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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The WishMaker's Quest

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Name: Darkly
Gender:male
Pokemon Species:Flygon
age:1000(can't die of old age because dialga made him that way)
Side: Primal Dialga
Appearance: He is a black and grey flygon with red eyes that can hypnotize other pokemon. He wears a black cape and he uses it to hide in the shadows, unfortunately, it does not work.His wings look more like the wings of a salmence, and he can use them to whip up powerful windstorms. He can extend his claws,breathe black fire and his red eyes burn with the fire of a pokemon who has been betrayed too many times.

Personality: Darkly is evil and very insane. He is also quite inteligent and extremly powerful. He says that he has the power of Giratina, but that's a bit of an exaggeration. he can use the Shadow Force attack though....He hates everyone who is not his ally, especially the Sceptile named Trika.He is also very unpridictable and random, always using his signature Gwahahahahaha! laugh. He gets annoyed easily and oddly, he loves cake.

History: He was once the mayor of a large city on a distant island, but he was framed for 10 murders he didn't commit. He was banished to some ancient ruins, and sealed inside, but they didn't know that it was really temporal tower. He eventually got to the top, where he met Primal Dialga. Primal Dialga made a deal with Darkly: he would kill all of the inhabitants of the city, in exchange for Darkly's neverending service. Darkly agreed, and he has been Primal Dialga's assistant ever since.

Other: Darkly is dark type insted of ground.

I tried to fix all the grammar mistakes. and I explained the age.
 
Okay, NOW YOU'VE DONE IT! I'm freakin' OVERBOOKED ALREADY with RPs, and you just HAD to go and make one that I MIGHT POSSIBLY JOIN? PHEAR MY ANGRYNESS! RAWR!

Gummy, Piez, I am here. And I am joining. And this, Darkly, lv99rayquaza, and everyone else, is a sign-up, dagnabbit.

Name: Roxanne DeThursugal

Gender: Female (I mean, seriously, too many guys already)

Age: 25

Side: Destined Questers.... you know, this name just screams for Gummy to rename his character "Cyrano".

Pokemon Species: Sneasel

Appearance: Well... I'm not sure what to say. Roxanne is... a Sneasel. A female Sneasel. Maybe a bit smaller than the average Sneasel, but not noticeably so, and it really doesn't do much to hamper her in combat. That being said, Roxanne considers herself to be extremely attractive compared to other Sneasel. So much so, in fact, that she takes extra time each day to bathe, groom herself meticulously, and tease the ends of her coat into place. Unfortunately for poor Roxanne, she really doesn't succeed in any way, shape, or form in differentiating herself from other Sneasel in her appearance. She is, to put it bluntly, depressingly mediocre. As such, she really needs no elaboration on her appearance beyond "She's a female Sneasel with a complex". She proudly wears a recently acquired scarf (specifically, a Pecha Scarf) in order to stand out in a crowd. The scarf is probably her most prized possession, and she goes nowhere without it.

Personality: Bubbly, sweet, and kind to a fault... are words that do anything but describe Roxanne. She's devious, cunning, and a major pain in the... well, you know. She'll help you out, sure, but only when she thinks that she can benefit from it. If anyone had joined a rescue team with the idea of getting rich off of the rewards, it was Roxanne. Well, that is, if rescues were still lucrative. These days, the idea of getting a reward from the mission is just laughable, mostly because there's nobody left to give out rewards. Everyone's as broke as everyone else, and the best you can hope for is a couple of Gravelerocks and maybe a Pecha berry or two. If there's one thing Roxanne can't stand, it's altruism- you either pay her or give her something to gain, or you'll be getting nothing, by Jove. Still... there's something behind her manipulative and greedy ways that keeps her from just joining up with Dialga in an attempt to live the good life. Perhaps the rumors whispered around the village, that Roxanne acts this way because she lost something extremely valuable to her at some point in the past have some truth to them... or maybe, as others say, she's in debt to someone and needs to pay it off fast. In any case, Roxanne will do almost anything for the promise of money. It doesn't take a genius to figure out why she's searching for a wishmaker...

History: They called him Cyrano.

