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Pokemon Princesses

Bubsy you really should read the rules... But on the other hand you are new so meh. Please for gods sake make some sort of episode that explains what in the name of Raddish is happening!
 
Sheepnut said:
Bubsy you really should read the rules... But on the other hand you are new so meh. Please for gods sake make some sort of episode that explains what in the name of Raddish is happening!
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XD ya what he said, you should work on that....because its making everybody confused :\
 
Remember, regardless of the fact that you are new. You must always take note of the rules of the forum, in this case, one of them is to not double post.

Also, keep each post you make in this thread related to the comic, not anything else, if you wish to socialize, please do so through Private Messaging.

I trust that the same problem won't occur in this thread again.
 
im really sorry for doulble posting i was only just informed about
wat it is so yer im very sorry also a ne ep is going to be out today
YOUR FRIEND: Bubsy
 
Ok, first off, make the panels better, and use correct grammar, so it's "you" not "u", and "are" isn't "r". Second, every panel the text overlaps the boxes at least 5 times. I thought it was gonna be an adventure finding the Princesses, it definately wasn't. And the jokes you see from the poke'mon talking is like the "jokes" my two year old friend tells me.
 
wateva just stop teasing me or ill report you
CrystallineSalamance
 
Crystalline Salamence said:
Ok, first off, make the panels better, and use correct grammar, so it's "you" not "u", and "are" isn't "r". Second, every panel the text overlaps the boxes at least 5 times. I thought it was gonna be an adventure finding the Princesses, it definately wasn't. And the jokes you see from the poke'mon talking is like the "jokes" my two year old friend tells me.
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sorry but i read the first panel of your comic and it makes me want
2 vomit so i guess you shuld make it alot more better!
 
Bubsy said:
wateva just stop teasing me or ill report you
CrystallineSalamance
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DON'T SAY THAT he's not teasing you!!!!!he's giving you critisism to help you improve your comic really you shouldn't use stuff like that anyway.
 
do u want me 2 use u in my comic if ur asking its a yes
 
ok thats fine i dont mind that at all ty for telling me.
 
Bubsy, stop double-posting. Use the Edit button. I suggest you read the rules =/
 
Bubsy you are acting very immature. This comic has terribly bad recoloured sprites and off grammer You use chat speak(OMG! etc) and thats a no-no. The best way to start would be with the sprites, try shading the colours a bit better. The grammer is pretty easily fixed and getting rid of chat speak is very very easy.
 
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Wait, they became boyfriend and girlfriend in one PANEL!!! That's a no-no, if your gonna have a plot, keep it non-random. You don't ask someout to be their girlfriend after 10 minutes, that just wrong X.x.
 
Matt Silver, constructive criticism, please. Tell the person how they could improve, rather than just pointing out all of the negative things. ^_^;
 
Look if you dont lyk my comic then dont look at it because
if you cant say nothing nice dun say nething at all!
 
So you expect the thread to be full of comments that consist of only "nice" things? Don't forget that criticism helps you improve on your work, it is not there to spite at you in anyway.
 
OK, I'm gonna try and help you now, try having a more easy to understand plot, maybe you should make a special comic about what happened? For romance, instead of just a panel, dedicate a whole comic to it, it makes it seem more advanced (see Pokemon Instincts as an example), and maybe use real speech bubbles, I have some somewhere I can PM you.
 
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