands to his partners with music making it hard for an opponent to tell what move he had his partner do.

    Pokemon:
    P1) Ponyta (female) named Enshoku, Level 25
    Moves: Fire Spin, Stomp, Flame Wheel, Ember, Tackle
    P2) Vulpix (female) named Hitomi, Level 25
    Moves: Confuse Ray, Flamethrower, Quick Attack, will-o-wisp
    P3) Pikachu (male) named Yuru, Level 23
    Moves: Double team, Quick Attack, slam, thunder wave


    Sample:
    Sune sat on a hill over looking the grand city of polytropolis with his Vulpix laying against his side as he scratched her ears. He looked down to the Vulpine and said "Well Hitomi... looks like we may have found a place to settle down for at least a couple of years." The vulpine gave out a happy yip and he continued to observe the city from afar thinking to himself "It has been far too long since I actually stayed still for more then a week... I'm beginning to wounder if this was a good idea after all."

    Sune gave out a small sigh and stood up picking up his Vulpine companion saying "Well lets go hit up the town and find a place to stay for now Hitomi." Sune carrying Hitomi began to walk towards the main city entrance. When he reached the entrance he spotted a citizen or at least he hoped of the city "Pardon me ma'am... could you give me directions to the nearest Pokemon Center?"

    The woman Sune asked looked him over and said "Keep following the street down 9 blocks then take a right and go 2 blocks, it's on the right you can't miss it." Sune smiled and gave a small bow and said "Thank you ma'am." He then took off following the directions the kind woman gave him to get to the Pokemon center where he got his Pokemon checked for any unnoticed injuries they may have obtained in their travels.


    -- Sune "Shinigami" Shukun

    Edited: sorry for the prior inappropriate content i had originally posted in the character application (it was a bio i had done awhile ago that i did slight editing on)
     
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    Vorteld

    Lord of the Underworld
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    SuneShukun: I will PM you on your SU. SO far it is DECLINED, but you still have a chance.

    EDIT: It looks much better now :). Welcome aboard with Vulpix .

    Wolfwhispers: Thanks for the battle style. Your place in the RP is assured.
     
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    Z34guy

    Z34guy

    Pretty Little Psycho
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    • Seen Apr 10, 2022
    Name: Danny Vista

    Age: 23

    Appearance: Minimum two paragraphs. Danny has short, shaggy, green dyed hair with a small triangular green goatee on his chin. He has a rather strong jawline and soft ice blue eyes that remind one of a hurricane. He has three peircings in his left ear, a small gold hoop, an silver barbell like one, and a diamond stud arranged goin up from his ear lobe. He wears a small necklace with a tribal design pendant hanging from it as well as a tribal armband tattooed on his right arm.

    Danny has a tall, lanky frame with rather long arms. Standing at 6 foot 3, he isn't short by any means. Although lanky, there is some slight definition on his body, probably from all the dancing he does. He weighs around 190 pounds and despite his looks, can put up quite a challenge in a fight.

    Clothing: Danny's normal attire consists of an orange tanktop that subtley shows off his pecs, blue rave pants, nike sneakers, and a studded belt and black wristband to complete his look.

    Personality: Minimum two paragraphs Danny is best described as a rave boy. He loves going to raves and dance clubs. Actually, he just loves nightlife in general. Easy-going, understanding, and out-going, he seems to make friends rather easily. Often times, he stays out all night and sleeps most of the day, awake long enough to do what he has to do. He enjoys his sleep and is not one you would want to wake up just for the fear that something would be thrown at you (whatever is in his arms reach). Danny is rather spontanious, often dancing down the street to his iPod and singing slong randomly to a dance song. While most would point and laugh at him, he just brushes it off as immaturity.

    However, Danny does have a dark side like most people. When angry, he is very intimidating and if pushed far enough, very violent. Often, when blinded by rage, he goes too far and does something he'll regret later on. It is very hard to annoy him, let alone enrage him like this though.

    Battle Style: Danny's battle stye is relaxed and uses some strategy but most often uses the most powerful attacks his pokemon have.

