Pokemon:Rise of Manaphy

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"Maaana!!!!" Manaphy yelled as a huge wave of water threw itself at Galactus.
"Manaphy!!! YES! You have awakened! Dialga,Palkia,My beautiful Pokemon! Come out!" Galactus roared with happiness ((his pokemon are:Dialga,Palkia,Salamance,Entei,Aerodactyl,Dragonite))
"Dialga and Palkia! Oh No! We're all screwed!" Alex said. Suddenly,a pokeball with the name Alex on it fell from the sky.
There was writing on it...
"You were meant to have this pokemon,Alex." it said
"Go,pokeball!" Alex said,wondering what was inside. Moments later,a huge,gigantic Charizard 10x bigger than any other one appeared and went on a rampage knocking Plakia&Dialga to the ground with a hyper beam,then it burst open a hole through the top of the temple and flew out through it.
Everybody was shocked...nobody knew what to do next..
 
((Galactus always speaks in caps >_> lol.))

"Whoa.." Alex said. "Was that a Charizard?"

"It couldn't be," Kate said. "We're underwater. That makes no sense..."

"WELL, I STILL HAVE MY AWESOME POKEMON OF POWER!!" shouted Galactus. "GO, SALAMENCE, AERODACTYL, ENTEI, AND DRAGONITE! HUH? WHAT?!"

"I told you we were underwater.." Kate said. Galactus's Pokemon started to drown. Galactus raised the Poke Balls and clicked on them. "Poke balls don't work once you open them underwater. You have to get out of water and completely dry them first. Now what are you gonna do?"

Galactus looked at the kids that somehow defeated him. "FINE. YOU WON THIS ROUND.. BUT IT'S NOT OVER. I WILL STILL RETURN FOR MANAPHY.. AND YOUR LIVES AS WELL!" He immediately started laughing evilly. Then the light from the sun seemed to disappear. It was as dark as the sea floor.. which they were close to anyway. Then the sun came back out. Galactus and his Pokemon had disappeared.

"How the heck did he do THAT?!" shouted Kate. "Makes no sense.."

"It doesn't matter," Alex said. "We have to follow them to their new base. Let's go, guys." But a small hand stopped Alex when it touched his arm.

"Thank you," said Manaphy, in its tiny voice. "Will you be back?"

Alex smiled. "You can count on seeing us again. We'll protect you from Galactus. Manaphy nodded. It seemed to be a very smart Pokemon. Alex let his Lapras out, remembering what Kate said about not being able to let his Pokemon back in, and they swam back to land..
 
Alex looked at the sky.
"Alex,are you okay?" asked Kate
"Yea,you look a little worried!" said Jerry.
"...I...I SHOULD HAVE TAKEN HIM DOWN WHEN I HAD THE CHANCE!!!!WHY DOES HE HAVE TO ESCAPE!!?!?? IT'S ALL BECAUSE OF YOU FIVE AND YOUR WEAK POKEMON!! I'M GOING TO TAKE HIM DOWN MYSELF!" Alex said
"Alex!? Are you sure your not overreacting!?" Kate said
"KATE,SHUT UP! I'M LEAVING AS OF NOW!! iF YOU TRY TO STOP ME,YOU CAN ANSWER TO CHARIZARD!" he said as the giant Charizard flew back to him and carried him so the sky..
"He's a fool if he thinks he can defeat all his men and Galactus.." said Kate
"No,he can do it. He might just be one of the toughest trainers i've ever seen.." said Jerry...
They all watched as Alex dissapeared into the fluddy clouds..
 
" I swear im getting tired of being called weak it makes me wanna puke I remeber 6 months ago he was just starting he still has that fire when he wanted to help stop Heatren he was one of the first to say he would help I do beilve he could do it but im worried what if he cant do it you know how Galatics like to play dirty" Kam said. "Yeah he is tough but I still think we should help him and since he thinks where weak I think I know a place where we can train it will take a day but our pokemon level will in crease 10 fold and if we start tonight tomorrow in the afternoon we should be ready " Kate said. "Where is that" Jerry said. "Where im from its called the trainer top ten challenge its where most beginer trainers go I heard the trainer Richie had been in there when he started also she contiuned. "Well lets go guys we need to get stronger to help out Alex other Alex if your comeing where following Kate.