I swear, I'll never meet anyone like him. He and I used to live in a village on the mountainside... before all this, y'know, craziness started. I was just a girl back then. Sixteen, maybe. Didn't know the ways of the world.

So one day, this hotshot Sneasel saunters into town and says that he's the best. No, I'm not kidding, the best. They laugh at him, of course. A puny Sneasel with a really big snout, the best? You wouldn't believe how much my father laughed at him. He was a champion fighter back in the day. So the village champ- you know how it works, there's always some strong guy in the village who struts around and acts tough to keep out intruders and keep everyone else in line- he struts up and insults this newcomer's snout. We all think he's gonna get mad and break the champ's back, but no, he just laughs along with us and then tells the champ that if he really wanted to insult him he should've done it like so, and shows him.

And shows him another way.

And another way.

By this time, the champ's finally caught on that this newcomer is insulting his intelligence. So he charges. And wouldn't ya know it, the newcomer just rips him to pieces. Not literally, of course, but he gives him a beating that he won't forget for a couple hundred years or so. And then he looks at the rest of us and says, calm as you please, "Who's next?" Can you believe that? He takes down the champ in ten seconds, and has the gall to ask the rest of the village who's next? And without a scratch on him!

I didn't like him at first, but one day he grabs me, drags me aside, and presses a note into my claws, then runs off. I look down and... it's a love poem. He's in love with me.

It takes me three years to realize that I love him too. And by that time, he's been killed. Dialga's lackeys just storm into town, and one of them stabs him in the back.

My village is burnt down. I leave home and make my way to a new village, and take up residence. I don't tell anyone about what happened. No one asks.

I've only got one thing to live for now: Money. And I'll slit my own throat before I ever let anyone else's death make me hurt like that inside.

-Taken from the private journal of Roxanne. Entry date unknown. Several similar entries have been found, indicating a fixation with this Cyrano's death.

Yeah, I know, unorthodox history section, but I find it easier to write the character's POV in history, since they have their own way of looking at it.

Other: Roxanne once robbed the second-largest bank in France using only a ball-point pen.

THIS IS A SIGN-UP. ATTENTION TO DETAIL. I FINISHED THIS IN WHAT, TWENTY MINUTES? NOT THAT HARD. >.>
 
Thesis, I have only one thing to say: ACCEPTED! :D (well, actually I'd say more, but... oh well.)

Darkly... I think I'm going to go ahead and give you a chance. You are ACCEPTED. BUT, you had better RP better than you ever have before if you hope to stay in.

This RP may start sometime soon... If you want to start with the others, but haven't signed up or been accepted, this is probably your last chance to do so. Give it your best, though; no rushing.
 
im not to found of being on the evil side but i guess somewone has to do it :P

Name: Wobbster
Gender: Male
Species: Wobbuffet
Age: about 35
Side: primal dialga
Appearance: just your average wobbuffet but the eyes on his tail have a angry look
he uses a special bright blue orb that powers up his shadow tag ability to capture enemys who try to escape
Personality: even though he is usually in a good mood and cheerful he is still hiding the darkness in his heart
wobbster is a loyal servant who promised his life to dialga before he turned evil and still does so now and will go against anywone who opposes him.
he is a pokemon that is usualy not a fighter but will fight from time to time to beat the opposers of the great dialga
usually he scouts for enemys of dialga and schould he find any sighns of a pokemon planning against dialga he will imidiatly inform the other members of his side to take care of the problem sometimes comming along to fight too
he usually isnt very smart and can be quite annoying at times
he is nice to pokemon on dialgas side but will persue and destroy anywone opposing dialga
*note* he cant use destiny bond because it would make the story too boring if you still want it to make dialgas side more pokemon he,ll still use it if you want
*note#2* he constantly adds the word wobbuffet onto the end of every 4th or 5th sentance
History: Wobbster used to live a normal life before one day he got into a fight with a spiritomb against which he could not do anything, dialga saw this and stopped time to let the wobbuffet escape who then promised to serve him for the rest of his life out of thankfullness
after the tower of time broke wobbster still stays loyal to dialga and follows his every order no matter what it may be
soon to being affected by the darkness making him too evil and very opposing to members of the opposite side


Other: if something with the character is not ok i will change it to make him ok for this rp
 
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To lvl99Rayquaza: I accidentally put your reserved slot with the Destined-Questers... I'm going to go move that now.

