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Episode 48: Team Shocker!
"Bye, Dawn!" Barry smiled as he prepared to leave Solaceon Town a few days later. "See you next Contest!"
Dawn did her best to fight back tears as she trudged down the road. "I...don't think I will attend the next one."
"What???" Barry gasped before his shocked expression turned angry. "Listen, Dawn--ever since I've known you, you've always said your dream was to equal your mom, or even surpass her. And you're going to quit? You're going to send that dream down the drain?"
He grimaced before continuing "Look--I'm not going to let you quit coordinating! Sure, it hurts to rack up a string of losses, but I believe you can surpass your mom, or maybe even be a Grand Coordinator!"
He grinned at Ash. "Keep working on Heat Wave, okay?"
"I will." Ash replied before spotting Dawn running off to the Pokemon Center. "Hey, Dawn!" he called before running after his companion.
"Let her go--all the close calls and chokes must've taken a blow to her morale." Brock assured Ash. "When she's ready to talk, she'll tell you. For now, give her her space."
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Oh, Dawn... Satomi began as she warped by her crying master. I did everything you told me to do...
"It was nothing you did or did not do." Dawn replied between sobs. "I've been overmatched in every contest! I mean, I know Mom didn't get to where she was overnight..."
And I'm sure she faced her share of struggles and troubles to reach where she is today. Satomi explained.
"But how can I bounce back from choking when it matters most?" Dawn asked as she wiped away more tears. "First the Alamos Contest, and now this!"
She looked down at the orange ribbon pinned to her bag. "Mom...I wish I could talk to you now..."
Well, as much as it hurts to lose, we can't progress if we continue the pity party. Satomi explained. Have you noticed how Ash seems to just bounce back from losing a Gym match?
"Yeah..." A smile formed on Dawn's face. "How does he do that?"
A loss may hurt in the heat of the moment. But Ash goes back and evaluates what went wrong, so he can do better the next time. Satomi explained. So let's go back and look at what happened today, see what went wrong, and how we can do better next time.
"But how?" Dawn asked.
I'm going to conjure a time loop of the day before and earlier today. This way, you can see the Contest from a neutral perspective. Satomi began. As you watch, notice how your decisions and others' decisions got us to this point.
With that, she formed a flash of light in the room, which counted down like a movie scene. "Oh, this is from yesterday!" Dawn remembered when the loop began.
On the "screen", Ash was attempting to train Diddy to use Heat Wave, while Barry looked on. "Diddy, use Heat Wave!" the Ash on the "screen" called.
"WHOA!!!" the Barry on the screen yelped as the wave of flames backfired, sending Diddy flying. "You have the formation down--we need to work on concentrating."
The Ash on the "screen" smiled at Diddy. "You're doing great so far--let's keep at this until you get it to form right."
"Wait, what was I doing at that time?" Dawn asked.
The "screen" panned over to another outdoor arena. You were going over Magical Leaf with me. Satomi explained. Her self on the screen unleashed a dazzling flowery rainbow, much to the Dawn on the "screen"s delight.
Some applause started the Dawn on the "screen" as Brock stepped into the scene. "That was cool!" he raved as the Dawn "onscreen" passed out Poffins for her four Pokemon.
"Thanks." Dawn heard her self on the "screen" say. "After I came up short in the Alamos Town Contest, I'm gonna stick to a single Pokemon unless you have to use two."
"That's a good idea." the Brock on the "screen" smiled. "Remember to vary your moves with each appeal so you don't bore the judges and the audience."
Pay attention to what Brock said next, and how you reacted to his statement. Satomi told Dawn.
"Eventually, Satomi will be able to Mega Evolve." the Brock on the screen went on.
Dawn watched as her self on the screen gained starry eyes. "That's right...I imagined you as a Mega Gardevoir creating appeals no one has ever seen before."
If you stop now, you wouldn't be able to see that any more. Satomi replied.
"But what about Marta?" Dawn asked. "I think that was another reason why I lost..."
Let's move on to the Contest itself, to the Appeal Competition. Satomi's time loop fast forwarded a little. You did very well in the previous competitions, so we will focus on what we did in the Appeal.
Dawn watched as her self in a cyan costume told Satomi to use Magical Leaf. Marta and Leona did so well because she used the strategy of chaining moves into combos. She also timed the combo to max out the excitement meter.
"Okay..." Dawn sighed as she watched one of the two times Leona excited the crowd with a Hone Claws and Shadow Claw combo. "So if I do continue, I should look into combos and keeping an eye on the excitement meter.
She sighed. "Thanks, Satomi--I feel a little better, but I still feel conflicted about what to do."
The fiddle case on a bench gave her an idea. Of course! Playing music helped calm me down when I was having a bad day, so let's see if it'll help here!
