POkemon DESPERADO

[Crimson Stardust]

Pokemon desperado

This idea is dead so i will not be working on it anymore...
Search for my new hack ideas called Pokemon Dimension Legends

 

[Ray Maverick]

The storyline is small,i think its better to tell us more.
And you're missing the features section,show us the features of this version.
And your team,what can you do,how do we join...

 

[Micro SD]

I'm kinda confused on some of the details. It would probably be more understandable if you fixed the grammar problems. However, I think I get the general idea of your story and it seems like a good idea.

 

[GoldxLight]

Good luck! But maybe you should post your features, and a form for your Team.

 

[Crimson Stardust]

actually i don have a team... i am alone...that is why i want help...i am clueless about features???what is it???this is my first thread....if you wanna help....i hope you help...i will elaberate the story more after some pepole agree to help me...AND I DON NOE A FORM FOR MY TEAM...MAYBE ANYONE CAN HELP ME THEN I WILL DISCUSSED THE FORM

NOW TWO OF MMY FRENS WILL BE HELPING ME WITH THE HACKED

 

[Ray Maverick]

Turn the caps off,so we can talk normally.And fix the grammar,i don't understand what are you saying.
I can't really explain the features,look at other threads to understand this.

 

[GoldxLight]

Also, please change the text colour. Red is too hard to read.