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- Age 29
- Salisbury, England
- Seen Nov 23, 2023
I definitely like the tileset that you're using and I admire the fact thy you're trying to do something different with your hack. However I think there are some glaring problems with this project that if fixed would round the hack off much better. Now, I do like the fact you're not going for the regular starter triangle but the three Pokemon you have chosen make little to no sense when grouped together, I'm also worried about the script as it doesn't look like you're using a multichoice box rather that you're running through all 3 Pokemon which is a big no no for me.
I think you should either scrap the title screen you're using for completely rework it, it is just poor. The text is horribly done and doesn't fit in the style of Pokemon, it's much too blank and the red sprite you're using looks completely out of place and badly drawn. Your mapping also leaves a lot to be desired starting with the weird tree placement and small tile paths. I just think that you may need to take a look at some of the better maps in the map rating thread or take a look at the maps of some better hacks. Good luck but I think this hack needs a lot of work before is even consider playing it.
I think you should either scrap the title screen you're using for completely rework it, it is just poor. The text is horribly done and doesn't fit in the style of Pokemon, it's much too blank and the red sprite you're using looks completely out of place and badly drawn. Your mapping also leaves a lot to be desired starting with the weird tree placement and small tile paths. I just think that you may need to take a look at some of the better maps in the map rating thread or take a look at the maps of some better hacks. Good luck but I think this hack needs a lot of work before is even consider playing it.