~Later~

Eletabuzz use thunder Punch Carrie said. Cool trainer "Noooooooooooooo" I lost to someone who doesnt even have any badges I suck. As he walked out of the room Carrie I think your ready Jerry said. "My turn" said Jerry.
~Later~
Pidgeot use Areo blast woah your Pidgeot knows that Jerry he must be stronger then ever.

~The next Day~

"Ok where should we start looking" said Kate. "I know excatly where to start looking before he left off on that charzard i placed a tracker device on him so we can follow him on that. As I took out my Poke Nav I checked it to see where Alex was but it wasnt responding. "Ok etiher he found it and broke it our its WAY way out of range wait did he tell any of you where his grandmother lives maybe we can ask her" Kam said looking up at everybody.

Jerry and Carrie Stronger version
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Alex finally caught up with Galacticus
"Leave here,boy! Or your about to experience a whole new level of pain!!!" Galactcus screamed
"Shut up,I know your afraid of me. With this Charizard,I am now the most powerful trainer on earth. You saw it destroy you Palkia and Dialga,two legendary pokemon with one attack. Now bring it,give me all you've got. This is the final battle,once i destroy your pokemon,you hand Palkia and Dialga over to me! Go,Charizard!" Alex yelled to Galactus who was now whimpering at the sight of Charizard.
"Alright,boy!" Galactus laughed "Go,Dragonite,Salamance,Aerodactyl and Entei! Show him the true power of team Galaxy!" Galactus said
"Aerodactyl,aeroblast,Dragonite,thunderbolt,Salamance,hydro pump,Entei,earthquake!" Galactus said to to all his pokemon,and they all attacked the huge Charizard at once,and even though all the attacks were strong and some super effective,Charizard remained undamaged.
"WHAT!!!! NO!! IT CAN'T BE! THAT CHARIZARD IS STILL STANDING!! I MUST HAVE IT!!!" Galactus roared as he saw the amazing Charizard.
Alex soon ended the battle with explosion,which of course hardly affected Charizard,but made all the other pokemon faint,although Galactus was laughing! Suddenly,he saw a hige metal container grab Charizard,and it tried to burn through the metal,but was unsucessful. Galactus was laughing harder this time...and then--all of a sudden,he felt something cut through his stomach...He was....he was..dead...or at least he thought he was dead,then he fell unconsious to the ground....Galactus was laughing as hard as possible....
 
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"Beep beep beep" The scaner went off. "Guys I think I found Alex but we have to hurry and with our newly strong pokemon we should be able to help him" I said. "But we havent finish our training Jerry said if we dont go know we may not find him agian or worse he might be dead" I said.
~Later~

"Theres Alex" yelled Kate. "And theres Galatics looks like we just made it and look his Charzard is captured" said Jerry.

"Alright Carrie get Charzard out with Thunder Punch from Eletrabuzz" I said. And Kate go over and see if Alex is ok" I said. TThen all a sudden Galatics had something stabbed in his stomach everybody look in aw at what happen then everyone looked at the person stabbing Galatics and it turned out to be.
 
Alex. Alex had stabbed Galactus with the sharp dagger that had pirced him. Tears streamed down Alex's face,he has been stabbed through the stomach.
"G-Galactus,you-y-you shall ne-never hur-hurt a p-pokemo..." Alex said as he and Galactus fell to the floor yet again.
"B-Boy,I knew you could do-do it. Y-You are my so-son after-after all." Galactus said through sobs but Alex was already unconscious.
"You-des-deserve-to-to li-live!" Galactus said as he took out his walkie talkie
"Call-Call off all the attacks-and-and r-rush Alex to the hos-hospital" he talked slowly
"But sir-!"
"Listen to-to me..." Galactus said but he had died,he was stabbed too harshly,but Alex had a chance.
Kam came down and lifted Alex's head.
"There's a pulse! Quickly lets get him to the hostpital!!" Kam yelled to the others. Charizard managed to break through the metal container and roared. It flew all of them within a few seconds to the hospital.
"Nurse-we-we need him rushed to an emergency room!" the other Alex said
"But-" said the nurse but she had no time.
"We need him alive" said Kam.
-----Later----
Alex walked out out of the room after three days and greeted everyone.
"Hey,Alex,I've been waiting for a battle!" said Kam
"Sure!" said Alex although he was still in his hostpital clothes.
"NO!You need to keep out of battling for a few-" but the nurse was cut off once again.
"Okay,Donphan! GO!" Alex said
------Later----
"Wow,Kam,you have gotten a lot stronger! You actually beat me this time!"

