FireRed hack: POKEMON:BATTLE CONFERENCE

[kebengau]

POKEMON:JOURNEY TO RONDOR

Introduction:
Hi im Keb. This is my first hack. So im needing a lot of help. This is my first time. i wish you could help me.^__^

INFO:
ROMBASE:FIRE RED
ROMBASE MADE BY PHO AND GREEN CHARIZARD
(NOT YET DECIDED)

Story:
You live in a town named Northridge.You are a highschool student in Northridge high, you are chosen to be the representative for the interhigh competions. As the greatest student in Northridge high, you were given a pokemon to train and compete to the other schools.Northridge high is only an average school compared to the rest of other highschools in the rondor region.
De Lasalle High is the most powerfull Highschool in the region. Every one is excited for the national championships.are you prepared for the challenges?

FEATURES:

NEW HERO/HEROINE(STILL WORKING)
NEW TILES(I NEED HELP)
NEW SCRIPTS
NEW REGION
NEW ADVENTURE
GYMS ARE CHANGED TO HIGHSCHOOLS(I'll EXPLAIN LATER)
NEW LEAGUE
JOHTO STARTERS(or maybe not)


5 - 8 COMPETING HIGH SCHOOLS
DIFFERENT LIFE STATUS


SCREENIES:

Spoiler:

USERBARS:

NONE^__^

UPDATES:
NORTHRIDGE-50%
HILL PASS-100%
WIND VALLEY-30%
CLOVER PASS-80%
MT. CANOPY-99%

I NEED HELP ON THE HACK:
SCRIPTERS
OVERWORLD MAKER
TITLE SCREEN MAKER
AND MORE

PM ME

CREDITS:
Green Charizard-ROMBASE
PHO-ROMBASE


COMMENT PLS.
I REALLY NID YOUR COMMENTS
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[Mana1]

From the screenies it looks like you are doing great so far!

One thing I don't like the look of is the Hero overworld sprite... it kind of looks like theres a paper bag on his head.

The maps look good, though you may want to reconsider the long grass in towns.

I love the idea about Schools rather than Gyms... it all seems to fit together quite well. Will the league then be "The best Students" kind of tournement thing?

Also have you tried learning to script at all? It would be really handy to learn so you could do some of the stuff in your own time. I would offer my own assistances but I'm still learning scripting myself :).

Good luck!

 

[slyfox326]

Not Good

The main character sprite looks unprofessional and I think you need to be more creative with the sprites.

 

[Conan Edogawa]

I don't really like the look of the heros' face. Especially the left side. I can't figure out exactly what it is but the hair looks weird. Other than that it's nice.

 

[sean888]

I agree the hero needs a new look but the maps look good I think u should try new tiles to give it a beter look.

 

[RedYoshi]

The really like the story on this one :). The maps look pretty good, though the Hero OW could do with some work.

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

Why is Lucian from Lunar Knights the Hero
of this Hack?

Anyways, I can help you edit your OW's once you do some more. (I can
turn Ugly OW's to Professional OW's.)

 

[kebengau]

From the screenies it looks like you are doing great so far!

One thing I don't like the look of is the Hero overworld sprite... it kind of looks like theres a paper bag on his head.

The maps look good, though you may want to reconsider the long grass in towns.

I love the idea about Schools rather than Gyms... it all seems to fit together quite well. Will the league then be "The best Students" kind of tournement thing?

Also have you tried learning to script at all? It would be really handy to learn so you could do some of the stuff in your own time. I would offer my own assistances but I'm still learning scripting myself :).

Good luck!

can you help me in scripting.. ^___^ tnx..

 

[Crimson Stardust]

Looks good so far...
love the screenies but just need to edit the o/w and this will be good..
good luck;)

 

[kebengau]

Looks good so far...
love the screenies but just need to edit the o/w and this will be good..
good luck;)

oh tnx..im finding someone to work with the O/w..heheh..
tnx..

 

[Sarcastic Prince]

oh tnx..im finding someone to work with the O/w..heheh..
tnx..

Here. I'll help you do the OW's with my partner.