    Pokémon team:

    Seel, female, level 25: Aqua Ring, Icy Wind, Ice Shard, headbutt

    Sneasel, female, level 23: Faint Attack, Taunt, Screech, Fury Swipes

    RP sample: https://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=4633850&postcount=54
     
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    Vorteld

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    Z34guy: You give me a good impression of your character and your RP sample is good :)
    Welcome aboard with Seel!
     
    drunk ¬_¬

    drunk ¬_¬

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    (Please tell me if I'm missing anything)

     Name: Gerárd Bouffon
    Age: 22

    Appearance: Gerárd is of French descent and thus talks with a resounding accent which is almost unique to him. He takes a lot of care of his appearance, and goes through various sessions in salons for manicures, pedicures, hair and skin treatments. He is very tall; reaching the two meters at 189cm, and has long and slender appendages to complement this. His finger and toenails are always very neat due to his frequent beauty salon visits, and his skin is surprisingly light and smooth to the touch. He is also astoundingly athletic and fit, as he spends most of his mornings in the gym.
    He has very distinguishable facial features and is, as a matter of fact, very handsome. He has a prominent chin, and a complete lack of anything resembling facial hair. His hair is dark blue, and he gels it to the point of shininess, as it sticks upwards. He has somewhat long sideburns, but trimmed very neatly like the rest of his hairline. He has a large forehead, which accentuates the mobility of his dark eyebrows, and his eyes are dark, but he wears contacts that make them seem almost teal-colored with very long eyelashes (thank mascara for that one). He has a long and thin nose, thin lips, and a medium-sized mole on his right cheekbone, which complements him (though he dislikes it).

    Clothing: Gerárd is very fond of wearing button-up, striped, collared shirts, tucked in; not too formal, but not too bleak either. He always wears slim slacks, usually dark blue or beige depending on the color of the shirt, and his favorite, crocodile-skin shoes made in Italy. He is also fond of wearing a rosary his mother gave to him as a kid, despite his strong rejection of ANY Church, and open atheism. Whenever it is too hot, he does tend to go out with a sunshade.
    Personality: When asked, Gerárd tends to answer that in one word he is: "DIVAAA!!!" Apart from being homosexual, Gerárd is completely vane and flashy. A complete party animal, and frequent of night clubs, he enjoys well-mixed drinks, and is especially fond of his favorite, the appletini! He is incredibly flashy and enjoys grabbing the attention of people around him, and is quick to buy drinks for others in order to keep the party going.
    Psychologically though, Gerárd is a very smart person. He may seem like a complete airhead from his extravagancy, but tends to think a lot about the world, life, and karma. He is incredibly very wise since his dad was also very avid in its practice, and can be a very good help to his friends. Also, unlike most people who feel lost when entering a city as big as Polytropolis, Gerárd felt right at home from the minute he set foot in this place. Lastly, he is a heck of a dancer.
    Battle Style: Gerárd has a very flashy style of battling, as he dances around as he gives commands, and is very flexible and perceptive of his Pokémon's strengths. For example, he uses Grimer's poisonous attributes to deal slow damage, and her flexible body to avoid an opponent's attack, while he just lets Mankey run wild.
    Pokémon team:

    Grimer
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (female, level 25) Moves: Disable, Minimize, Sludge, Mud Bomb
    Mankey
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (male, level 24) Moves: Leer, Low Kick, Karate Chop, Seismic Toss
    Shellos
    PokéOps! (PG-13)
    (pink, female, level 22) Moves: Water Pulse, Mud Bomb, Rain Dance, Hidden Power
    RP sample:     From Kawaii, Inc.'s The PokéBoard: For the Protection of Johto Click here to view.
    Spoiler:
     

    Vorteld

    Lord of the Underworld
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    drunk (I have no idea have you made those sybols): This looks fine with me :)

    Welcome aboard with Grimer!
     

    Vorteld

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    murder: You can reserve Magnemite yes, but only if I get your full SU within 36 hours. :) The symbols I was reffering to is those in drunk's username.
     

    fantasyfanatic

    Wandering Professer
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    Name: Zeni Fantasm
    Age: 19
    Appearance: (I have merged clothing in this as well)
    Standing at 6' 10" Zeni towers over most people. His gold eyes seem to pirece your soul when his gaze locks on to you. His hair is pitch black, with silver highlights. He has some scars from his childhood, fighting etc, but the most prominant is a claw wound on the right side of his face. he has well defined muscles that he doesn't mind showing off. He has diamond earrings, and a sapphire ring. He has a tattoo of a dragon on his chest. the tail is on his back, the arms on his arms and legs. The wings with the tail, curl around to his chest. The head on his face.

