Pokemon Peridot Version

[GuyNamedSean]

Pokemon
Peridot
Version

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Hack of FireRed

Story​

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You, as always, are a kid in a small town. Your 13 years old, and are ready to get an official starter Pokemon, and embark on your journey though the Taica Region. You already have a Teddiursa, given to you by your father on your 10th birthday, but you need an official starter to challenge the Taica League, and compete in the Grand Challenge, a race through Mt. Vert for people who have defeated the Zen 8. Unbeknownst to you, the journey won't be that easy... An evil team of corporate giants is trying to take over the region for its vast resources!

Starters​

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Vulpix, Snorunt, Cubone. Changes have been made so that they become good starters.

Region Map​

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Screenshots

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Staff​

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GuyNamedSean: Mapper / Planner

Jobs Needed​

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Scripter

Spriter

Tile Inserter (Who can make snow stuff)​

World Map Editor​

Changes​

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A new, farther North, region! New evolution methods for some Pokemon! Pokemon League replaced by a race?!

 

[Kaylee Krysteenah Fynch]

Some constructive criticism:

The first thing I wondered was "what's going to be unique about this game?" But I didn't really see too much in the way of uniqueness. Remember that making your game different from the pack is what's going to attract people to play it.

The second thing is more something I noticed. Your dad gave you a Swinub. If you aren't changing it's types, that's a ground/ice Pokemon. So I'm a little curious why the official starters contain another ice Pokemon.

Again though, I'm just trying to help.

 

[Pellio]

I agree with Kaylee, you need a special twist to set your game aside from the rest! We've got the official games to give us the same old story line ;) Try maybe getting rid of the Pokemon League and thinking up something to replace it.

 

[GuyNamedSean]

Yeah, I was going to have something more important than the gyms, but I haven't really planned that out... And, no, I didn't notice the Swinub...
The region, BTW, is based off of Canada and Russia, being really far north, and having a Taiga and Tundra.

Thanks for the advice!!!

 

[Kaylee Krysteenah Fynch]

Glad to help. Just don't get too discouraged if you don't get a lot of views yet. And as soon as you have a good idea, put it on here so people can see it. Good luck with this.

 

[Aljam]

i like your story sean and you need 15 posts to put up images... anyways good luck and i hope you stick with it;)