DarkMage31
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- None of your beeswax!
- Seen Nov 24, 2007
I spy with my little eye... minute little changes that should be made. I'm just going to be really picky now :)
1) Look at the pillars. They start at the roof and go to the ground. However, they meet the ground away from where the wall meets the ground. Because of the top position of the pillars in relation to the bottom, it looks like they're on a slant
***/-|
**/--|
*/---|
/----|
It's hard to explain, but I hope you get the idea :) Like I said, it's very subtle
2) Now direct your attn to the shadow to the left of the path. At the top of the path where the dirt merges with grass, your shadow is cut short in the jaggedness of the transition. In fact, almost all of the shadowed dirt looks out of place and too rigid.
3) Where's the guy that tells you what the type of the gym leader is, etc?
Nice job :) It's as easy as 1-2-3!
1) Look at the pillars. They start at the roof and go to the ground. However, they meet the ground away from where the wall meets the ground. Because of the top position of the pillars in relation to the bottom, it looks like they're on a slant
***/-|
**/--|
*/---|
/----|
It's hard to explain, but I hope you get the idea :) Like I said, it's very subtle
2) Now direct your attn to the shadow to the left of the path. At the top of the path where the dirt merges with grass, your shadow is cut short in the jaggedness of the transition. In fact, almost all of the shadowed dirt looks out of place and too rigid.
3) Where's the guy that tells you what the type of the gym leader is, etc?
Nice job :) It's as easy as 1-2-3!