Pokemon Ice Crystal-The Comic!

Sweet Smoochum

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    I completely removed my comic,
    Pokemon Ice Crystal.

    It stars a girl named Chelsea in the Johto Region, born in New Bark Town. She has a Mareep, a Corsola.
    Her friend, T.J. travels with her. Her mother Amy, and her younger brother, Sammy live in the same house as her.
    She goes on an exciting adventure in the Johto region, with Chikorita.
     
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    First Post!! Yippe!! lol

    Wow this comic is really great... I love how you make the overworlds have eyes rather then just lines.. The speech bubbles are great and the jokes are really funny... not to mention that all of these overworlds you created are very nice and original! I wish you good luck with this comic and It looks like it has a bright future...
     
    so u finnaly came out without, its pretty good, wuts with theur eyes though(i bet ur tryin out of the ordinary comic)? But, i like them. I kinda didnt c enough, so i hope to c more
     
    Wow Lily this is good. Please make more and dont just end it!
     
    It seems well put together, but you should never break the 4th wall by saying something about the comic. That's a real old cliche, it didn't really make me laugh, but this is nice so far.
     
    Yay! GLL's Comic!

    Im wondering, where are you going to get the Johto Maps from?
     
    It looks pretty nice - the maps have an overall sense of quality to them, good on ya.

    My nly biff with it is that you put the person's name before what they say - we already know whose saying it, the speech bubble is pointing at them :P If you really wanna disinguish the dialogue though, then just put them as different colours for each characters (but keep it consistent).

    And the eyes are mad - I can't wait to see you use them more and more when you're displaying emotions.

    Good work.
     
    Awsome.....

    Thats an awsome userbar and I will use it. btw the newest comic you posted was histerical... "Mom I can reach the pizza!" lmao and was richie the dude from the pokemon anime???
     
    i just wunna know were i can get me a userbar, anyway the episode was funny and i like the bar
     
    Wow the userbar is good. Also, nice episode. Will Chelsea have too pokemon to start off since she already has the mareep?
     
    This is an awesome comic! I love teh Johtoness. I think your the first person to dare brave the COmic World with a Johto comic and actually do good. I ish like the scratch/heavily edited sprites.
     
    We'll its yet another good comic GLL. I love the facial expressions.
     
    This is quite an intresting start ^_^, I might make some stuff you for, like fanclub tag, or if you need any help, I might advise working on the text, since its slightly hard to read.
     
    Not only are you actually using speech bubbles, but the sprites don't suck adn I see hardly any grammatical mistakes! ^^
     
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