    He generally wears a pair of black, grey, and white shoes, oversized shorts that his legs are covered down to 2 inches past his knees. He wears a simple dark green, blue, and brown shirt, with a large spinning fireball on the front. He designed the shirt himself. He wears a black leather vest over his shirt, unzipped, so that he shows off his arms. He wears fingerless gloves and has a bracelet on each wrist and ankle. The bracelet is silver. Underneeth the shirt is a full fishnet undershirt. He wears steel-toed combat boots, and gothic legwarmers. The gloves extend up his arm to just past his elbows. There are silver rings all up the gloves that he can use to clip things on.

    Personality: Zeni is the one who loves challenges, give him one, and he'll accept it, no matter what it is, well depending on the current situation. If you are an Ally, Zeni is bound to be nice to you and at least talk to you a lot. As An Enemy, Zeni will Hide his True emotion to you, meaning He'll Put on a Face of Kindness, but He'll Truly Hate you. Despite him being mostly Outgoing, when he's alone, he's quite Quiet, and Calm. During battle He's Focused at all times, unless if you do something to distract him. When he's Given A Hard Obstacle, He'll Do what ever he can to concur that Obstacle what ever means Necessary.

    Zeni also has a second personality. A more aggressive one. This personality only shows itself when he gets overly excited. He gets reckless and daring. There are no limits to what he will do. He stays like this for a few hours, just until he tires himself out. He will jump into anything and get involved with anyone. Few people know about this and that is a reason people mostly avoid him. He is also very lonely, and could use a friend or two.

    Battle Style: quick hard hitting (attacking strongly, really fast) Zeni is the type of person who likes to jump into others buisness and settle things quickly. He has mixed in some hard type attacks, that and with his high speed, to ensure that he can finish quickly

    Pokémon team:
    Drowzee, Level 25, Moveset- Hypnosis, Disable, Confusion, Headbutt, Meditate
    Kadabra, Level 24, Moveset- Teleport, Confusion, Disable, Miracle Eye, and Psybeam
    \RP sample: (can it be from another RP? If so, here)

    Zeni walked down the road, watching as vendors tried to sell people their wares to the other travelers. Dustbeak nestled into his shoulder, trying to not be seen. Well, Zeni didn't blame him. The passerbys were staring at him like he was T3H 3V1L!!!! They were looking at Zeni with fear in their eyes. 'How stupid is he?''Does he know the danger he is in?''I want to say something, but how?' The others mumbled, thinking he couldn't hear them.

    Zeni stopped at a vendor maybe about 45 minutes after he left. This Stall was selling recovery items. He looked into his pockets, and being the surrogate son of a rich family, happily felt the amount of money he had taken from his 'second family'. "Excuse me sir," he said politely, "but could I get a few Field Medic kits?" The kits were the most expensive thing the store had to offer, and since he didn't know when the next time he would see another shop was, he decided to splurge.

    The vendor looked at him. "Why yes, as a matter of fact, we have about twenty left. How many do you need?" The price tag said they were on sale for 1000 pokedollors each. He took out his wallet and said, "I'll take all of them please." The vendor was dumbfounded. 'How the hell does this kid have that kind of cash? What the hell. I'll just be getting them back anyhow.' "that will be 20-" Zeni placed the amount of money that the vendor was about to ask for and started to examine the first kit.

    Satisfied, He placed the rest of the packs into his bag. Though they were small, they weighed a lot when combined. He hefted his pack onto his back and walked calmly down the street. After walking about another mile and a half, Zeni sat under a tree. Dustbeak looked around anxiously. "Don't worry, buddy. People aren't staring anymore. After regaining his breath, he heard the bushes to the side of the road rustle. Out of the bush came a big burly man with a chain on his hip like a whip. Soon, Zeni found himself surrounded. "Ok kid," the big burly man said, "hand over the field medical kits."

    "Why?"

