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Pokemon Eon Roar

Hoshiko Aki

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    • 109
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    16
    Years
    • Seen Oct 17, 2011
    Features:

    Eon pokémon
    Statues of the eon pokémon
    Pokemon adoption centre.
    New starter.
    8 new gym leaders
    2 main ledgends
    New hero/heroine
    New tiles (later i will at them intro the game.
    and more



    Story:

    Spoiler:


    Media center
    Spoiler:


    Credits:

    sophidius - Translating the story.

    Bugs/errors:

    There is own grammar error on own sreen but thats al ready fixed
     
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    Not a bad start. I can't tell you what I think of the story(I don't speak Dutch) ,but everything else looks good, and your grammar isn't that bad for someone who mainly speaks dutch ( I assume). Keep at it!
     
    Good start, I wish you good luck with this.
     
    The eon pokemon exist al ready. Nintendo have made them.
    The eon pokemon are: Latios en Latias. But i have something new a third eon pokemon.

    you must catch him or defeat him then you can battle Latios en Latias.
     
    :O This looks great!
    Adoption centre seems like a great idea!
    I wish you good luck with this ^_^
     
    cheesymitten said:
    :O This looks great!
    Adoption centre seems like a great idea!
    I wish you good luck with this ^_^
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    Thank you!

    BlueSnowHoundoom said:
    Adoption centre is a cute idea >.<
    What levels would the pokemon be? All one level, or varied?
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    In the first adoption center you can get only one pokemon Your starter.
    BUt i have plan to sett a second adpotion center and evry time you beat a gym leader you can adopt a new pokemon at a differt level.

    example:

    Beaten gym 1

    You get a Pikachu level 8.

    Beaten gym 5

    You get a Pidgotto level 22

    Just a example.

    And i think you can buy some pokemons there but i'm not sure, about that.


    baseballscooper said:
    Oh I figured they would be fakemon or something I didn't realize they were real pokemon. Good luck with this.
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    Thank you

    Thank you all of you.
     
    Micro SD said:
    Not a bad start. I can't tell you what I think of the story(I don't speak Dutch) ,but everything else looks good, and your grammar isn't that bad for someone who mainly speaks dutch ( I assume). Keep at it!
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    As I'm Dutch I'll happily translate it for you:

    A long, a very long time ago the people were often visited by the two Eon Pokemon: Latios and Latias. These Pokemon have always been very friendly and helpful.
    It went like this for a long time, a very long time even. In this time the people had reserved a sacred place where they sacrificed their food to the Eon Pokemon.

    Then, one day a new baby was born in a town far away from here. According to the ancient prophesy of the ancient people of PokeLantis there will once be born a child who'll leave the entire world in chaos. Suddenly, the Eon Pokemon started to appear less frequently and after they didn't show up anymore at all!
    That moment, people carved statues of the two Eon Pokemon, hoping they would return somewhen.

    And then one day the world gave birth to you. You've always wanted to visit the Eon statues some time. That's why you decided you'd go on a journey to visit them. But many dangers lurk on your journey. A new crime syndicate has arisen from the dark clutches of the region, led by the King of Darkness.
    Does this King of Darkness have anything to do with the Eon Pokemon's disappaerance? You think so and fate has decided that you are the one to solve it!

    (btw, his Dutch grammar was very poor, even I had trouble to read it. @raibaru: I suggest you put this, instead of that storyline in your thread)
     
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    The scripts look alright, but your going to have to improve on your mapping a bit.

    Good luck~
     
    sophidius said:
    - story here -

    (btw, his Dutch grammar was very poor, even I had trouble to read it. @raibaru: I suggest you put this, instead of that storyline in your thread)
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    Thank you so much. I have edit the story here with this own. thank you so much. I have also give you credits for translating it.

    destinedjagold said:
    The screenies look nice.

    Though you need to have an English storyline...
    This is an English forum, so provide an English story in your first post, k?
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    Yes I understand that. I have own now thanks to sophidius.


    naoi. said:
    The scripts look alright, but your going to have to improve on your mapping a bit.

    Good luck~
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    Thank you. I'm working ion my mapping. i will edit the first city later.
     
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