Pokemon and Original Character drawings =)

[lazysensei]

These drawings are for my Pokemon Doujinshi that I plan to make as soon as I stop being busy and get a scanner. (birthday coming soon so I hope to get them soon instead of a car lol)

Jessica the main character aspiring to be a Pokemon trainer

Monique the brock-like trainer who is going through the Pokemon Fellowship Program, that allows her to travel to learn about Pokemon rather than just staying in a campus.

I'm sorry if this is too big but I dunno how to create those hidden tags. If someone could help me out with that it'd be really appreciated.

Also, I want to color these but losing my tablet just made me die inside. I know I can color without a tablet but it was just much easier for me with the tablet.

 

[Cacttus]

Whoa I love the first one maybe a little darker lining, but it's fine.

 

[ryushin5]

Nice drawings I love them hope to see the Doujinshi in the future. :D

 

[icycatelf]

Wow, I really like the artwork. It'd be better if you had a scanner, though.
From what I can see, you are great at drawing both human and creature figures.
You also used some great poses there. Poses are my biggest problem.
Good job! Link me to your fan comic whenever you get it done. :)

 

[lazysensei]

Heres another one of out of sheer boredom and my wanting to try out oekakis or bbses or whatever it is you call them. I would have colored but I really didn't know how to navigate those things... hoh...

this is Brian, he loves cute/beautiful things. He is an aspiring coordinator and doubles as a great Pokemon Watcher with his ability to draw very well, but he'll only draw anything he deems cute or beautiful. He can be quite shallow and has a better fashion sense than the girls.

 

[An-chan]

Seeing as you haven't gotten a thorough review yet, I decided to provide you with one. Fun, huh?

First of all, the pictures are awful. You draw very well, so those pictures really don't do justice to your artwork. You should try to take some better pictures or get that scanner soon, because with a picture quality like that, there's no way you can get your doujinshi online.

That said, I'm moving on to your actual drawings. As I said, you seem to draw very well. However, your drawings (expecially the first one) seem a bit incomplete. You seem to leave the scetching lines visible, which makes the picture seem kind of messy and transparent. The picture would look a lot better if you made the real lines more visible and the non-real lines less visible. Also, colouring would make everything look better. I realize that these are just scetches rather than actual, complete drawings, but I'm just trying to give you some advice to go by...

Other than that, you seem to really know what you're doing. Jessica's breasts look a bit awkward in the first picture and a bit in the second, too, and Brian's face looks a bit odd, but you really know how to draw poses, faces, and Pokémon. One thing you seem to rush a bit is drawing hands, but I guess that's okay when it's about scetches. Don't be lazy and succub to drawing the hands sloppily! I do that sometimes, and it just messes up the whole thing.

What more can I say? You really have talent and potential. Keep at it and the world will be yours some day ;)