    "Because were theives and we have you outnumbered." They thought to intimidate him. It almost worked. Zeni did calculations in his head. He could only knock out about two to three of them. Then he factored in Dustbeak, and smiled. "So will you hand them over or do we have to get physical?" Some of the gangsters had creatures of their own. One had a larger version of his Dustbeak. the rest generally had Vileweeds, some larger than others. (the evolved stage-Gloom-etc) Zeni looked the first dude in the eye.'This might get messy.' Zeni thought to himself.

    Relations to other characters: If you agree with another player that you start with a relation to each other, write it here (not immeadiatly. Ill ask around)
     
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    Vorteld

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    fantasyfanatic: Sorry, but your SU is somewhat lacking. I do not call two lines a paragraph. We need something to work with when relating to your character. Fill in a good measure, especially in battle style, appearance and personallity, and you're in. And no, none of these starters are shiny.
     

    The Gaurdian

    a change in your demeanour.
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    Name: Refr Folknar
    Age: 38
    Appearance: Refr has grey hair and an odd limp from an injury receved after serving in the Kanto milta. He might not be able to lift 200 pounds, but he can take a lot of damage before backing down, and he shows it through many scars, the most visable of them is one that runs down the left side of his face.

    He also has cold, percing, white eyes that dig into people. he is 6'1" and has a small beard that he hasnt shaved yet. His taning skin shows that he is outside alot and his worn hands shows this even more.

    Clothing: Refr wears a black leather jaket, white T-shirt, Camo pants, and blue square sunglasses. He has a pack that has many weird pins on it, and an All weather Watch.

    Personality: Refr is a trooper, and as such he will complete his mission by the letter. With this said, he is not much of a people person, but he loves kids. As with this, if you become one of his friends, then you should be okay if the mob is after you.

    Though he doesnt like people he wanted a challange and decided to move to Polytropolis to see what it would be like, and many cant really say were he lives. this might be because of his nomadic ways. many say he lives at one of the pokemon centers.

    Battle Style: Refr loves the heat of battle, and he has an unrelenting fighting form that shows this. His training is tough and he will beat someone if they threaten him or his friends. And through this love of battle he has trained his pokemon to be the same, and many of them are hard core battlers that dont give up.

    Pokémon team:
    Geodude lvl 25 Rock throw, Tackle, Rock smash, slam
    scyther lvl 23, Vacume punch, Slash, fury cutter,
    pikachu lvl 20 Tackle, Thunder, Thunderbolt, Iron tail.
    ryhorn lvl 20 Tackle, Headbutt, Rock smash, fury attack
    Ninorino lvl 21 Tackle, Headbut, Slam, Poisen sting.

    RP sample: Refr walked down the street, it was dark, though the lights of the city didnt make it seam that way. The scar that ran down his face ached as he remembered the day he got it.

    It had been nearly two years ago, Alpha squad was doing a training mission in the middle of no where, then a team of Rocket Grunts attacked. Refr remembered his sargents voice as he shouted at him to get out as hoards of "Rockets" rushed them. Refr stood at the base of the hill with the fifty-cal. holding off the attackers. "Hey!" Someone yelled, Refr looked up.

    Then Refr saw that five punks wearing read bandanas were in about twenty feet away bothering a girl. The girl said something and then one of the punks, apparently the leader, slaped her. That was enuff to set Refr off, he was on top of them in five seconds flat.

    He punched the punk that slaped the girl right in the face, "what the hell do you think your doing!" Refr shouted as the punk fell to the ground. "Screw you mister hero!" he heard, followed by a click. he wiped around and slashed his curled fist in the shape into the next ones chest, hearing a crack. A knife rose and was brought down right into Refrs arm. He didnt even twitched as he turned to look at the kid holding the knife. "Oh lord," the kid muttered, "its him."

    His friends turned to see Refr pull the three inch knife out of his arm, then lick it clean. "Oh lord," the one repeated again, "Its The Grey Fox! Screw this I'm out of here." the group turned and begain to run, "Your forgeting something!" Refr yelled, then threw the knife and hit the kid in the leg. Then he turned, and walked away. "Sir," he heard the girls voice, "Sir, thank you." she was right beside him,

    "It was my job." Refr said.

    "Oh lord, sir your bleeding!" the girl said.

    Refr looked at his arm, the knife had puntured his arm and now blood was coming out of his jacket sleve. "Huh," he grunted "yeah I guess I am."

