Pok?mon: Destiny Arrived

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Well im pretty much there really. I want to get the interior done.
I don't think its very good though so dont get your hopes up :(
 
i don't care. Also the next tow comics will be split into a two part. The battle is gonna be a big one since it is the very first one w/ kinsley ( just to give ya a hint)
 
awsome. Now i can atleast try and do the layout of what your character introduction comic is going to be like. Tell me when you are done the inside. No rush
 
What are you talking about pixel errors? I can't see them. they must be minor
 
I see now. Well imma gonna get off. Finishing comic
 
Thanks man. I'll try and get teh battle up but it will be hard. It takes time to get the animations, if anyone knows where to to get them,like a site, than please tell me.
 
coreystranick said:
Thanks man. I'll try and get teh battle up but it will be hard. It takes time to get the animations, if anyone knows where to to get them,like a site, than please tell me.
Click to expand...
https://www.serebii.net/attackdex/
I get mine from here, it shows screenshots of every attack but somtimes
there not very good ones and you have to do alot of editing (like editing out
the pokemon in the screenshots) but thats what i use...

btw, nice updates keep it up, i cant wait to see more
 
thanks decpticon. Hopefully thise makes the next issue come out faster
 
i jsut camback from the veiwing, tomorrow i will be going to the funeral. well, i am working as hard as i can on the battle spisode. man it is so **** hard
 
Great work on the comic the story line is great!....sorry to hear about ur friend.....I hope u feel better now.....
 


Well...sorry to hear about all of that. I hope you get better, eh?

But back to what needs to be pointed out about this comic. I'm not saying it is bad or anything...

The pictures themselves are great! But...the dialog(what the characters are saying) could really use some help. It would be a lot smoother if you used the actual English print...and not things like 'w/me' and such. Among other things, but I don't want to make you feel any worse than you are now about your friend.

But sometimes you need proper criticism, and not just' hey, u are good!' 'OMG!' sort of thing...it is criticism that will make you better, instead of operating on mostly false appreciation. A lot of people may not be able to see your mistakes, for they make the same ones and think nothing of it. But I notice them, because, well--I'm a writer, and that it just the way I am. ^^'

I suggest you have someone to read through and help you improve your writing for this comic. That includes grammar, spelling, punctuation, ect. You don't have to, but it would make your comics all the funner to read and such. It's not just the images that makes a comic shine, but the words that are spoken to back up that picture. If that is at all understandable...

Anyways...I think I am done for now. Sorry to do this to you, but it needs to happen some time. But really, you are doing quite well so far. ^^
 
Ohh..no problem. I like crit. Anyway, whilei am making thsi batle screen i will try and post special comics that inroduce people. If i have time, if i don't go visit ,my other thread
Google: Rise of team Sentret
 
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