Pokemon: Deluge!

[Super Pichu]

This is a hack i thought up.
Story: You are a young Boy/Girl who lives in Labrynna, a region north of the Johto/Kanto landmass, One day, it starts to rain, when it never rains in Labrynna, which is stange, a few days pass and the rain dosn't seem to stop, so Prof. Cedar, the reigons Pokemon Professor, calls all the young kids of LittleDrop to his Lab, to give him/her their first Pokemon, Chikorita, Charmander, or Mudkip, to set out on a journey to find whats making the rain, and save Labrynna! on they way you face of against team Deluge grunts, sometimes with other residents of LittleDrop, by the time you have 3 Pins from the type masters, you learn about Manpahy, and that team Deluge is controling it from there headquarters high in the mountains of Labrynna, make never ending rain to flood Labrynna so they can make their new kingdom, and it's up to you to stop them, and become the Pokemon Champ of Labrynna!

Features:
4 Master badges to collect.
New Evil Team, Team Deluge!
Mascot Pokemon: Manaphy
All new Poke League
Type Masters: Landon: Ground type master
Rex: Dark Type Master
Kelly: Poison Type Master
Aryll: Flying Type Master.
More to come when we start devolpment....

Creators Note:
This is a Hack for Firered, it is my first hack, and i will need lots, and LOTS of help for this, beuse i can't even make a decent town, without screwing it up, plus i have trouble with warps, so i will probably do the Ideas, and the scripting, mostly becuse this is my first hack.
P.S MANPHY WILL BE THE ONLY SINNOH POKEMON IN THE GAME.

 

[Sweet Jasmine]

i could just say Goodluck with this hack, Because your a starter.. Hope you wont quit..
And i hope you'll learn to script. Because Scripting is the peoples most hardest tool in hacking :P.. By the way again Goodluck~ and also the Storyline is kinda bit short.. Make it a little more interesting and more longer.. But it's your storyline. If you dont wanna change it. It's alright.. But you change it it's much better :P

 

[gummybarz]

I think you should re think this, when i started off hacking i thought off
a storyline that was unique. Not just "you get your pokemon from a prof, face the elite four
blah blah blah save the city, catch legend, your the hero complete poke dex" Think of something
better i know you can. What about "the town floods everone is in shock, you have just woken up from sleeping, and your house is flooed, you swim out and your on your roof. Everyone has ran away and your the only one left. So you decide to go to the prof lab which is flooed you get all of the pokemon that are found on his desk" I can't tell you more that's all, think it up a bit and your be find...

 

[Super Pichu]

i could just say Goodluck with this hack, Because your a starter.. Hope you wont quit..
And i hope you'll learn to script. Because Scripting is the peoples most hardest tool in hacking :P.. By the way again Goodluck~ and also the Storyline is kinda bit short.. Make it a little more interesting and more longer.. But it's your storyline. If you dont wanna change it. It's alright.. But you change it it's much better :P

i'll try! warping is had for me because i don't understand the map banks and stuff on advance map, and when the little red box shows up i can't drag it to were i want to.. but i won't give up, hopefully ill get better once my dad gets the parts for my comp, i am using my moms right know >.<

 

[Ray Maverick]

My Post.....

This looks good.I like the idea of the never ending rain.
Make the storyline bigger,with one more BIG event.

PS: i learned warps in 2 min. ;)

I'm not writing every time i post this CSS design

 

[Skystrike]

My Post.....

This looks good.I like the idea of the never ending rain.
Make the storyline bigger,with one more BIG event.

PS: i learned warps in 2 min. ;)

I'm not writing every time i post this CSS design

Lol, I took a week. On my first ever hack,i put a warp to Petalburg City every time. (Ruby hack)

 

[Super Pichu]

Okay guys im gonna put this on hold atm, i am going to start it again when my own computer gets fixed, and when i get a bit better with advance map and pocket script,
i am still looking for spriters though, so send me a message if you want to help, and i was wondering if somone give me a lesson for advance map? like a thread, and i post with questions and you tell me?