CyndaquilMorph, with that grammar and typing-style, I can barely read your whole sign-up. It uses barely any capitalization, is full of gramatical errors, and the use of "Enter" makes it look like a list.

And, about the History, how is he thirty-five with that story of how he came to serve Dialga? Temporal Tower fell a thousand years ago. If he was born before Dialga became Primal Dialga, he would have to be over a milennia old.

Because of the mistake I made with lvl99rayquaza's reserve, however... You now can (and will have to if you still wish to sign-up) join as a Destined-Quester. That works out apparently, since you seemed doubtful about wanting to have an antagonist character...
 
Don't write a list, first and formost. Pressing Enter for every sentence, not using punctuation or capitalization, and ignoring common grammar rules makes it look like a list.

Avoid plot-holes and logic errors in your History. It needs to make as much sense as possible.

Use good grammar. Capitalize the first word in a sentence. Include proper punctuation. Writer as literatly as possible. Sentence-fluency and the like is just as important.

Write a sign-up (or post for that matter) as if you were trying to get an "A" on a Language Arts paper, to give a simple analogy. Or, better yet, write as if you were trying to make a book or piece of literature. That means propergrammar, as well as details, effort, and description.

Oh yes, and THE RPG WILL PROBABLY START TODAY. Likely later, some time tonight.
 
im on the good side now lol
Ok this time ill try not to use enter as much

Name: Wobby
Gender: Male
Species: Wobbuffet
Age: About 35
Side: Destined-Quester
Appearance: Just your average Wobbuffet
Personality: Wobby is a random pokemon who always tries to see the bright side of life no matter what, but if something terribly bad happens he turns very quiet and timid.But mostly cheerful Wobby is always up to help his friends which are to him the things you schould value most in live and you should be happy to have.He has the hang to add the word "Wobbuffet" to the end of every 4th to 5th sentance he says which can also annoy others.He will always try to help pokemon who feel down but often ends up getting on the nerves on some pokemon due to him always trying to talk too.
If it comes to fighting Wobby just stands there and waits to be attacked by foes who dont know his special ability of sending back moves with double the power using counter and mirror coat. Wobby still takes damage from sending back moves and dosent know how to use destiny bond*it would make the story to dull if a major enemy appears*
Finnaly he tries to deflect super effective attacks that are aimed for his friends doing his best but dosent always make it him being rather slow at running .

History: Wobby was born in a forest and got raised by his parents who told him never to give up hope from which he developed his care free way. After his parents died he decided to embark on a search for a way to make the world become a normal place again to fullfil his parents wish.He searched far and wide for a source of reviving the planet but didnt have any luck. Still not giving up hope he decided to settle down in a small village hoping to maybe some day hear a rumour or a legend on how to revive the planet from the pokemon living there or maybe travelers passing through.

other: He knows Counter, Mirror coat, Safeguard and i want to leave out Destiny bond because it would make the story to dull if we fought a major enemy.

If i need something more or something is not alright i wont mind changing anything, or if my grammer is still to bad ill pull out because i dont want to ruin the story.
 
Name: Ace
Gender: Male
Species: Pidgeot
Age: 29
Side: Primal Dialga

Appearance:

Personality:

History:

(Will Edit,Reserve Me)
 
Sandslash10, there are no more slots left for the Primal Dialga side... If you'd have read a few posts back you'd see that I made a mistake with lvl99rayquaza's reserve (and apparently my internet did not want to cooperate when I tried to edit the first post...). Sorry about the confusion, but I can't reserve you for that.

CyndaquilMorph, I'd say it's about good enough, but... your writing. A few problems. Fix them, and you're accepted:

Put a SPACE after every punctuation mark (ie. periods, commas). It makes it harder to read when you don't, and it is proper typing to do so.

Press Enter TWICE for a new paragraph. This is also proper typing.

