Pokemon Savior ~ Reprise

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"Neoceon Island was so peaceful... but this is insane... Meteors unnatural rain..." Renee said still look out the window.

"But...What it if this is the work of a Pokemon not just some unnatural phenomenon.... Because I heard somewhere that there are pokemon that can control rain and other things.." Renee said looking at the others wondering if indeed this was the work of a pokemon.

Renee looked through her bag and took out a few pencils and pens, she grabeed her sketch book and began drawing what was outside.

"Rain is supposed to water the earth..rain helps the earth bit this rain is just has an ominious feeling as if..its never going to end...." Renee thought to herself.

She returned to her sketch book and started drawing the rain and the grasses and flowers.
 
"The storm has to stop for awhile at some point, it did before, right?" He is almost done with his sketch and hopes the full completed sketch comprehends the area from his dream.

"I guess that also explains why the jet came by really fast..." He attempted to make it sound like a joke to lighten up the mood of the others.

Psy, now feeling better at the point that he doesn't even feel sick, but decides to take a break and wait inside shelter for a little longer to fully regain all his energy.

"Oh yeah, Randy wanted to see my drawing. Well I'm almost finished with it so let me get this last part done."
 
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Renee continued drawing and gathrong her thoughts together. She looked up to see Psy finishing the last of his drawing.

"So what were you drawing Psy?" Renee said sitting down next to him.

ooc: my bad I was in a hurry school shopping and stuff @_@

ic: Renee looked at the window once more hoping that the rain would stop eventually. To be honest the rain always put Renee in gloomy spirits.Renee sighed as she continually looked at the rain.

"This rain is making me feel gloomy..It feels like its never going to stop." Renee said.

ooc: Once again my bad v_v;

ic: Renee snapped out of her depression though she didn't want to make everyone else feel depressed because of her."Well Psy are you almost finished? I wanna see what you drew!" Renee said covering up her gloominess with a fake happy tone.
 
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Not to dampen your good time, but paragraphs. Four lines.

Three strikes you're out.

Edit: My bad, I mixed this thread up with another one. But still, it's NOT hard to post something of substance. So do it.

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мizuκi said:
Not to dampen your good time, but paragraphs. Four lines.

Three strikes you're out.

Edit: My bad, I mixed this thread up with another one. But still, it's NOT hard to post something of substance. So do it.

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Mizuki this time is was my fault.Please forgive me,I have been very busy and I should have done more of a paragraph do not blame NessStar3000 or the others,because I didn't think it would be an actuall paragraph just every post must be 4 lines not a real paragraph, I thought it would be okay to space them out because I right alot of fanfictions and I space paragraphs out like what I have been doing.Also I have been very busy school is starting Monday for me and I had to go school shopping today and
I ment to edit the post later,but I should have put more into the post like an actuall paragraph. For this I am sorry.
 
It wasn't just you GhostPrincess, and you don't need to apologize.

If you don't do it again, that's apology enough.

And I'm sorry, but the school and busy thing doesn't really connect for me, because I'm now a week into school myself. I'm busy, but I manage. If you're just too busy to post, don't throw a random one together, just wait until you're not quite so busy and then post.
 
мizuκi said:
It wasn't just you GhostPrincess, and you don't need to apologize.

If you don't do it again, that's apology enough.

And I'm sorry, but the school and busy thing doesn't really connect for me, because I'm now a week into school myself. I'm busy, but I manage. If you're just too busy to post, don't throw a random one together, just wait until you're not quite so busy and then post.
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Your rioght I should do that, but if I do that I might forget cause this year there going to load me down with so much homework T.T. (CURSE YOU HOMEWORK) And I am addicted to alot of online game like flyff,and I only check this a couple times of day. So your right next time I will wait till I'm not so busy its probably better that way ^_^ (Still curse you school Imma miss summer break ;-; )
 
Samson looked outside.
"Come on guys. Let's go asap. That meteorite wont stay there forever, before someone snatches it up."
Samson got up and stretched. He had just woken up from a little nap and was feeling refreshed and ready to go exploring.