    "Sir, please come to my house, I'll convence my mom and dad to take care of you. Please, as my way of thanking you." the girl stoped in front of him, a sad face was on his face.

    "Fine," Refr said, "But I want some soda first." he said as he walked toward a Burger King that was near by. he heard a sigh and the sound of foot steps behind him.
     
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    Vorteld

    Lord of the Underworld
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    The Gaurdian: Your SU looks good, and I look forward to the RP sample. The problem is your team. I'll PM you about it :)
     
    dragonqueen0210

    dragonqueen0210

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    Name: Angelique. K .Malirec preferred Kuiin
    Age: 28
    Appearance: Standing at 1.74m, Angelique is a very imposing person upon meeting, with ebony black hair that reaches her waist and a sidefringe that covers a scar from her childhood days. Crimson eyes scan the environment under long eyelashes and a red scarline runs from the start of her neck to the collarbone, gotten from a car accident with her parents.

    She is well built and able to pack a good punch to anyone stupid enough to challenge her. Her skin is a pale colour that is slowly darkening as she ventures out more and more than her younger days in front of a computer screen. Filed nails are painted a dark red and a tattoo of a garchomp is spread out on her left arm.

    Clothing: Angelique wears maroon coloured stiletto boots, a long, black, aristocrat tail coat and black leather leggings. She carries around everywhere a maroon side shoulder bag containing her important items and dark red sunglasses.

    Personality: Angelique is the type of person to make a sarcastic remark at anything, never mind the result. Proud and a strategiser, she plans her day perfectly to the tip but still manages to deal spontaneously to anything unusual. Her favourite hobby is riding on Dodrio, escaping reality for a bit, so she could relax and simply enjoy living. Pokemon mean a lot to Angelique, when she was young, a pokemon; piplup, saved her life when she fell in a river heading towards the waterfall. She couldn't swim and even if she could, it had rained previously and the current was strong. The piplup had called it's clan mates and together, they had chopped down a tree, damming up the river long enough for her to scrabble onto the bank. Angelique had been traveling with the piplup ever since then.

    Angelique has two fears; swimming, and failure. She doesn't like to fail at what she does, giving her determination no other person has ever had to do something. She hides her insercurities with strategies, other people's dilemas and pokemon problems, successfully igoring her own problems. Her parents refuse to acknowledge her, to them, she's a failure, refusing to help them in their money making schemes and looking after the family business.

    Battle Style: Blunt and straight to the point, Angelique battles with precise accuracy and attacks work for her as defense does to everyone else. Her Ninetales is the only pokemon she owns that has a somewhat average knowledge of defense mechanism.

    Pokémon team:
    1. Magnemite-lvl 25-male-moves: Spark, Thunderwave, thundershock, supersonic, metal sound.
    2. Prinplup-lvl 25-male-moves: bubblebeam, metal claw, brine, bide, fury attack.
    3. Doduo-lvl 25-female-moves: tri attack, uproar, fury attack, pursuit, pluck.

    RP sample:
    ~
     Tandra sighed, "what to do, what to do?" she mumbled to herself. In front of her, layed on the ground, was a map revealing the location of Cresselia.
     Currently, she was atop Mt Coronet and had just finished listening to Arceus talk about the ongoings of the people hunting the legendaries and where they were. Apparently, the closest one right now was at the bottom of mt coronet. It was close indeed for sure but the number of people that were on the mountain did not appeal to her very much. Moltres was the next closest legendary but once again, it being near a town, she did not wish to draw attention to herself by proclaiming she was hunting for a legendary in that area. Groudon was unfortunately, located in an area, she did not want to go to. return cave, to her, was a maze of turning corridors that she did not like. So, in the end, Cresselia seemed the only choice left. She rolled up the map and hurrily placed it in her bag to protect it from the wind that was starting to flow quite harshly across the top of the mountain. She stood up and eyed the other trainers that were still around preparing, having chosen their own legendaries to catch. 'There's no use in talking when i have nothing to say' she thought. She stepped towards the edge, by power, if she had wings and jumped off at exactly the right moment, she would manage to catch a breeze and lift off. She unlatched a pokeball from her belt, "Go Treilk!" An abnormally large Honchkrow popped out of the pokeball. She climbed aboard it, "when I say go, lift off okay Treilk?" she asked it soothingly. "krroooww!!!" it replied. She watched the wind steadily, and then, there was suddenly a warm updraft, "ok, ready? 1...2...3...GO!" she called out. Treilk swooped down towards the ground, flapping hysterically as he tried to create lift. Abruptingly lowering a bit, Treilk steadied himself and spread his wings out more. "Honchkrow!" it called out. Tandra seated herself more properly, adjusting to the height and the flapping wings by her legs. "Well, that was okay for a start of a hunting spree" she convinced herself. Treilk nodded, as they sailed off towards snowpoint city.