Fix that, and I'll probably accept you. He seems like an interesting character to RP with...
 
ok i can arrange that

but ill be going on holiday this friday so i might not be on 4 awile
ill try to get to a internet connection every few days to do my part but if im needed you may use my character

i will be gone for 2 weeks but ill try my best to get on as much as possible to right here while im on vacation
 
OOC: Well, I think it's been long enough. Everyone who's reserved, you're still reserved. And Cyndaquil, you can (and probably should) reserve as well if you hope for your sign-ups to mean anything; if someone else decides to sign-up now and is worthy of being accepted, there's nothing I can do but give them the slot. The RPG starts now! With one rather-longish starting post.

IC:

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"And one day, when a bright comet lights up in the sky... those who see its light shall have their destinies revealed..."

The last words of the elder's legend rang in Terra's mind as she stood there on her hind legs, head held high and eyes transfixed upon something far beyond the imagination. It was exactly as it had been described: Bright and white, with a tail of light trailing off behind it across the black night above. There was no doubt. This was that very comet. Of all the possible coincidences...

"Elder Gallade," the Nidorina muttered, motioning to him with one paw. "Look up. I think I see it! The comet!"

With a quick gasp, the Elder turned his head up to the sky, squinting his red eyes tightly. Then, he sat back down, shaking his head.

"There is nothing there, Terra," he said simply.

What?! she wanted to shout, That's impossible! I see it! Clear as the stars! Even clearer! You can't tell me it simply isn't there!

"But," the Gallade added, "It is possible. The legend also states that only those who have been chosen will spot the comet... Could there really be hope?"

Terra's eyes widened, realizing what this meant. Could she be destined to fufill this legend? She looked around her, noticing a few other Pokemon who had been listening to the myth. A Charmeleon. A Sceptile. A Sneasel. Had they seen it as well...?

"Surely one of you has seen it?" she asked, addressing all three of the Pokemon.

***

((OOC: If you are reserved or end up getting accepted later, your character will come in and join the currently accepted characters somehow. I'll leave exactly how up to you. As for everyone who is accepted, get posting! Well... if you have time... Just don't rush. You know what I mean!))
 
Rei was walking through the valleys looking for any sign of rebel bases. "Man, why do I have this job?" Asked Rei to himself. "Master Dialga comes up with the most boring jobs ever." And in an instant, he looked up and saw something. "N-no w-way. That's imp-impossible!" Yelled Rei surprised.

Rei moved out of the canyons following the glimpse of light. "That story can't be true." Said Rei as his tail started swishing rapidly. "I-I gotta tell Master Dialga!" Yelled Rei, but he noticed movement in the distance. Rei looked towards the movement and saw a town full of Pokemon walking around, this calmed Rei down and seemed to lift his spirits. "Hey, today is going to be a good day for me." Said Rei as he smiled. "It'll take an hour or two if I walk, but I'm in no rush." Rei then started walking towards the city, hoping to get some fun in. Oh, would Dialga be pleased with Rei if he destroyed the town.

But a Honchkrow flew in and said. "Mail from Primal Dialga." Rei glared at the crow before grabbing the note.

"Return to base, you have a new assignment, Dialga." Read Rei, translating the scratch that Dialga wrote. "Well, that was inconvienient, but..." Said Rei before running towards Temporal Tower. The town of peaceful pokemon had narrowly escaped destruction... for now.

(ooc: Rei may not have been chosen, but he is well in tune with mystic energies, as he was the village priest back a long time ago(The leaders had to be intune with energies like that to help out the tribe.), and in a paralyzed and weakened future, there's no way he can miss this.)
 
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"Why do I have to do this?" Darkly asked Primal Dialga as he handed him paper "Why can't you get your own paper?"

"BECAUSE I DON'T SEE YOU WRITING!" Prrimal dialga roared as he wrote letters for his agents

"well why can't I go work outside with the other agents?" Darkly asked again.

"Darkly... If anything happened to you... I WOULD HAVE TO GET MY OWN PAPER!" Primal Dialga replied

"sheesh... I was only asking" Darkly said "Hey! is that light? Dialga! I thought you got rid of that stuff!"
 
"That was some story, eh brother?" asked a small Charmander as he stared at the elder Gallade.