"I feel like....we have to figure out why these disasters are happening. I don't know, I just feel really strongly about this guys." Samson said looking at everyone.
 
"Well thats probably a good idea to check it out but.." Renee said still worried about Psy. Renee looked at her sketch book and began drawing another drawing.Finaaly she said "Well that dpends if Psy's okay.." Renee went back to her drawing and began sketching again. "Well... I guess I will go!" Renee said getting up and puttiong her sketch book down. "I wanna see this meteor.. If it has anything to do with this weird weather.." Renee said as she grabbed her pokeballs.
 
"I'm eagered to check outside myself, but I'm just worried about you guys getting sick from the rain. Well, if you guys want to..." He puts his now completed drawing in his bed, and stands up, filled with a great amount of energy once again.

"...then I suggest also that we should take a look at this fragment from space!" He takes a look at his two pokemon, sleeping.

"All right then, ready to go guys?" Psy asks the others of the group.
 
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Samson got up and smiled.
"Atta boy, Psy! I knew you'd finally wanna go. And Reene, you're alot more assertive than before. Alright let's go guys!" Samson said heading for the door.
Samson was happy that everybody wanted to go see the meteorite, and proud of them for coming out of there shells. He felt he had real friends in these people, and together they may be able to get to the root of these disasters...but at the same time Samson felt worried for his friends.
"Be safe when we get out there guys...you never know." He said opening the front door.
 
"I have always wanted to see a meteor before!" Renee said smiling. "But shoul;dn't we take and umbrella or something...?" She asked as her mind drifted to the rain outside and how it had made everyone so weak. Renee grabbed her bag and placed the pokeballs in it. "Well if everyones ready... Then I guess..Lets go." Renee said with a smile on her face.
 
"All right, let's get going then." He walks outside and the storm is still on a rage.

"Okay, the meteor should be located not too far away, over here guys." He walks into a muddy dirt path, leading their way to the meteor.

"I just hope we don't get a meteor shower with them being huge as the meteor we saw earlier. If so happens, then I guess there is such thing as the apocalypse." He continues to walk along the path.
 
Samson runs ahead of the others.
"Ha come on guys see if you can keep up!" He said with a laugh.

Samson continued running until he got closer to the meteor. "There it is!" He said getting closer, and as he ran closer and closer....he tripped.
"Ow! What the...." He said looking around. "I didn't trip on anything...nothings there..." Ryan looked around puzzled until he saw a wavy line. The line then morphed into a creature. "Kecleon!" It said.
"What the....is that a pokemon?" Samson asked pulling out his pokedex. "A Kecleon? Er....this weather is to hard to try and battle a pokemon to catch....ok go away you little Kecleon." Samson said walking away, but every step he took the Kecleon followed.
"Why are you following me?" Samson asked.
"Kecleon!" The Kecleon said jumping closer to Samson, before it started smelling him and sat down by his foot.
"Do...do you want to come with me?" Samson asked confusedly.
"Kecleon!" It said jumping on his shoulder.
"Oh geez...ok you can come with me." Samson said happy that he kind of caught another pokemon.
 
"Wait for us! We don't want to run too fast or we'll trip." Psy took a look at Samson, noticing a kecleon on his shoulder.

"A new friend already? You sure have a way with pokemon." Psy gave a proudful smile. He then notices the meteor behind Samson.

"The meteor... let's check it out guys." He slowly moves closer to the meteor, taking a glance at it's shining red glow.

"Whatever you do, don't touch it. I heard meteors can hold bacteria. You wouldn't want to end up getting really sick... or even dying from it."
 
Renee smiled at Samson abd his new pokemon, but before she could congratulate him on his new friend she saw a pair of eyes in the bushes. "What is that...?" Renee said looking in the bushes. It was an absol silently saying "Absol...." Renee looked at it its eyes seem to bore inot her soul the look on its face seem to be saying "impending doom."

"What is this...?" Renee said still looking at the absol. "Absol..." it replied quickly.

"A-absol...?" Renee muttered noticing that the others hadn't seen the pokemon. renee quickly took out her pokedex and got the data for absol. She noticed one thing that had interested her.

"A pokemon..that only appears when disastered is about to strike....?" Renee mumbled to herself.

