Pokemon peridot forest

[Norri]

Hack of Fire Red

*Warning this is my first hack idea..it probably sucks*

STORY:

You are a boy/girl who lives in a new reigon and your parents decide your ready for your first pokemon...They give you..a DRATINI. You go and explore the world and get 8 badges..and then you go into the Peridot Forest Were you will catch celebi...you are fighting bad guys (no "Bad guys" is not there real name im still thinking" who have captured the 3 Legendary Dogs and are abusing there powers. You must catch Celebi and save them.


Features:
New Gym Leaders
New Cities

*still thinking of more ideas*


Need

Scripters
Spriters
Mappers
Pretty much everything...

 

[Luck]

This seems more like it will fit in the quick storyline idea.
but for some constructive criticism...
the story is really plain.
get starter from person, get 8 badges as mission...it all sounds the same as a normal pokemon idea other than the fact that it is one pokemon and your parents give you it.
you should make your idea more original, although your parents giving you a pokemon is the first i've heard of it.

 

[Norri]

Hmmmm...alrighty ill try changing it around a bit.