Pokemon "Forest Green"

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

I didn't know I had to give credit when I first joined this site.

I just got permission to make a "Forest Green" thread! Yay. Here are the trainers that will be in it. I made myself, and some trainers that I made for people who wanted to be in it. Hope you like it. XD Some were added by other people. (Coronis from Serebii, and Signomi.) (I never got assistants for it to make it a comic.)


I edited it to give credit. Sorry that I forgot, it was 4am and I needed rest.

And here is the intro comic that you have been waiting for! XD
I am sorry that I did not post it earlier but it was 4 in the morning where I live. Here is Part one of my comic. I redid it to make some changes and to get rid of the annoying "subtitles". :18: It did not work. Hope it works now.

https://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1340/forestgreenintro6lb.png

Hope you like it XD :18:

Main character: Julie
Mother: Lindsay
Sibling/Brother: Sammy
Grandfather: Blaine

Setting : Kanto-Johto-Hoenn (mix of the three, and lots of transporting via Abra.)

 

[Smarties-chan]

Um... So, where's the comic? This thing only shows the trainers *ish confused*

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

Um... So, where's the comic? This thing only shows the trainers *ish confused*

I am about to post the first few screens of the comic. I just chose the color palette for the introduction. So just be patient. XD :18: <Mudkip wants you to. XD

I am ready to edit the first post and add the screenies. Hint hint...Celebi color palette in Intro. Hold on... :18:

 

[Jaybob]

umm on fariah i see you have the head of tara made by signomi... please give credit for it or you will be considered a sprite theif

 

[Signomi]

Yes, please atleast give credit to me for the head XD

Well, one can't truely answer on your poll as you've not shown any comics yet. So I await the first comic you do :)

 

[Karasuma]

My Dear, I know your new but still you must read the rules..you can't open a sprite comic with no comic..otherwise this will get closed..no hard feelings^^

 

[Signomi]

Just to let you know, RL, that it doesn't say that in the SC rules.

But yes, it would be preferable if you made the thread when you've atleast made 1 comic :)

 

[Karasuma]

Just to let you know, RL, that it doesn't say that in the SC rules.

But yes, it would be preferable if you made the thread when you've atleast made 1 comic :)

Oh...okay..I get it now. Well at least an intro would be cool..cause then I can't rate her comic :(

 

[adwajr]

You can't answer to this poll.
Should I continue?
No comics to continue. Sorry but you must make a comic, like the rules say. Not just bios.

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

You can't answer to this poll.
Should I continue?
No comics to continue. Sorry but you must make a comic, like the rules say. Not just bios.

Sorry just wait. I will give credit, I just forgot the name of who made it I wanted to edit once I remember the name. :( Hold on please. I will post the comic in 7 minutes. Just be patient.

Why must all of you pick on me? I am new here. I did make the comic but I fell asleep at 4 in the morning making it for this thread. But I forgot to post the intro because I was tired. :( And I needed to go to sleep. Sheesh and they say red heads are mean meanwhile everyone is mean to red heads...and I just happen to be a natural red head WITH blue eyes....
I made my mini sprite from scratch!

Yes, please at least give credit to me for the head XD

Well, one can't truely answer on your poll as you've not shown any comics yet. So I await the first comic you do :)

I gave you credit. Sorry :(, it was 4 in the morning and I forgot your user name. But last night i decided to just edit it to give you credit in the morning. Sorry, it took awhile but I gave you credit for the head.
You can start commenting on the intro...I gave credit to signomi for the hair! Thanx and sorry :( will you forgive me? I am not a sprite theif! I was going to edit it during decent hours to give credit once I found out who made the sprite! WHAT do you guys have against red heads for anyway?

I have to keep editing this post because I can't double post.

 

[adwajr]

Horray, can't wait. We can then put our answers in the poll. If I'm allowed, I'll join after you make a few comics.

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

Horray, can't wait. We can then put our answers in the poll. If I'm allowed, I'll join after you make a few comics.

I posted the intro! I will give credit to The Sprite's resource and Serebii.net. For some of the stuff. Oh and my favorite legendary, celebi, for the color palette, I used the colors on celebi and used it in the intro. You'll see what I mean.

edit: I did not use the Fariah or Shampoo sprite in the intro. JSYK(Just so you know)

JSYUAK(Just so you all know) Shampoo also has the hair, but I GAVE CREDIT! XD It was four am and I was tired and couldn't think clearly. I wanted to wait until decent hours to edit it because I didn't think anyone would be up that late besides me. I edited it to give credit. Sorry won't happen ever again. I can't think clearly at 4 am. I fell asleep around 4:30 and woke up at 8 this morning and I am exhausted. I have a very low self esteem and take things very personally. Sorry. I gave credit earlier. Again I am really truly sorry.