"Imma catch you!" Renee said as the absol jumped out of the bush. "You will be great for a contest if we ever make it out of her."

She threw her pokeball saying "GO WURMPLE!"

"Wurmple..?" Wurmple said looknig around


"Wurmple were going to catch that absol!" Renee said as she looked at the absol wearily.
 
Randy was having one of those moments again, where he'd forget about everything going on aroud him and be lost in deep thought. He regained knowledge of his suroundings when Renee let out her Wurmple. "Okay, what just happened?" He asked. Then he saw what Wurmple was battling. "Wait a tick..." Randy said to himself out loud as he examined the Absol. "That thing... It reminds me of..." Randy was puzzle as to just where he saw the Absol before. Then it hit him. "That's it!" Exclaimed Randy as he looked at his broken arm. "That's the same species of pokemon that startled me and caused my arm to break!" Randy looked ominously at the Absol. "This would be a good time to fill it's Pokedex page!" He said as he whipped out his pokedex. Once the data was filled Randy looked at Renee and said "Be careful, Renee. This pokemon looks tough!"
 
"What the heck is going on back there?" He moves his attention towards the unexpected battle, seeing Renee attempting to catch a wild Absol. She appears to be using her Wurmple against the Absol.

"I better scan the species since everyone else is."

He closely spectates the wild battle, hoping Renee is able to make a catch also.

"You can do it Renee, don't let the weather bother you and your pokemon!"
 
Samson's jaw dropped.
"Reene you're gonna try to catch that thing? With your WURMPLE? I wouldn't use any of my own pokemon against that thing!" Samson said. He had already put Kecleon in a pokeball and was now worried about Reene's Wurmple fighting this "Absol" pokemon. It looked tough, and alot stronger than the Pokemon everybody else had.
"Er....I'm gonna go check out the meteorite with Psy. Good luck Reene!" Samson said backing off and approaching Psy.
"Look at it man.... what do you think is happening?" He asked Psy, crossing his arms.
 
"Alright wurmple! Lets go! Use poison sting!" Renee cried as wurmple began using poison sting. Absol snickered and dodged easily. "Oh no wurmple look out!: Renee cried as wurmple began charging at wurmple as it charged for a razor wind "Wurmple get out of there your going to get hit!" Renee cried as a panicing wurmple began trying to dodge the razor wind but it was to late wurmple got hit.

"Wurmple!" Renee cried as wurmple flew back and hit a tree and became badly injured.

"Grr...Return wurmple..." Renee said frustrated.

"Alright its your turn... GO ZIGZAGOON!" Renee cried as she threw zigzagoons pokeball revealing a tiny zigzagoon.

"Alright zigzagoon look out this thing is tough..." Renee said as she looked at the absol who was apprently taking zigzagoon as no threat.

"Okay zigzagoon use tackle!" Renee exclaimed at this command zigzagoon began charging at absol.

Absol easily dodged and again charged for a razor wind. "This is it!" Renee thought.

"Alright zigzagoon DODGE!" Renee cried as zigzagoon jumped from the absol dodging its attack.

Absol crashed into the tree that was behind zigzagoon a little dazed and confused but absol got up and began charge at zigzagoon.

"Alright ziugzagoon..SAND ATTACK!" Rennee cried as zigzagoon splashed sand into absols face.

Absol now with sand in its could not see. "ALright zigzagoon use headbutt!" Renee cried.

Zigzagoion charged at absol full force abd hit absol..HARD.

Absol was flung back and landed in the mud obviously weak from the last attack.

"Alright now GO POKEBALL!" Renne exclaimed as she threw the pokeball. The pokeball hit absol and it went into the pokeball. It shook a little but stopped moving.

"WE DID IT! wE DID IT WE DID IT!" Renee said jumping up and down but she slipped in the mud and fell

Renee was now covered in mud but got to her feet and grabbed the pokeball.

"Alright we got an absol!" Renee said happily as she looked at the pokeball. Zigzagoon jumped on her shoulder and happily nuzzled her.

"You were awsome zigzagoon!" renee said with a smile on her face.
 
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