Pok?mon Black Night

[Rm2k3Guy]

Dude no offence but you are acting like a pushover ;) anyway that does look good

 

[Esai]

no... its just i hated the route 1 map after looking at the proper map... so i changed it and thanks for the comments

 

[Dawson]

Is all you know how to do complain it is his game so let him map how he wants ok? (retorical question) Great so far Esai keep it up

First off, If you want to bad rep me with the simple comment 'MORON' then you may want to learn the use of grammar.
Secondly, Esai asked for comments on how to improve and I told him how to, he was mature enough to know that it was constuctive criticism so he didn't take it personally, unlike you.
Thirdly, Weren't you Cigarettes a couple of months ago? Your poor grammar and use of smilies in every post are very near identical.

EDIT: Esai, that looks a lot better.

 

[Esai]

yea i asked for comments, and aslong as people tell me how they think it can be improved then I know it is constructive and will try to make it better. I think that its useful for comments to help the games get better and to know what other people think.

Btw, Thanks I tried to make route 1 look as close as possible to the real thing.. and i think it looks good

 

[Rm2k3Guy]

I did not call you a moron in rep so do not acuse me of that so stay on topic for esai's sake

 

[Esai]

Another Screen (Warning this one is BIG!) Its Route 2, 100% Accurate to the real thing. The only difference is the pokemart. If you wonder what its there for ill tell you :)

Remember on Page 1, I told you that one of these 'Rocket Marts' is in Viridian. Well its not exactly in viridian but Route 2 the route above it. It is guarded by a rocket until you are far enough into the game to be able to use Rocket Balls.

Constructive Criticism and Positive Comments Please nothing like, Its horrible unless you tell me why, and how it can be fixed :)

 

[Dawson]

It looks perfect. Maybe one thing you could change is move the two teleports on the first building. If you lifted them up one space each it will be sorted.

 

[Esai]

Thanks for pointing out the teleports, they were like that because I kept resizing the map... I missed them when moving the events inline with the map >.<.

Thanks for the comment! :D

EDIT: I just found pokemon crystal, so hopefully the johto maps can be more exact :)

 

[Neo-Dragon]

your route 2 looks awesome. Good job on that esai.
Keep up the good work.

 

[Dawson]

EDIT: I just found pokemon crystal, so hopefully the johto maps can be more exact

Here's a tip for when your trying to recreate Johto. Download a Pokemon Gold Rom and a program called 'GoldMap'. It's a hacking program but it shows you the maps in full size, which makes it easier and quicker to replicate them.

 

[Esai]

Thanks for the help Phoenix :)

Sadly the maps for johto cant look as accurate as the trees and stuff are different sizes... but this is my first attempt (comments welcome) of New Bark Town!

 

[Kyledove]

what you do is make every one of johto's tree half of one of those trees, but theres nothing you can do about the houses...they will look bad if theyre only 3 tiles big

 

[Dawson]

Thanks for the help Phoenix :)

Sadly the maps for johto cant look as accurate as the trees and stuff are different sizes... but this is my first attempt (comments welcome) of New Bark Town!

That looks fine! Don't forget to add some sort of path to make the area less empty. ;)

 

[Peekimon]

Add paths and flowers and a bit more trees, but, it still looks great.

 

[Esai]

Good News: As you can guess I am back working on this game for most of the day :D. So i am going to be doing lots of things at the same time (well not the exact same time)

1. Remaking Johto onto RPG Maker XP
2. Converting RM2k3 Kanto Maps to RPG Maker XP
3. Working on Storyline (Both Versions)
4. Making My Region on RPG Maker XP

If you are wondering why i am making most maps on RPG Maker XP is because of the big chipsets :)

Also heres the new newbark town!

 

[Sorye HK]

Good luck on redoing them all on RMXP.

 

[Esai]

Thanks Daegon :) I got a screenshot.

Its probably the last johto screen you will see for a while, as by demand i have decided to also work on the storyline. This one is cherrygrove

Dont comment on the land on the sea... its how the autotile works

 

[Neo-Dragon]

I like the 2 screens you posted as Johto. Is that memory work again- cause if so- your doing a great job at rememoring it.

 

[Jeff_PKLight]

It probably is memory work.....but I don't remember the maps as well as him. :D

~Jeff

 

[Esai]

its not 100% memory work its starts from memory but then i fix it up by checking the maps with goldmap ;)