     Tandra clutched onto Treilk's neck as they strained against the icy wind flowing towards them from the east as they struggled towards snowpoint city. She could see nothing but white in every direction. "we better fly lower Treilk, or the winds are going to pummel us" she suggested to her Honchkrow. Treilk nodded, swopping down so that they just skimmed the tree tops. She shook her head, "it's no use, we have to go lower" Treilk stopped moving forward and hovered in one space, looking back at his trainer, shaking it's own head. "don't tell me, we can't go any lower?" she asked it warily. Treilk shook it's head again, she sighed, "ok then, land. I'll travel on foot the rest of the way. We should be approximately by the Lake that was around here". Treilk manoeuvred between the trees, landing swiftly beside a sign. "good boy Treilk, Return!" Treilk popped back into it's pokeball and Tandra turned to look at the sign, which was now rotten, dusty and broken. She squinted at it, trying to figure out the words. An arrow was pointing left with the words, 'L_ke A_u__y', she figured it must be the lake near snowpoint city, known as Lake Acuity. She kept on reading, the next sign read 'S___P_int C_ty' that must mean snowpoint city. Below that, there was a little arrow pointing to the right. Tandra stood up straight, "right it is then, I hope I make it there before nightfall" She unlatched another pokeball from her belt, "Come out, Glacie!" a weavile landed gracefully onto the snow covered ground. Tandra smiled softly at it, "let's go Glacie, and pray to Arceus we don't encounter any dangerous pokemon" she told it cheerfully. She patted it's head and together they set off in the direction of Snowpoint city...
    Relations to other characters: Nil.

    I'll take magnemite instead then, you can give fantasyfanatic the kadabra.
     
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    Vorteld

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    dragonqueen0210: I accept your reservation, as long as your SU comes before long. However, fantasyfanatic already has opted for Kadabra. If you still want to have it, I'll jugde who gets it by your SU. Note: This is only because I've asked fantasyfanatic to edit the SU as well.

    I'd prefer if all of your Pokémon were not level 25 ;)
     

    Seriousness

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    • Seen Jun 1, 2009
    Name:
    Seth Chanchi

    Age:
    23

    Appearance:
    Seth is of an averageish build. He is more on the skinnyish side of average. He tries to work out but he isn't the muscliest of people. He is quite athletic because he has long legs and stands at about 6'8". He may be tall and skinny but he isn't good at sports.

    His hair is messy and reasonably long. The colour of his hair confuses many people and some people don't bother about it because it is that confusing. It is a mix of black and brown but it isnt half and half, to get the right amounts you have to do maths. His eyes are slightly smaller than normal and they have a real nice shine to them :). The colour of his eyes is a simple brown.

    Clothing:
    Seth usually wears the basic T-shirt and jeans combo with a random pair of trainers when he is sitting around his house. When he goes out he wears a nice blue shirt with jeans and will only wear white trainers. On top of the shirt and jeans he wears zip-up jumper. He sometimes wears sunglasses and/or a hat.

    Personality:
    Seth is quite a laid back person. If you meet him for the first time that is your immediate impression but if you get to know him you can look behind the scenes and see the other types of personality he has. For example, some days he can feel happy as well as laid back but others he can be sad and laid back.

    Although he is quite laid back he enjoys doing sports and socialising at partiers because he is a born partier and sportsman -he isnt good at sports though- and so are his friends so the mix well together. He enjoys being with his Pokemon and they make him feel complete. They also give him a psychological advantage over other battlers when he is in a competition. This makes him a good battler -not great, just good- and he is respected all around the city.

    Battle Style:
    Seth enjoys the tactical way to battling. He thinks that if he faces opponents that rush attack a lot then he can use that to his advantage. He works using weaknesses and types. His team is also arranges tactically.