 

[Koji]

The graphics are cool, but the "word" text under panel is awful. We know what the picture above means, so you don't need to put "what is your name?" or "Ashley is is her new bedroom" Ok ? :)

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

The graphics are cool, but the "word" text under panel is awful. We know what the picture above means, so you don't need to put "what is your name?" or "Ashley gets her own new room" Ok ? :)

Alright so I'll get rid of it. I skipped some stuff, I just wanted to let people know.
So I am guessing you, Koji are the one who voted "no way, that's terrible"....I have a very low self esteem. :( (pisces)
What did you not like about it beside the "subtitles"? How can I make it better? What should I add?

 

[Signomi]

Cooltrainer Ashley Rose: Please do not assume he's mean or a little jealous when he never implied so, he gave you a comment, therefore you need to endure it and use it to help you improve on certain things. Plus, it's good to be original, not just follow other people and the way they do their comics, if you are doing so, viewers love looking at originality, Also, if you dislike the fact that somebody voted on that option on the poll, then why did you add it? Do not take it as a mean comment, take it as criticism, you'll find that people do get it in this comic forum and it isn't to say that you're bad at anything or so, it's to imply that you need to improve on certain things, and you can :) Keep trying, I know you can do some good work ;)

 

[Shijuukara]

@Cooltrainer Ashley Rose: People here are trying to help you. Please always give credit and read the rules. We don't have anything against you it is just that we re are helping you. I'm sorry but sometimes using the excuse "I'm new" doesn't always help.

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

@Cooltrainer Ashley Rose: People here are trying to help you. Please always give credit and read the rules. We don't have anything against you it is just that we're helping you. I'm sorry but sometimes using the excuse "I'm new" doesn't always help.

Do you know how to get rid of the pole thing then? I did give credit AFTER I woke up. But I was up until 4 am and I was too tired to continue searching through all the forums just to find out who made it, I edited the trainers that I posted and gave credit. I wanted to wait until decent hours to give credit. I didn't think anyone was going to go on this thread yet. I am sorry, again. I go to more than one site like this one and each one has different rules so it is hard to remember which is which. But I do know, not to spam, not double post, and not to flame. Sorry to all of those who don't like me. I just wish I could just start over and have you all of you like me. I started this forum to show the stuff I made and to have people tell me how kawaii I have done. I just wanted you guys to be my friends and not to get mad at me. I am sorry. Maybe I should ask to have this thread closed unless some of you try to convince me not to... :( I am currently working Part one of "Forest Green". Maybe you guys can convince me to change my mind.

 

[Signomi]

Well, I'm afraid you cannot have expectations for each forum you go to. There will be people who will criticise a few things about your work when it is needed. We don't dislike you, Cooltrainer Ashley Rose, we just say the things we do because we actually care, if we never did, we would've just looked at this thread and just lurk onto another thread and so forth. Don't get me wrong, I don't mean people who do say 'I like it, etc' don't care either, they do care, otherwise they wouldn't post. We don't hate you for any particular reason, we just tell you what needs to be done and what is recommended. :)

How about this, if you want, I can close this thread, and you can start a new one, so you can start fresh :)

 

[Cooltrainer Ashley Rose]

Well, I'm afraid you cannot have expectations for each forum you go to. There will be people who will criticise a few things about your work when it is needed. We don't dislike you, Cooltrainer Ashley Rose, we just say the things we do because we actually care, if we never did, we would've just looked at this thread and just lurk onto another thread and so forth. Don't get me wrong, I don't mean people who do say 'I like it, etc' don't care either, they do care, otherwise they wouldn't post. We don't hate you for any particular reason, we just tell you what needs to be done and what is recommended. :)

How about this, if you want, I can close this thread, and you can start a new one, so you can start fresh :)

Thanks. XD I'm sorry. :( I wanted to start over anyway. Thank you very much. I wasn't ready to post the screens anyway.

 

[Signomi]

Alright then. Then that's settled. I'll close this thread, and then you can start a new one :)

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~Closed