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will it be on the front of the screen, like charizard on fire red?
Just lovely. Better than the last storyline by far. Nice job. :)This is important. I have made a change to the story and want some input on it.
The new story:
Upon turning the age of 14, You are approached by Prof. Oak and he talks to you about becoming a pokemon trainer the next day.. He talks to you about what type of pokemon you perfer and you tell him you want to take the night off to think about it.
That night before you go to bed, it begins to rain horribly, lightning striking, in during one of the flashes you see a bird pokemon, It was golden colored, and you decided then that you want the Golden Bird.
You talk to oak the next morning and he says he does not know of any golden bird, but that there is a region that has just opened up a gym challenge to the east of kanto and that he has a ticket to go there. He sent your brother last year to help establish the gyms and now he wants you to go and talk to Prof. Petal about it.
The game begins with you on a transmission to professer oak. He sends info to Prof. Petal by what you give him. And you get off the ship to begin your journey in Montoh. To find the golden bird, and to see how your brother has come along since he left.
I do not plan to change the story on the first post until I get some feed back about this. So let me know what you think :]
That's cool. Plus I won't be accused of stealing your plot. ;PThank you for the advice :]
My hack is no longer about Ho-oh. I have changed it to a pokemon that nobody knows whom it may be yet. But it will be a golden bird.
That's the thing. I didn't. I made my story beforeHar Har.
Good :] Don't steal my plot ideas :o