pokemon: giovanni's revenge

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pokemon prof. for team rocket
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    name: pokemon giovanni's revenge

    made with: rmpg, english but may be another language

    introduction: it's not that good but it'll have to do with a short team. it's kind of a kick off from pokemon yellow, red and gold. and this my first game so i hope it's good.

    story: it starts off with you going to prof. red's lab but when you enter you see giovanni and his persian battling prof. red and his pikachu. persian uses scratch on pikachu and pikachu faints. then giovanni steals prof. red's pokemon and disappears. player goes up to prof. red and prof. red tells you about team rocket and how giovanni swore he will be back and player others to stop team rocket for prof. red. prof. red gives you a new invented pokemon.

    features:
    new reigon
    going to the old regions
    new pokemon
    team rocket is back
    huge risks
    and lots lots more

    screen shots:
    see attachment.

    team:
    agent destroyer (scripter, owner, founder etc.)
    souless (graphic designer)
    omagagroundon (graphic designer)
    obliviousmew (spriter)
    pkmn_knight (mapper

    who we want:
    spriters
    mappers
    programmers
    scripters
    pm me if you want to help

    surrport banners: none yet

    demos: none yet
     
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    This game needs allot of work
    1) you need to learn how to use layers you can't just stick everything on one layer or it will look a mess(referring to pic 3)

    2) your outdoor map is way too empty try adding extra stuff to it such as grass, flowers and more trees and maybe even some water.

    3)your last map is the worst it's way too big and empty you need to make the map smaller (by making the map size smaller or if it is as small as it can get use blank tiles to make it smaller) and it's too empty add extra stuff to it to make it look nicer.

    4) your storyline could be allot better than it is work on it a bit more and try to make it sound like a story that people would pay for because if you don't have a gripping storyline people won't want to play the game and you will end up giving up on it, like most do with there first game

    well that's my opinion so far keep at it and you will improve.
     
    it's ok it's a very early stage i still haven't got the hang of it
    and thanks i was wondering what the layers did.
    and i've been shrinking it.
     
    are these better? i did some layers and got rid of the black.
     
    i'll deal with the maps now i'll leave the grammer for later
     
    Okay, your mapping are sucks.
    And you should get a mapper...
     
    i'm trying to get one. read the first post
     
    o: WHAT!? No permission from me? THE Giovanni?
    Nah im kidding, the only thing that interests me in this game though, truly, is that Giovanni is in it. Personally i dont like RPG-Maker games, my only interest is Giovanni, which explains my visit to these forums. Good day and good luck. Giovanni better pwn the hero D:
     
    I could be a mapper and sort out the grammer Problems, I will pm you.
    As they say the mapping sucks and your grammer... Well.... What can i say...
     
    YOU NOOB WTF IS TH-

    Ahem.. No Dash, stay away from the flaming. Bad Dash. Bad.

    Seriously now,
    You need to work on a lot of things mate, your Grammar in particular, a game with bad Grammar is just a bane on the eye to read and will decrease the quality of your game in the long run.

    You need to cramp your maps in a bit more. Look at the real Pokémon games, do they have giant maps with nothing in them? If you can't fill the space then make the area smaller, simple as that.
     
    that why i need to hire someone.
    i also need a spriter

    giovanni: whether giovanni wins or not depends on the choose you make :o
     
    please do not get this confused with pokemon protectors or rangers or other such games
     
    Why did you wake me up? What time is it?

    Here, I'll rewrite the speech for your screenshots.
    • Oi! Boss said nobody may pass!
    • Player, are you ready? Your adventure will be both fun and challenging. A world of mystery and fantasy awaits to be explored. Let's go!
    • Wait! Don't forget your PokeGear.
    • Huh? What was that? I heard something from downstairs.
    • I don't believe it!

    If you need inspiration, CLICK HERE, then click 'GAME SCRIPT' on the list. I'm not allowed to link to it directly.
     
    Angel Shaymin said:
    First of all, you have bad grammar for the text.
    Second, I see some over lapping tiles and several map errors.
    Third, this game's story is VERY familiar
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    It's very hard for people to keep coming up with names Angel, there are only so many subtitles that can be used while still feeling Pokémonish.

    Back when I was working on Pokémon Dash people kept yelling at me for using the NDS Game's name.

    I've seen Giovanni's Revenge 3 or 4 times now.
     
    Improfane said:
    [*]Player, are you ready? Your adventure will be both fun and challenging. A world of mystery and fantasy awaits to be explored. Let's go!
    Click to expand...

    that was already done if you press enter ingame it will show that.

    by the way: i've already thought about the next game. (just a story idea)
     
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