Cyrus, however, completely ignored the comment from his younger brother as his attention was focused on the sky. Above them was a glistening shooting star— no, a comet— and no one seemed to notice. Well, almost everyone, as a select few were also gazing at the sky in amazement. It gave off a bright, white light, and a shimmering tail flowed behind it. At first, Cyrus didn't believe what he was seeing. It was as if the legend he just heard wasn't a legend at all, but a prophecy.

"Hey, do you see that?" the Charmeleon asked, nudging his little brother, but also addressing the rest of his large family. All of them look to the stars and then looked back at their brother, honestly confused.

"Su—."

"Surely one of you has seen it?" asked a Nidorina, taking the worlds right from Cyrus' mouth. A smile gradually appeared on the Pokemon's face, as he was glad to know that he was not going crazy.

"You mean the comet, right? I see it clearly, although my brothers see nothing. What does this all mean; is the legend really true?" Cyrus asked with a barrage of questions.

Subconsciously, the Charmeleon glanced at the sky before waiting for the answers. Suddenly, a single word seemed to appear in his head. A word that made Cyrus grin broadly, for reasons he could not explain.

Wish-Maker.
 
((OOC: CyndaquilMorph, you're reserved. But writing the story...? Do you mean posting now? You're not technically accepted yet, so you can't exactly post...

Also, Primal Dialga and his "followers" can see the comet as well. You can play that into your character's storyline if you want, but you don't have to. Just to make things simple...))

IC:

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"Well..." muttered Terra, taking another wary glance up at the object in the sky that seemed to be invisible to almost everyone else, "Does this mean we're... destined... for something?

She turned her head toward the elder, but he was already gone, likely headed back to his hut. "Of coure," the Nidorina grumbled in displeasure. But there was still the Charmeleon, and the two others. If the Charmeleon had seen it, perhaps they also had? They all seemed to be casting the sky a curious look.

Terra closed her eyes, sighing. Suddenly she felt a bit strange. As if there was some hidden meaning in all of this. The comet... The Wish-Maker... Destinies... She had to have something to do with it. But what? And what of these other Pokemon beside her?
 
((OOC: I already did. O.o

Me said:
Put a SPACE after every punctuation mark (ie. periods, commas). It makes it harder to read when you don't, and it is proper typing to do so.

Press Enter TWICE for a new paragraph. This is also proper typing.
Click to expand...

If you mean you edited your sign-up, I still saw all the same problems that were there before. It didn't look like you edited at all. There's still no spaces between punctuation and the like...))
 
Ok i put a space after every fullstop and comma and made paragraphs is it all right now? (Sorry schould it still be wrong).

Name: Wobby
Gender: Male
Species: Wobbuffet
Age: About 35
Side: Destined-Quester
Appearance: Just your average Wobbuffet
Personality: Wobby is a random pokemon who always tries to see the bright side of life no matter what, but if something terribly bad happens he turns very quiet and timid. But mostly cheerful Wobby is always up to help his friends which are to him the things you schould value most in live and you should be happy to have. He has the hang to add the word "Wobbuffet" to the end of every 4th to 5th sentance he says which can also annoy others. He will always try to help pokemon who feel down but often ends up getting on the nerves on some pokemon due to him always trying to talk too.

If it comes to fighting Wobby just stands there and waits to be attacked by foes who dont know his special ability of sending back moves with double the power using counter and mirror coat. Wobby still takes damage from sending back moves and dosent know how to use destiny bond*it would make the story to dull if a major enemy appears*. Finnaly he tries to deflect super effective attacks that are aimed for his friends doing his best but dosent always make it him being rather slow at running .

History: Wobby was born in a forest and got raised by his parents who told him never to give up hope from which he developed his care free way. After his parents died he decided to embark on a search for a way to make the world become a normal place again to fullfil his parents wish. He searched far and wide for a source of reviving the planet but didnt have any luck. Still not giving up hope he decided to settle down in a small village hoping to maybe some day hear a rumour or a legend on how to revive the planet from the pokemon living there or maybe travelers passing through.

other: He knows Counter, Mirror coat, Safeguard and i want to leave out Destiny bond because it would make the story to dull if we fought a major enemy.

If i need something more or something is not alright i wont mind changing anything, or if my grammer is still to bad ill pull out because i dont want to ruin the story.
 
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