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great job dude like both of them I have an insperation! Awesome!
great job dude like both of them I have an insperation! Awesome!
Here is a town I made called silver Town
Do you like it or not?
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Really I haven't inserted it. It was made from scratch. I don't really care I just wanted to test it out. I'm just testing okay. I was going to add more stuff to it like poke balls and stuffWow, I don't know where to start. I'll just list them. This is constructive criticism, not insults...
- Flowers are spammed everywhere.
-Theres an array of flowers leading to a dead end on the right side. I don't know why.
-Theres grass IN the town... >.>
-The gym sign is outside the fence...plus, there shouldn't even be a fence...
-The house on the left is too wide and why is there a maze leading up to the door?
-Theres a tile error on a corner of the mountainous region.
-The 4 rocks on top are aligned..thats unnatural.
-In my opinion one step tile for me works, you don't need three.
-Omg, why are there steps leading to the entrance of the cave. The ground and lake are at the exact same height so what are you climbing?
-Those bushes near the cave and at the bottom shouldn't be in rows...it looks unnatural.
-Theres no pokemon center. I know you don't need one but still.
Please don't post the permissions here, you probably got that wrong too. And so to your question.....No, I don't like this town. It could use a ton more work. In fact, I'd recommend you start over. You will save time rather than fixing everything...
Remember its constructive criticism, don't get offended.
Really I haven't inserted it. It was made from scratch. I don't really care I just wanted to test it out. I'm just testing okay. I was going to add more stuff to it like poke balls and stuff
I'm making a test town right now very small town with not much to it a simple town really edit I just finished the simple town
Here is the simple town a test
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Tell me what you think?
thanks I'm just doing a simple mapNice, you improved....I don't see any tile errors..
A couple suggestions to make this town more town-ish:
-Try and connect the houses, gym and cave with a path
-A pokemon center would be nice
-Adding a couple rocks around the cave wouldn't hurt
-Those mailboxes shouldn't be there unless thats the starting town (Which would be odd)
Other than that not bad compared to the map before...
thanks I'm just doing a simple map
not much to this map. It's not planned for the game tho. I think Beta 1 would end after the first gym no mt. Moon!
thanks I'm working on my personal stuffGood luck with this. Hope it goes well.
okayTell me when to start working.
thanks for the tip and I don't know witch map you are talking about show me itIt could be better, and i seen some maps that have water and you have the water right next to the grass with no border ther is a peice for that you know
~wayne
That was from an old versionThis one. And without that peice the hack will look like a gold hack.
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