With that, she started a slow and quiet melody that evoked her conflicted emotions. The song appeared to convey both the sadness of losing; and the yearning and hope for the future. Satomi hovered nearby, watching the red-brown bow glide over the strings.
Dawn did not expect a whistle to trill over her last G note, followed by a few expectant G chords from a guitar. "Got room for a few more?" Brock asked as he and Ash arrived.
"Well, I guess..." A week smile formed on Dawn's face. "I wasn't expecting you guys to join me after what happened earlier."
"Remember the promise we made when we set out?" Ash began as he found a chair to sit in. "We promised we would stick together, no matter what."
"If you ever want to talk, we're here." Brock agreed. "Of course, any accomplishment you make, we'll celebrate with you too."
"Thanks, you guys..." Dawn smiled. "Maybe now I feel like jamming..."
"Okay if I start it?" Brock asked as he checked his tuning.
Dawn nodded, so Brock snapped to count off his companions into a rousing set that echoed out into the night...
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A knock at the door the next morning jolted Dawn from her sleep. "Hey, Dawn, you up?" she heard Zoey's voice say.
"What the...Zoey, what are you doing here?" Dawn asked as she got dressed.
After letting Zoey inside, the boys and Dawn noticed that Zoey was carrying a beautiful basket filled with chocolates, cookies, and other treats. "I heard about your crushing defeat yesterday. The other coordinators and I clubbed together to get you something to cheer you up."
"Really?" Dawn smiled. "Thank you...but, why did you not compete yesterday?"
"I passed on the Solaceon Contest after my loss in Hearthome because I wanted the chance to recharge. This way, I could focus on what was important, and get ready for the next challenge." Zoey explained. "At the end of the day, ribbons aren't that important."
She smiled. "And we all believe we will see you at the Grand Festival."
"I see..." Dawn mused. "After I lost yesterday, I wanted to give up. But after Satomi gave me some wise advice, and knowing all you are behind me, I'm not going to give up."
She explained. "I learned that I need to take the time to plan a strategy instead of rushing into the fray."
"That's the spirit!" Ash smiled.
"So I'm going to turn this defeat into a chance to learn." Dawn smiled. "Tell everyone I said thanks for the gift!"
"Anytime!" Zoey grinned. "So, where are you guys headed?"
"Our next stop is Veilstone City." Ash explained as the group turned to leave. "There, I hope to compete for my next Gym Badge!"
To Be Continued...
"Bye, Dawn!" Barry smiled as he prepared to leave Solaceon Town a few days later. "See you next Contest!"
Dawn did her best to fight back tears as she trudged down the road. "I...don't think I will attend the next one."
"What???" Barry gasped before his shocked expression turned angry. "Listen, Dawn--ever since I've known you, you've always said your dream was to equal your mom, or even surpass her. And you're going to quit? You're going to send that dream down the drain?"
He grimaced before continuing "Look--I'm not going to let you quit coordinating! Sure, it hurts to rack up a string of losses, but I believe you can surpass your mom, or maybe even be a Grand Coordinator!"
He grinned at Ash. "Keep working on Heat Wave, okay?"
"I will." Ash replied before spotting Dawn running off to the Pokemon Center. "Hey, Dawn!" he called before running after his companion.
"Let her go--all the close calls and chokes must've taken a blow to her morale." Brock assured Ash. "When she's ready to talk, she'll tell you. For now, give her her space."
---------
Oh, Dawn... Satomi began as she warped by her crying master. I did everything you told me to do...
"It was nothing you did or did not do." Dawn replied between sobs. "I've been overmatched in every contest! I mean, I know Mom didn't get to where she was overnight..."
And I'm sure she faced her share of struggles and troubles to reach where she is today. Satomi explained.
"But how can I bounce back from choking when it matters most?" Dawn asked as she wiped away more tears. "First the Alamos Contest, and now this!"
She looked down at the orange ribbon pinned to her bag. "Mom...I wish I could talk to you now..."
Well, as much as it hurts to lose, we can't progress if we continue the pity party. Satomi explained. Have you noticed how Ash seems to just bounce back from losing a Gym match?
"Yeah..." A smile formed on Dawn's face. "How does he do that?"
A loss may hurt in the heat of the moment. But Ash goes back and evaluates what went wrong, so he can do better the next time. Satomi explained. So let's go back and look at what happened today, see what went wrong, and how we can do better next time.
"But how?" Dawn asked.
I'm going to conjure a time loop of the day before and earlier today. This way, you can see the Contest from a neutral perspective. Satomi began. As you watch, notice how your decisions and others' decisions got us to this point.
With that, she formed a flash of light in the room, which counted down like a movie scene. "Oh, this is from yesterday!" Dawn remembered when the loop began.