The years passed and the other Alex married Kate,Alex becoming the league champion and Kam a famous pokemon researcher,Jerry and Carrie being his students..

If anybody has anything to add,add it within the next two days or consider it closed.
 
Um.. and who the heck are YOU..?
 
Well...

Well, rei173 said I can join around the middle of when you guys were retrieving Manaphy, so I'll just post information of my character and start writing the other stuff later.

Name: Light
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Usually wears a black cloak that hides even his face, without the cloak, shows a 6"3 kid weighing 129 lb (whether this is underweight or overweight does not matter, if he's underweight, he still is in tip-top shape). He has black hair covering 1 eye (as many Pokemon Trainers do nowadays, like Falkner for instance), black eyes with no sign of a pupil in them, wears a black sleeveless shirt w/a black jacket, also has black pants w/ an iPod Shuffle (the latest one) stuck in his ear almost all of the time. Has an average body build, not muscular but not skinny, but his feet are stronger (and faster) than his arms.

Personality: Usually quiet, but when he's with his most trusted comrad, is VERY talkative. Very loyal to comrads yet treats enemies w/equal respect, except if they torture Pokemon. When battling a Gym Leader, he wants to keep the battle short, and when battling a trainer from the streets, likes to drag it out to the point when he sees the Pokemon and its Trainer's strategy. Very intelligent, as his childhood was forced studying. Also respects Lance of the Kanto Elite Four and Johto Champ, and Cynthia of the Sinnoh Champ. Also shy when girls hit on him (experienced it twice), but reacts VERY violently when a gay person is around. He treats all Pokemon with passion, even an evil one, trying to dispell the evil instead of destroying it.

History: He was born in the Hoenn region, but moved to Kanto's Viridian City at the age of 3. His childhood was an experience of a nightmare, in which he needed to study for a long time. By the age of 8, he surpassed a lot of 8th graders in academics, but disliked it. He wanted fun and Pokemon and especially to train one. His parents hated Pokemon, however, and wanted him to focus on academics and slight athletics, as they recieved 3 PhD's each.
But while walking home one day he found an egg. He showed it to Proffessor Oak and in his (somehow possible) free time, instead of heading to the Celadon Library (just imagine they have one) via Diglett Cave (new secret passage that had no Digletts), he went to Pallet Town and took care of the egg, which hatched into a Pichu. Over the next 4 years, he took care of it like a brother should, in time which it evolved into a healthy and hyperactive Pikachu. Some time he spent w/Pikachu was sacrificed for the library, in which instead of hitting the books, he read several myths about Pokemon (particually about the legendary Egg and the Diamond and Pearl Pokemon), and "How to raise Pokemon-basic steps", along with "Guides to Stealth" (books that I made up).
Once he was 12, he felt that he was responsible and ready enough to defy his parents and he put the latter book to test as he snuck out at 12PM, with a note explaining what he has done, and claimed his Pikachu officially, with the usual Pokemon Basic Equippment, and took a boat to the Johto Region. During his 2 years, he had recieved over 15 Gym Badges and had traveled through Johto and Hoenn, met Lance and battled w/him (but obviously lost) and recently arrived in Sinnoh, already gaining 3 badges. Also caught over 200 different species of Pokemon, but is always in a different lab. He recently battled several Team Universe members (not knowing their names) and returned to Jublife City collecting info pronto after hearing the Legendary Sea Egg.

