Pokemon Crimson Version

[Geeked]

Pokemon Crimson Version

Yes, it's me with another hack :p, I'm really hoping to comit to this one...

Story

You begin as one of Professor "Lan's"(Not megaman related) You wake to your mother informing you Professor Lan needs you to head out to Flaroar Town(Just past the forest)
to pick up a package from Professor Oak(OMFG He's still alive xD) that arrived in the "Kionn Package Center"(Where all major deliveries arrive in "Kionn").. Thats all I got at this point, I'm joting this down to get some feedback, and some ideas :p

Media

I have a few maps done :p
Ocean View Town - https://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd251/kditsme1300/Pokemon_Crimson/OceanViewTown.jpg
Route 1 - https://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd251/kditsme1300/Pokemon_Crimson/Route1.jpg
Lotar Village - https://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd251/kditsme1300/Pokemon_Crimson/LotarVillage.jpg

Credits- Alistair Rock Tiles, Forgotten Memory & X-buster for PC and Mart Tiles..
Disturbed for some future mapping
Meggido for general support, being there through out my whole hacking career xD, and possibly some future work..
Me - Founder/Developer, Mapping, Tile inserting, Scripting, Story, + More

 

[Tyrantrum]

I have to be the first to say that, this looks great X-Ray. :)
The maps are just plain beautiful! :D
The set-up is great. :)
I don't have time to read the story, so I will read it tomorrow. ;)
Good Luck~

 

[Bibliophibian]

the maps look great :3
i especially like the 2nd one. something about the colors and the general layout is super enjoyable.
can't wait for the story to get expanded a bit.

 

[Geeked]

Yea, I'm planning to begin working more on the story sometime today, and possibly finish up a couple of maps XP

 

[Neti]

hey i was just checking all the hacks of my buddys to find some ubars to put into my sig, but i see you dont have any already
that means im gonna make one for you^^
btw good mapping so far, but you should add a better story cause at the moment thats exactly the same story nintendo used already 4 times^^

edit: wait.. i cant make a userbar cause i have no idea wwhat to put on it since i dont know what this hack will be about^^
you got to think of a story^^

 

[Geeked]

Don't worry about it, I scrapped this, because the story didn't flow well with my region, plus the story was crappy anyways.. I hope to get something else started later today..
(Still using teh name)

 

[Disturbed]

And you didn't want me to make a thread... And after all the ideas I gave you for a story >.<

Whatever. Good luck with this Xray :P

 

[Neti]

Hmm i keep looking at this thread cause i want to see your storyline xD
but you still dont have a real story
let me help you a bit: since this hack is named crimson, it should have something to do with fire or ghost pokemon cause i think the color crimson matches both of them
you could also rename it to crimson mist or crrimson dust, since in my opinion colors as names are kinda overused
also, crimson dust or crimson mist adds a more mysterious feeling to the hack
i think in the last rom hackerss newsletetr there was an interview with meggido and he said that a big criteria for him to look at a thread is the name of the hack

At first glance there is only the name and posts. Out of the two the name usually catches me most.

With that name i could easily create a nice looking userbar for you and making a story of it would have a great result
What about making a hack about ghosts? i dont think that was done very often...

 

[Chimchar 9]

so hows this coming along Xray ?
any updates yet ?

 

[Neti]

so hows this coming along Xray ?
any updates yet ?

im wondering about the same thing
nothing happened here for a while
i even subscribed to this thread cause i want to see how it goes on^^