Runasutaru said:Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^
See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^
And well...
I still say D.S...
You?ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore...
But the main prob...
DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I?ll point out over MSN! ^_~
So,hope more people review! ^_^
Originally Posted by Runasutaru
Hey Mystic Trunks! ^_^
See that blue thing?It is I,Runasutaru! ^_^
And well...
I still say D.S...
You?ve got some spelling errors,not that much anymore...
But the main prob...
DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
Is the punctuation! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Well,in this Issue#4,there is only a "." missing,the rest is good,any other mistakes I?ll point out over MSN! ^_~
So,hope more people review! ^_^
Who the hell is this NoOb. she smiled at me? :P
Runasutaru said:?__? Har,har,har... ?__?
XD
Oh well,it didn?t work with me,but it seems you tricked D.S. into thinking you were REALLY insulting me...The smiley was enough for me to understand that...XD
Neways,review...
The thing I?m going to say constantly until the end is...
SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION! -.-;;;
Not really spelling,that is much better,only the occasional error... ^_^;;;
But punctuation...You forget to use "," when someone is talking,because someone can?t talk without having even the smallest of breaks...
And sometimes you forget the "." too,when you finish writing a sentence...
I notice that because of the "sudden" capital letter in the next word...
So remember...
Commas and full stops are your best friends! ^_^
Runasutaru said:Nah,I can?t speak Spanish...I wish...XD
They teach English,French and German here in Portugal,but not SPANISH! XD
But I can try to understand...
I prefer English...By FAR! XD
Off topic,I know...
But he didn?t post a new one yet because I?ve gotta rip some moves... -_-;;;
MysticTrunks said:I know portugese Bon Dia mai^^ bona push caraliu^^