Pokemon Eo!

[Jake]

thats bad, when some of the pictures of back sprites are trainers and some are pokemon, u could of did that with 1, like the b rock, and said "a wild brock appeared" or something, and in the back trainer sprites for the guy with brown hair, HE HAS NO SHADING! and same goes for the brendan edit, and u should really consider make speech bubbles,and some screens are smalller than the others, and then i was lookin at the brock overworld. he has red instead of green, but in his trainer sprite it has green instead of red, same for one of the overworlds, and mistys overworlds to, first she has yellow, then she has on a swimsuit, how does that happen? and wut r the chances of finding pokemon that arnt avaliable to any1? and y does every1 say "huh?"

 

[HikozaruLover]

Read my post above,NEXT EPPY HAS SPEECHBUUBLES!

 

[HikozaruLover]

Sorry for yet another DP,but new eppy!
https://www.maj.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=626720<-Speechbubles!

 

[[NovaPirate]]

1. Go and get emerald sprites. Use printscreen on the brendan page, and get normal wally sprites.
2. MAKE THEM LOSE!!
3. Don't make poke'mon just appear and be catchable to whoever walks along, that's stupid.
4. Make the plot interesting, to me, the plot is a piece of crap.
5. Keep it to three characters max, and don't just throw out characters after a comic.
6. Show the whole battle
7. Brendan sends his poke'mon out, walks to the side, doesn't battle,, and gets a badge. Stupid? yes.

0/10

 

[HikozaruLover]

Okay,I'm still happy I added speechbubbles.
The next comic(like anyone cares)is going to be cancled for awhile,lot's of stuff going on.

 

[HikozaruLover]

Sorry for yet another DP,New eppy!
The Name's Jamie