    Pokémon team:
    Machop Lvl 25 (Male) - Low Kick, Karate Chop, Revenge, Seismic Toss
    Nidorino Lvl 22 (Male) - Poison Sting, Tackle, Fury Attack, Double Kick
    Growlithe Lvl 24 (Male) - Ember, Bite, Roar, Flame Wheel

    RP sample:
    Seth slowly walked into the building. Carefully taking in his surroundings. He put his hand carefully into his pocket and gripped one of his three pokeballs. He took a deep breath and walked over to the counter.

    "Name.." The woman behind the counter said very impatiently.

    "Seth Chanchi," Seth answered quickly so as to not anger the woman.

    "Ok, please go into the door on the right, You will be given instructions in there." The woman said as she handed him a card with his name and picture on it.

    "Cheers" Seth added cheerfully as he walked into the door on her right.

    When he entered the room, he saw around 22 trainers that were all in the same position as him. They came here to win. As he glanced around the room he immediately saw the ones that were nervous, the ones that weren't nervous or confident and the confident ones. Seth resided in the middle group as he wasn't nervous or confident, he just wanted to get as far as possible and any place in the tournament would be good.

    "Next match....Seth Chanchi will be on the red side and Iro Jutan shall be on the blue side" A man who was standing up at the top of the stairs.

    "Ok, here we go" Seth said as he walked up the stairs behin Iro. When they reached the top of the stairs the view was magnificent. They were in an outdoor arena that was filled with tens of thousands of fans. They stood in the middle of a large battlefield that Seth imediately concluded was the area that the Pokemon would battle on. He was directed by the man to go to the left and as he started walking towards the large red tower he saw the man giving instructions to his opponent. Seth slowly walked towards the red tower. His dreams were coming true but he had a larger than life obstacle to clear.
     
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    Vorteld

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    Seriousness: That SU is perfectly in order. Welcome aboard with Machop! But please add genders to your Pokémon and wite down what moves they know.
     

    Aztekia

    As happy as a pig in sugar
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    Name: Julian 'Blaze' Chrymer
    Age: 21
    Appearance: Blaze has a thin yet athletic build. He stands at 5"9, therefore rather small. He is very fast and good at athletics and other such sports.

    Blaze has brown, gelled back hair. It is of medium length and naturally straight. He has sparkling blue eyes and a scar running down his left cheek. He usually wears a sly smile on his face, which he thinks is completely cool.

    Clothing: No matter what the weather or wear he is, Blaze usually wears the same clothes: a black jacket with flames on the bottom, black jeans and a black T-Shirt. He wears black trainers. He will never wear a cap, for fear of messing up his hair.

    Personality: Blaze is a very calm person. In the face of adversity he will never lose his cool. He is laid-back and normally prefers to be in his own company than with friends. He is a devious man and can be untrustworthy.

    He is a very intelligent person. He is a brilliant tactician, which is why he is successful with Pokemon. Many people think he is psychic, because of hell well he battles. Despite being somewhat of a loner, he loves athletcis and especially football, where he plays a striker.

    Battle Style: He is very tactical. He likes to work out opponent's strategies and use them against them.

    Pokémon team:

    Kadabra (male. level 25): Psybeam, Recover, Reflect, Teleport

    Quilava (Male, level 23): Flame Wheel, Smokescreen, Scratch, Leer

    Pidgeotto (Female, Level 24): Whirlwind, Sand Attack, Aerial Ace, Wing Attack

    RP sample: Kadabra shot out of the Poke-ball, appearing in a flash of red. The opposing Croagunk shuddered in fear. It knew what was coming.

    'Kadabra, Hypnosis!' Blaze ordered. Kadabra's eyes lit up a ghostly shade of blue. The Croagunk seemed mesmerised. In seconds, it dropped to the floor. Croagunk suddenly lit up red, and disappeared back into it's Poke-ball.


    'Go, Butterfree!' The young trainer commanded.

    Butterfree appeared in a flash.

    'Butterfree, Sleep Powder!' A cloud of spores spiralled towards Kadabra. Blaze chuckled.

    'Teleport!' Within a second Kadabra was behind Butterfree.

    'Now, Psybeam!' Butterfree crumpled to the floor. It was another easy victory for Blaze.
     
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