On the "screen", Ash was attempting to train Diddy to use Heat Wave, while Barry looked on. "Diddy, use Heat Wave!" the Ash on the "screen" called.
"WHOA!!!" the Barry on the screen yelped as the wave of flames backfired, sending Diddy flying. "You have the formation down--we need to work on concentrating."
The Ash on the "screen" smiled at Diddy. "You're doing great so far--let's keep at this until you get it to form right."
"Wait, what was I doing at that time?" Dawn asked.
The "screen" panned over to another outdoor arena. You were going over Magical Leaf with me. Satomi explained. Her self on the screen unleashed a dazzling flowery rainbow, much to the Dawn on the "screen"s delight.
Some applause started the Dawn on the "screen" as Brock stepped into the scene. "That was cool!" he raved as the Dawn "onscreen" passed out Poffins for her four Pokemon.
"Thanks." Dawn heard her self on the "screen" say. "After I came up short in the Alamos Town Contest, I'm gonna stick to a single Pokemon unless you have to use two."
"That's a good idea." the Brock on the "screen" smiled. "Remember to vary your moves with each appeal so you don't bore the judges and the audience."
Pay attention to what Brock said next, and how you reacted to his statement. Satomi told Dawn.
"Eventually, Satomi will be able to Mega Evolve." the Brock on the screen went on.
Dawn watched as her self on the screen gained starry eyes. "That's right...I imagined you as a Mega Gardevoir creating appeals no one has ever seen before."
If you stop now, you wouldn't be able to see that any more. Satomi replied.
"But what about Marta?" Dawn asked. "I think that was another reason why I lost..."
Let's move on to the Contest itself, to the Appeal Competition. Satomi's time loop fast forwarded a little. You did very well in the previous competitions, so we will focus on what we did in the Appeal.
Dawn watched as her self in a cyan costume told Satomi to use Magical Leaf. Marta and Leona did so well because she used the strategy of chaining moves into combos. She also timed the combo to max out the excitement meter.
"Okay..." Dawn sighed as she watched one of the two times Leona excited the crowd with a Hone Claws and Shadow Claw combo. "So if I do continue, I should look into combos and keeping an eye on the excitement meter.
She sighed. "Thanks, Satomi--I feel a little better, but I still feel conflicted about what to do."
The fiddle case on a bench gave her an idea. Of course! Playing music helped calm me down when I was having a bad day, so let's see if it'll help here!
With that, she started a slow and quiet melody that evoked her conflicted emotions. The song appeared to convey both the sadness of losing; and the yearning and hope for the future. Satomi hovered nearby, watching the red-brown bow glide over the strings.
Dawn did not expect a whistle to trill over her last G note, followed by a few expectant G chords from a guitar. "Got room for a few more?" Brock asked as he and Ash arrived.
"Well, I guess..." A week smile formed on Dawn's face. "I wasn't expecting you guys to join me after what happened earlier."
"Remember the promise we made when we set out?" Ash began as he found a chair to sit in. "We promised we would stick together, no matter what."
"If you ever want to talk, we're here." Brock agreed. "Of course, any accomplishment you make, we'll celebrate with you too."
"Thanks, you guys..." Dawn smiled. "Maybe now I feel like jamming..."
"Okay if I start it?" Brock asked as he checked his tuning.
Dawn nodded, so Brock snapped to count off his companions into a rousing set that echoed out into the night...
---------
A knock at the door the next morning jolted Dawn from her sleep. "Hey, Dawn, you up?" she heard Zoey's voice say.
"What the...Zoey, what are you doing here?" Dawn asked as she got dressed.
After letting Zoey inside, the boys and Dawn noticed that Zoey was carrying a beautiful basket filled with chocolates, cookies, and other treats. "I heard about your crushing defeat yesterday. The other coordinators and I clubbed together to get you something to cheer you up."
"Really?" Dawn smiled. "Thank you...but, why did you not compete yesterday?"
"I passed on the Solaceon Contest after my loss in Hearthome because I wanted the chance to recharge. This way, I could focus on what was important, and get ready for the next challenge." Zoey explained. "At the end of the day, ribbons aren't that important."
She smiled. "And we all believe we will see you at the Grand Festival."
"I see..." Dawn mused. "After I lost yesterday, I wanted to give up. But after Satomi gave me some wise advice, and knowing all you are behind me, I'm not going to give up."
She explained. "I learned that I need to take the time to plan a strategy instead of rushing into the fray."
"That's the spirit!" Ash smiled.
"So I'm going to turn this defeat into a chance to learn." Dawn smiled. "Tell everyone I said thanks for the gift!"
"Anytime!" Zoey grinned. "So, where are you guys headed?"
"Our next stop is Veilstone City." Ash explained as the group turned to leave. "There, I hope to compete for my next Gym Badge!"
To Be Continued...