Pokemons

Species: Raichu
Nickname: Raikira
Gender: Male
Personality: Extremly loyal to Light, is almost never quiet and seems like the opposite of Light. He can understand human speech as if he was one, and the reverse is true to some degree. He hates Pokeballs, always walking on its own feet, some Pokemon food and for some reasons, prefers curry.
Obtained: He hatched from an egg he found that was abandoned, and was officially claimed w/its detested Pokeball when Light was 12.
Other: Once it hatched, showed the natural ability of Volt Tackle to some degree, and was never claimed by a trainer or declared lost. Evolved into a Pikachu when Light's journey began, and evolved again after they lost to Lance, knowing that the evolution will get both of them to be stronger.

Species: Dragonair
Nickname: Ryusaiga
Gender: Male
Personality: He is a peacemaker, detesting violence and loving the quiet, but is a ferocious battler. He loves to be out of its Pokeball, but does not mind either way. However he loves to challenge himself, whether it is a race or a battle.
Obtained: He was found newborn at the Goldenrod City, being put for sale unwillingly until Light won it. Since then he put his loyalty before everything else.
Other: He evolved during a battle against Jasmine, the Olivine Gym Leader. He is yet to evolve again, but he feels he is very close.

Species: Lucario
Nickname: Enigmaru
Gender: Male
Personality: Happy most of the time, but gets angry very quickly. Very prideful yet extremely loyal to the degree that he'll abandon his pride if necessary.
Obtained: He found a Riolu when he arrived in the Sinnoh region almost immediately, being attacked by rouge Murkrows and Dustoxes at the Eterna Forest. Apparently the egg belonged to Cynthia, but during their short encounter at Hearthrome City, she let him keep it.
Other: He can speak and understand both human and Pokemon speech, and when Light cannot understand his Pokemons, is his unofficial translator. He evolved during a battle against several Team Universe members who was patrolling Solaceon Ruins.
 
"So this is where Dialga and Palkia landed up into."

I was looking at the Poke Balls of Dialga and Palkia that Galactus captured. Then I released them back to their own dimension and time.

"He won't be needing these 2 Pokemon anymore." I muttered.

'Why'd you do that for? Why didn't you just keep them?' My Lucario, Enigmaru, asked me.

"Relax. I'll catch them fair and square. Besides, they're not for just anyone, you know."

"Chu, raichu rai rai raichu (Heh, I knew he'll do that)." My Raichu muttered.

I buried him at the edge of the Sea Temple, only engraving his name onto his tombstone (which I made by taking a part of the stairs in the temple and getting my Pokemon's help in carving the name).

"Come on, Ryusaiga (my Dragonair). Let's go. We shouldn't bother these Pokemon any more."
 
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"Come on, Ryusaiga. Let's get off here."

I found Giovanni and his troops. He was gathering his Team Universe members in the old Team Galactic headquarters in Veilstone City, where I was ambushed after I won my 3rd badge.

"Let's go."

I entered the Galactic building, with my Pokemon behind my back. As soon as I did, I was surrounded.

"Hey, kid. This is a restricted area. Leave now or we'll teach you a lesson." a Universe Grunt warned me.

"I don't intend to leave unless you're disbanded." I told them.

"Hey, this kid was the one who took us all down with his Lucario!" another Grunt recognized me.

"So you remember. I feel honored." I sarcastically commented.

"Watch your tongue kid. We might cut it off after we defeat you. We have stronger Pokemons now." another Grunt told me, and others agreed.

"Wait."

Giovanni finally came out.

"That kid is no pushover. He won the Silver Conference League and the Ever Grande Pokemon League. He is out of your league."

"But boss..." some Grunts whined.

"Don't worry about it. I'll get rid of him myself!"

"Yeah!" all the Grunts seemed happy to see his boss battle.

"Is this a criminal organization, or a cheerleading squad?" I asked jokingly.

"Quiet, boy! You may be strong, but I'm out of your league!" Giovanni yelled at me.

"Let's see about that. Let's go, Raikira, Ryusaiga, Enigmaru!" My Pokemons got into a battle formation

"Those Pokemons are weaklings compared to my Pokemons. But I'll only show you a portion of my strengths! Go, Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres!" Giovanni released 3 Master Balls, revealing the 3 legendary birds.

"They look impressive. Let's see which one of us is better, you, or me." I told him.

"After you're rid of, I'll re-establish Team Universe, with me in charge! I'll carry on Galactius's work!" Giovanni declared.
 
