I played a bit of the game until it glitched up in Prof. Oak's lab. I think my character was supposed to be moving, but something caused it to glitch. Anyways. From what I've played, it's okay. There are a few things that could do with some work. I would have a better sense of the game if I played more, but that glitch put me off. Ash's sprite is a bit off in general. Also, why is his overworld sprite unchanged? You just used Red's sprite from FR/LG The same goes for your mom. Her name is "Delia" too. ;D
On the plus side, I like that the grammar and spelling is over-all not bad. Some of the dialogue in the first, little bit was really entertaining.