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im a newb at this, so just bear with me...
Features:
New Region: Neru
New Legendaries: ?????
New Team: Team Solar/Team Dusk (depending on the game)
Backstory:
You begin your journey in your home town of Shine Town. The Pokemon Professor of your town, Profesor Maple, has been studying in the field of Pokemon for years now, and you plan on following in her footsteps. Your mom, who runs a breeding center, lends you one of her Pokemon to begin your journey.
Not long after you begin your journey, you catch word of two ancient relics containing shrines to the Pokemon who govern Day and Night, as well as a primitive puzzle. You become fascinated with the relic closest to your home town and begin to investigate. You come in contact with an "excavating team" and boots you out of the relic. You're left with only your one Pokemon and your thoughts as you make your way to the next town and your first gym battle.
That okay for a start? Any constructive criticism?
EDIT: I decided to change it up a little. i hand-drew a map and chose to change a few elements. The underlines are what i changed.
Features:
New Region: Neru
New Legendaries: ?????
New Team: Team Solar/Team Dusk (depending on the game)
Backstory:
You begin your journey in your home town of Shine Town. The Pokemon Professor of your town, Profesor Maple, has been studying in the field of Pokemon for years now, and you plan on following in her footsteps. Your mom, who runs a breeding center, lends you one of her Pokemon to begin your journey.
Not long after you begin your journey, you catch word of two ancient relics containing shrines to the Pokemon who govern Day and Night, as well as a primitive puzzle. You become fascinated with the relic closest to your home town and begin to investigate. You come in contact with an "excavating team" and boots you out of the relic. You're left with only your one Pokemon and your thoughts as you make your way to the next town and your first gym battle.
That okay for a start? Any constructive criticism?
EDIT: I decided to change it up a little. i hand-drew a map and chose to change a few elements. The underlines are what i changed.
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