Okay,yeah I'm kicking you out because I WAS STILL ALIVE,AN YET YOU BURIED ME AND THREW AWAY MY POKEMON although i like ur style of writing. GO JOIN ANOTHER RPG ~Kicked~
 
I re-edited it so he didn't die and I only released Dialga and Palkia. He seemed dead because the Naruto Ninja guy killed him off. Wait, YOU'RE Galactic?
 
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rei told me that he doesn't care what I do on here, so I decided to finish the battle.
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"Articuno, use Mist now!"

Giovanni's Articuno created a powerful mist that disabled our sight for a few seconds. Once it cleared up, Giovanni and his grunts were gone, except one who was heading up to the roof.

"C'mon, guys. Let's follow 'em." I told my 3 Pokemon and we rushed up to the roof.

When I arrived, there was a thick mist that I just couldn't see through.

"What's up with the mist, Giovanni? Too scared to fight face-to-face?" I called out. Then a Flamethrower was shot out of nowhere that was aimed for my Enigmaru, that he dodged with ease.

'He's using this mist to cover up his attack. This isn't good.' Enigmaru told me.

"All right then. Enigmaru, try to use your aura to sense them out." I told him.

'Articuno is at the far back, creating a huge mist while applying Mind Reader to allow us to be targeted by Zapdos and Moltres. Those two are right next to us.' Enigmaru informed me.

"All right. Raikira, face off against Zapdos. Ryusaiga, go up against Moltres. Enigmaru, get Articuno." I commanded. Then I told them what to do and when to use an attack and they took off.

Almost in a second, Zapdos used Thunder on Raikira, who took the hit and absorbed the electricity, being an Electric type itself, then he used Giga Impact, while releasing all the eletricity that he absorbed from Zapdos, and attacked him head-on, causing it to be paralysed from the impact.

Meanwhile, Moltres used Flamethrower on my Ryusaiga, who dodged the attack and then used a combination of Hyper Beam, Dragon Pulse, and Water Pulse, which took down Moltres to half strength.

Articuno tried to confuse Enigmaru's vision by strengthening the Mist and adding Blizzard in it. Enigmaru was taken off guard for a second and Articuno used an Aerial Ace, which was right on target. However it didn't work because Enigmaru used Detect to be alert and countered with 3 blasts of Aura Spheres, then finished it with a Hyper Beam.

The mist cleared up and showed that Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres were weakened severly and was on the brink of defeat, with Giovanni examining them. The grunts were surprised at the result.

"Return them to their Poke Balls, Giovanni. I'll show mercy to your Pokemon so take the advantage and give up, or I'll finish them." I told him.

"Give up? I will not give up. I'll just use my ace Pokemon. You WILL tremble at the power that this Pokemon possesses. Let's see if you can defeat this!" He returned his three Pokemons and instead released a single Pokemon.

"Go Mewtwo! Destroy this pesky boy and his weakling Pokemon!"
 
Name:Jake
Age:13
Gender:Male
Appearance:Green Cap with pokeball symbol on it,green poketch with star symbol on it,blue jeans with tear on right pant leg,blue jaket with a black shirt under it.
Personality:cocky but nice,easily angered,hates to atmit defeat.
History:Born in ecruteak johto moved to Sandgem Sinnoh when he was 5 to get away from the Team Rocket scare.His dad is a bug type master but left to the sinnoh leage to train under thhe elite 4.His moth is constently at home taking care of his little brother and pokemon eggs.

Pokemon
Species:Infernape
Nickname:Inferno
Gender:Male
Personality:Sneaky and loves to battle
Obtained:Saved as a chimchar from a rampaging steelix
Other:can sniff out trainer by their urge to battle =)

Pokemon
Species:Mightyana
Nickname:
Gender:Male
Personality:Arogent rought twords others
Obtained:found while serching for an rare candy
Other:Shiny shine

Pokemon
Species:Suddowuddo
Nickname:woody
Gender:Male
Personality:Love always ready for a fight
Obtained:Evolved from a baby bonsly
Other:

Pokemon
Species:Rilou
Nickname:Riley
Gender:Male
Personality:fun loving but when in battle ready to protect his friends
Obtained:Hatched
Other:
 
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